It has been more than a fortnight
since the boy of eight years found himself in a tenement with a tall and big
man, dark in colour, yellow teeth and matted hair. He evoked fear when he
smiled but he did no harm. He provided him with food that seemed different and
unpalatable but he brought many fruits of different varieties. But his cries to
send him back to his place elicited a stony silence. When he asked where he
was, he signaled he would tell later but warned him never to stir out of the
dwelling. He was however kind often patting him and rubbing his chin and arms.
He could speak a little Hindi with a heavy accent of his language.
It was a week later, he heard one day
a lot of people playing drums and indescribable shouts and what seemed like
singing in hoarse voices till late in the night. Ranjit felt the smell of acrid
smoke and something burning accompanied by screams in pain and shouts of joy.
The boy shivered in fear and lay cuddled in the bed. The entire atmosphere was
eerie and there was no way of seeking the help of his parents. There was no
inkling of what his parents did to trace him. He always cried when the big man
was not around and dozed off to sleep.
When the man arrived later and the
drum beats became louder and the voices shriller, Ranjit asked what they were
all about. He spoke slowly, “Today is a festival day. There is a gathering to
sing and dance followed by an annual dinner where many animals would be roasted
as in barbeque. The entire village would rejoice, drink and dance and have
their dinner. A festival much looked forward,”
“I am scared to hear human voices and
our language amid the shouts. Are people from our parts there?” he asked
The heavily built man did not reply
but just showed his yellow teeth in what seemed to be a smile.
“Are you not going for dinner?” asked
Ranjit.
“No, I prefer to have a tasty homely
meal tonight. It is getting late. Go, have a bath and scrub well,” he said
softly.
Ouch..but perfect short story..Reader is left to imagine- asit ganguly
ReplyDeleteA cannibal twist 😛 Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteOh my God
ReplyDeleteAnother fine piece of fiction and such powerful thinking. Was indeed a good read and beyond imagination of course :)
ReplyDeleteOh no, Am I imagining things! Hope what I think is not true! God please save Ranjit!
ReplyDeleteSuperb weaving of the story! / padmaja
You are back with your usual twist and natural flow of writing ! YAY! Keep writing !
ReplyDeleteChitra
Another interesting twist.
ReplyDeleteOH my God! What an unexpected and horrifying twist. I wished you had gone on to save Ranjit but leaving his escape or doom to our imagination has a bigger impact to the narration. What an imagination!! Great plot! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
ReplyDeleteLeaving the imagination of the reader to dance about in the prospects :))
ReplyDeleteWow!
- Srini Raghavan
This story is entirely different to your other stories. Typical thriller. Scary too! Suspense till the last line then you have left it at that for our 'imagination', scary imagination. Well narrated story.
ReplyDeleteThe master story teller at work. This is a superb example of a script that taps the entire gamut of human feelings effortlessly. The fearful will have nightmares. The soft hearted will cry. The outraged will demand nothing less than bloody retribution in their imagined horror. Ufff... What skill!
ReplyDeleteA good one yet again. Love the twist, keep writing, Master weaver at one of his best.
ReplyDeleteOooooooo.... MG!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic short story, creepy and scary too. I read the story twice to try and convince myself that you weren't hinting at what I thought you were!! Poor Ranjit....
ReplyDeleteExcellent. Readers left to imagine. Eerie.interesting.
ReplyDeleteMorbid!!
ReplyDeleteGreat story. Only the dialogs and situation described. And ending not given. Good one.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteMacabre!!!
ReplyDeleteMacabre! Oh my God! Another story on the grit and grime of this world 😢😢😢
ReplyDeleteSrikanth
Too short a story! Waaa......😊
ReplyDeleteA gripping open ended story where so much is left to readers ' imagination
ReplyDeleteKept the negativities aside and imagined an ending like the man was the boy's true father/ grandfather but not able to stake a claim ( this is how far I can go)and had nothing to do with the macabre and horrifying acts
ReplyDeleteoutside! Would love to read your designed plot with a climax that has many twists and turns as your stories:)
Oof!! Interesting read! Unexpected storyline that keeps one’s imagination active!
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