Dinesh and Savitri along with their six-year-old
son had come to South India on a vacation. They had been planning this visit
for a long time with Chennai as their last point. Both of them had not seen
Marina beach in their life. They had reserved one day in Chennai specially for
this purpose.
When they went early in the evening,
they were taken in by the bewitching beauty of Marina beach. The warmth of the
long stretch of sands, the view of the vast expanse of sea with its roaring
waves in the azure back ground and the accompanying cool breeze transported
them to heavenly joy. Both had wanted to stand in the water and enjoy the waves
lashing at their feet. But they had not envisaged the great problem that arose
from their son Varun.
Ever
since he came to the beach, he was cross and irritable. He was scared of the
sea with its vast expanse of water and its giant waves. He grumbled that he
cannot walk on the sand and complained of pain in the leg. He squatted on the
sand sobbing and imploring them not to go near the water. He was throwing up
all sorts of tantrums. Not all the cajoling and appeasing with candies, ice
cream, and pony ride would make him budge. He stood adamant refusing to move
and wailing at the top of his voice. He was afraid the water would swallow them.
The couple were at their wit’s end not knowing what to do. They didn’t want to
miss enjoying the beach having come this far but were also averse to make the
boy cry further.
It was then Varun saw one young boy of his
age with his shorts fully drenched in water returning with his dad from the sea
shore. He. came running straight towards Varun and surprisingly handed him over
the thread of the kite he was keeping afloat. Varun was elated at this
unexpected gesture and got immersed in keeping the kite afloat in the sky. He
stopped crying and was able to stabilize the kite with the help of his daddy.
All his petulance had vanished and he was walking with his parents towards the
water. There was no resistance as he was busy keeping the kite in position.
Dinesh and Savitri took turns to stand in the water with the waves breaking on
their legs, and drenching their clothes. It was an exhilarating and new
experience for them. The sun was still shining but they had to leave to catch
the night train to Delhi.
When they started walking back, with a
reluctant Varun behind them, towards the waiting car on the road, they saw another
young boy again of Varun’s age with his parents crying and refusing out of fear
to move towards the sea. He too, as Varun did, squatted on the sand, and wailed
hysterically with his parents looking helplessly.
Varun was amused. His parents smiled
remembering the antics of Varun a couple of hours before. They were surprised
when Varun walked towards the crying boy and handed over the thread of the kite
that was still floating up in the sky. The same metamorphosis from fear to joy
came about in the boy’s face with Varun walking proudly with his parents
towards the car.
(Written 11 years back,this story has not been read by most of my current followers)
Excellent post. Some kid gave the kite thread to Varun and he gave it to another kid. This is called pay-it-forward.
ReplyDeleteA very sweet story highlighting a child’s pure innocent joy. Does not take a lot to distract them or make them happy. Their fear , uncertainty are easily blown away by the breeze of curiosity and happiness. This is also why they are like wet clay and can be molded any way we want. God definitely resides in such innocence. Really enjoyed the story.
ReplyDeleteTop class. Loved the narration. Simple beautiful story.
ReplyDeleteA happy story
ReplyDeleteForwarding happiness from one to the other! Beautiful story, KP!
ReplyDeleteYet again a nice story. That innocence and hassle free sharing is great.
ReplyDeleteReally liked the way you have described how a child instinctively understand another child’s fears and how one natural innocent good deed led to another “pass it along” deed
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed it very much.
Very enjoyable read..an innocent story
ReplyDeleteGood deeds have ripple effects. The simple act done in a spontaneous gesture has a great impact on a child’s mind.The adults need not tutor their child or teach how to pay kindness forward. There is a Godly inane kindness in children. That is what this kite sharing is all about ! Beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteA nice warm story. Everything is infectious with children. If one child cries the rest will start off.well brought out.
ReplyDeleteLoved it KP! Thank you for the re sharing...
ReplyDeleteBeautifully narrated children's behaviour
ReplyDeleteSpreading joy from one to another. So beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you
Chitra Solomon
Beautiful and heart warming story. A young lad helped Varun overcome his fear of water. Youngsters are innocent, simple and ready to share. Varun had no reservation in passing on the kite strings to another lad. Varuna parents also deserve applause. They allowed the youngster his tantrums. They did not attempt to coerce him and drag him into the sea. The only tried gentle coaxing.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story! I was expecting an after-life or other spiritual type ending but this was even better!
ReplyDeleteI too expected the fear to be of some past life incident..
DeleteSuch a thoughtful metamorphosis. Nice read Sir!
ReplyDeleteLetting go of fear and passing on happiness.. lesson to be learnt here! Nice story, different from your other stories.
ReplyDeleteVasudha
Values are accumulated with experiences, children acquire faster than adults, nice one!
ReplyDeleteNice little story. It proves that children possess innocence. I like the story.
ReplyDeleteThe kite is the catalyst in overcoming of fear in the mind of Varun. The chemistry transmitted by a stranger boy was retransmitted by Varun to another boy who held a complex like himself based on his own experience.
ReplyDeleteThe inner ego, as you may agree, that Varun held, not to appear a cry boy,made him accept the offer of the thread from a peer boy.
At times even good parenting doesn't solve the problems of a complex mind of the child difficult to fathom .
Phew..glad that it was a nice sweet story with a happy ending for I had conjured up all sorts of twists and turns like Tsunami, mishaps, foreseeing danger, drowning, etc..
ReplyDeleteA short one albeit with a profound moral of sharing and caring..as seen through the eyes of young children
The story 'The magic of the kite’ is outstanding. The boy's fear of vastness of the sea is gone when he sees a fearless boy of his age so happy with his shorts drenched in sea water and holding the thread of a little kite In his hand.The same fearlessness, freedom and felicity found in the boy is transmitted from one boy to the other through the kite... What a beautiful image! A big message through a tiny tale.Thank you so much!
ReplyDeleteBijaylaxmi
Lovely story. I wish adults could learn this "pass on a good deed" attitude
ReplyDeleteGood to read
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story. I like it very much.
ReplyDeleteWoww..this one is brilliant. I wonder how its missed. Such an amazing plot. That is how kids are so innocent yet so thoughtful. Definitely its delivering such a strong message of spreading goodness around. Great read...
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