Meena had overslept after seeing
Indian Idol late in the night and it was past 7am when she woke up. Her husband
Nataraj would be leaving for the office by 8.15am and breakfast should be ready.
Milk was not yet delivered. She took the only packet available from the fridge
and boiled it for making coffee. It curdled to her dismay. The maid had
abstained the previous evening and was yet to come. The vessels were in the
sink unwashed. To add to the misery the power went off suddenly. The day had
not begun well for Meena. She was fretting and fuming at Kavitha, her maid, for
playing truant repeatedly and decided to tell her to stop coming if she cannot
be regular.
Her daughter Trisha and son
Kartik were still sleeping blissfully being holidays. Her husband was busy with
his mobile opposite the TV and asking Meena now and then for coffee, his
specs or his diary. The last straw was when the gas was over in the cylinder
needing replacement. She started shouting “I am not a slave in this house to
slog while others enjoy sleeping or watching TV. My parents have not sent me
here as an unpaid servant. I am not making any breakfast. Let them order from
Saravana Bhavan or anywhere if they need to eat.”
Nataraj shouted “Meena, talk gently.
Don’t you see I am on the phone? Someone is ringing the doorbell. Please answer and
keep ready the flowers for the puja.”
“I am on strike today. You can do
your things without my help. I am not the only one in the house to answer the bell.
Ask your children to get up and do the needful. I am having severe headache and
I am going to lie down. If Kavita does not come, let them order food from
caterers” she replied
Nataraj left for the office in a huff
without taking breakfast. The children woke up in the noise but were afraid to
come near their mom. It was around 9.30 am when Kavita made her appearance
along with a sob story that her husband took ill suddenly and had to be taken
to hospital. When she saw Meena buying her story, she requested Meena to
advance her Rs.1000 towards medical expenses. Meena flatly refused saying that
she had more than two months’ salary as advance already.
Kartik was telling his sister that he needed Rs. 1000 for a
treat at Pizza Hut and that he had promised his friends lunch for being a
topper in the class. He sought her help as he was afraid to broach the subject to mom in
her present foul mood.
When Meena started
shouting at the two for being lazy and late in rising from bed, Trisha thought
it prudent not to talk about the money Kartik needed. Meena, being a good-natured
person, could not deny the advance the maid had wanted. She kept Rs. 1000 on the
dining table to be given to Kavita after she had finished the work. She went to
rest after asking the local caterer to send food for lunch.
Kavita finished her work quickly and left in an angry mood that her request for advance was turned down. Trisha was not aware that money was kept on the dining table to be given to Kavita.
When Trisha was taking bath, Kartik found Rs. 1000 on the table and thinking it
was kept for him he pocketed it and was thankful to Trisha for getting it from
mom.
When Kavita came in the afternoon
and pleaded with Meena again for the advance, she shouted at her, “How dare you
ask me again after taking Rs.1000 kept for you on the dining table in the morning?
What do you think we are? A tree raining money?”
“What Rs.1000, amma? What are you
talking about? I have not taken any money,” she replied
“Trisha, where is the money I had
kept on the table for Kavita? “asked Meena
“How would I know? You never told
me of any money kept on the table. Ask your son?” she retorted.
The bell rang then. Kartik entered the hall laughing along with his friends
after a hearty lunch consisting of ubiquitous Bruschetta, a veggie Pizza with a
healthy mix of mushrooms, red onions, bell peppers, black olives, tomatoes and spinach,
along with coke. He was surprised to see the angry face of his mom and the
quizzical smile on his sister’s face. He asked her innocently,”Wassup?”
oblivious of the storm to follow.
A good story which brings out the value of money. What could have bettered a life was frivolously spent on pizza.
ReplyDeleteA thought provoking story. Medical expenses vs pizza - necessity vs luxury
ReplyDelete…. Chitra
The story wonderfully captures the happenings in many households... Human emotions at the centre of things.
ReplyDeleteThis is the story of every ‘martyr ‘ mom in the family:-))
ReplyDeleteCaptures the middle class daily family strife and emotions too well.
ReplyDeleteRamya Krishnan
I would blame Meena of course, if she had announced that she kept the money on the table for Kavita, her son not aware of the intention took it mistakenly. Communication gap that was to be blamed , has your readers label kartik for not knowing the value of money!
ReplyDeleteNice one!We all have had at least a couple of those days where everything seems to go wrong!
ReplyDeleteHahahaha, this was fun!! - Rashmi
ReplyDeleteNobody can be blamed in this story because all were correct in their positions. Big communication gap. The story tells that Use of money for each person is different. Better be careful next time .Ramachandran.
ReplyDeleteAnger leaves no scope for reasoning and proper sharing of information. Better we learn to control anger and mind.
ReplyDeleteTragedy of errors, but not so serious, so if I had a word between comedy and tragedy I would have used that.
ReplyDeleteI felt I was watching a scene at our own home. Everybody lives in their own world. They just don't take time to atleast peep into others' lives. Compassion for others is nil. Hmmm.....Heavy heart now. Very well narrated, KP
ReplyDeleteWell described… lack of communication is the issue here like often in most cases! Well.., the way you have described pizza… am hungry and I need one NOW!!!😄
ReplyDeleteSindhu
A neat story to describe what would happen when destiny is at play! If things have to go wrong, they would! As routine and regular things started going wrong, right when the day had begun for Meena, she could not but get into the 'wrong mood'. When Meena had got into the wrong mood, she would not be her normal self and would miss out conveying pieces of information that were vital. When the underlying information on the way to be utilised was missing, the money though earmarked for a specific use, could not but end up getting spent on a different use altogether! Amen!
ReplyDeleteIt was a bad day for the family.
ReplyDeleteBut a better and jolly day will come soon.
Thoughtful story of a middle class family
ReplyDeleteReading the story, I could actually imagine my mom doing the same and my brother asking me to get some money from her. Can totally relate to the idea :P
ReplyDeleteTotally relatable story. Love how you have portrayed the whole situation.
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