” Show me
a way out of this mess I am in. If I am freed of this burden of debts and the
onerous task of looking after the family, I promise to you sincerely that I
would renounce the world and be your devotee forever. Kindly show your compassion,
“he pleaded.
As there
was a jostling crowd in the morning, he chose a corner and sat with his eyes
closed to chant His name.1008 times keeping his shirt before him.
Many
devotees thought him to be a mendicant and dropped coins, notes and even
fruits. Engrossed in prayer, he did not notice this. It took a long time for
him and just when he completed the count, the temple bell tolled repeatedly and
loudly.as if to signify his prayer was answered.’
The young
man rose to jump in joy with his eyes closed unknowingly at the amused smiles
of the people at the young man jumping madly as if possessed. When he opened
his eyes and saw the small crowd around, he was highly embarrassed and bent to
pick his shirt. To his utter bewilderment, he saw the coins, currency notes,
fruits and surprisingly a lottery ticket too on and around the shirt. He hurriedly
picked them all and made a hasty exit.
He
thought someone had left an expired and useless lottery ticket. However, his
curiosity overcame his impulse to discard it and found the next day was the day
for the results. He was hopeful that Lord would not let him down but had not
much hope on the lottery ticket. He put his signature and address behind the
lottery ticket as a matter of abundant precaution.
The next
day when he went to the bazaar, he was thrilled to find the ticket had won him one
crore of rupees. All his problems seemed to vanish in a trice like snowflakes
before Sun. Lord Vinayaka in His infinite mercy had answered his prayers. He
quickly settled the debts, opened a small grocery store for his father and made
proper investments to get regular monthly income.
After a month his conscience pricked that his part
of the prayer remained to be fulfilled, when he saw in the bazaar young and
beautiful girls walking past him, the array of textile shops with display of
beautiful clothes and the bars and beer beckoning him. He had not gone to
temple except once after winning the lottery for elaborate puja and offerings.
Unable to
bear the guilt and remorse at his being a cheat, he bought himself an ochre
robe and gave away the pant and shirt to a beggar. He decided to move away from
family and the town., His mind was restless as he sat in the temple in his
yellow robes. Tears trickled from his eyes as he realized it was not easy to
take to Sanyas.It was a foolish promise made in haste but he cannot fail to
keep it. He was in a quandary not knowing how to get out of this tricky
situation that he had invited upon himself. His eyes were closed in deep
thought at his predicament.
It was
then he heard the voice,” Cut, pack up. The day’s shooting is over.”. The
garishly rich young man, smiled at the director and readied to get into the sleek
car as the door was opened by his chauffeur.
I did not expect this ending. Good one.
ReplyDeleteHmm...
ReplyDeleteThe end cheated the usual expected turn of a dream being disturbed! 😂😀
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Romba Chinna kadhai, yes, but a nice feel good one that brings on a smile automatically .
ReplyDeleteHa ha. Nice twist. Was reading and thought he would keep up his promise.
ReplyDeleteDifferent from your usual stories. A twist and now a turn. Surely the gene was unexpected.
ReplyDeleteUnexpected ending; good one!
ReplyDeleteVasudha
Totally unexpected ending..ghosh..never ever thought of such an ending..but good one it was...so creative pf you as usual and loved the first half which depicted how supreme power almighty has...:)
ReplyDeleteYour classic genre sir! Was missing it for long. So nice to have you back in the flow!
ReplyDeleteUnexpected end, was waiting for another miracle.
ReplyDeleteGreat twist - totally your signature style ending !!!! Super!
ReplyDeleteTake care, Periappa. Keep writing !
Chitra Solomon
Very nice, quite unexpected!
ReplyDeleteSrikanth
Very nice. Great unexpected turning in the end.
ReplyDeleteI didn't see this end coming:)
ReplyDeleteI was so carried away by the 1 crore prize money and my own inclination to become devout, that the end came and jolted me to 'reel time'!
ReplyDeleteThe master with the twist is back in this story and an outlandish ending that caught your avid readers on the wrong foot!!
Yes, 'twist in the tale' story teller is back! Enjoyed the story!
ReplyDeleteVery surprising end. I like it. I have a lottery joke. A guy in New York prayed to God for 2 years to help him win the lottery. He did not win. One day he got angry at God and started to use bad words against God. God appeared in front of him and told him: Son, I want to help you. But first buy a ticket. Otherwise I cannot help you.
ReplyDeleteAnother twist and another refreshing story!
ReplyDeleteI was going to say that worship is not a barter. But then I read the ending. :) Good one
ReplyDeleteI became thoughtful while he got 1 crore by a lottery ticket that this is not your way of writing and what is this going on but the end is of your style sir-once again Great
ReplyDeleteThoroughly enjoyed! Sir, how cleverly you brought out the callousness of the actor .To the actor, it was just another part played by him whereas we, readers, were in torment , wondering if there would be repercussions for failing to fulfill his promise to Lord Ganesha :-)) Ha..ha..,!!
ReplyDeleteSorry i am late, a very interesting story. While our mind Is debating what that person is going to do you have stunned us by giving an unexpected twist. Wonderful and applaudable
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist in the tale, Periappa. Just when I thought that the lottery ticket angle was a cliche, the true story teller in you have the story a great ending. Loved reading this
ReplyDeleteThough I didn't know what exactly the ending was, there was some unexpected thing going to happen!
ReplyDeleteClassic. Though many mentioned un excepted end but for me it is your signature style of twist.
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