Sushil had beer almost daily in the evenings after office hours with his friends at the local restaurant. They occupied the same corner table and shared the bill equally. For the last fortnight, It was the same waitress who served them daily. Her large blue eyes, smiling face and swaying hips did something to Sushil that can hardly be explained and he knew he was in love with her. He tried many times to pick some conversation with her but she never spoke one unnecessary word with him though courteous. There was a certain professionalism in her that forbade any overtures to her from him. Sushil was not defeated and his visits continued hoping someday she would relent.
He could not sleep the whole night and was tossing on
his bed thinking about her and her secret wink.
He fantasized about what if she were unmarried and looking for a male
friend. He expected that she would respond favourably if he approached her
tactfully as he was well employed, good looking and free from any encumbrance.
He decided to pursue the matter by visiting the restaurant alone.
The next evening, he left the office early, dressed
himself well with a liberal spray of cologne and was at the usual table sharp
by 4 pm. The hall was almost empty as it was a bit early. He was eagerly waiting
for her to appear. There was no sign of her for nearly 15 minutes when another
young lady came to take orders.
Disappointed,
he kept quiet for a while but summoned the courage to ask,” Where is the other
lady who usually served this table? I was expecting her here."
“Are you asking about Sushri? She has just come. I
will send her presently if you are very particular about her,” she said with a
mischievous smile.
"Not like that. Please send her if you do not
mind. She has been very professional, well-mannered and served us well when I
was with my friends here last evening. Just wanted to thank her."
It took some time before he heard a voice from behind,
"Good evening, Sir, I am Sushri. My colleague told me that you wanted me
specifically to thank me for serving you yesterday. Yes, I remember your kind gesture
yesterday and wish to thank you myself. What would you like to have?" she
said as she got ready with the small notebook for his order.
"I wanted to thank you not only for the very good
service you always render but also for your sweet acknowledgement when I
procured the fallen napkin. I was thinking about that last night and wished to
meet you today," Sushil said.
“What sweet acknowledgement you are referring to?” she
asked with surprise.
“I saw the faint twinkle yesterday at the corner of
your left eye when I gave you the fallen napkin," he said.
"Oh, no, It could be an involuntary twitch of the
muscle that happens once or twice a month. What did you take it for, a wink or
what? goodness gracious" she asked.
“Yes, I took it for a subtle wink and wished to talk to you,”
he replied greatly disappointed.
“Gosh!, I am sorry, I get this involuntary twitch
of the eye muscle once or twice a fortnight. Please do not mind. I will come
presently with your order,” she left
As he was sitting morose, she came with a tray in her
hand and said as she placed it on the table, “Here is what you wished for. I hope
it pleases you,’ she said with a smile when Sushil saw the faint wink again for a tad longer in her
eyes.
Sushil sat bemused thinking whether it was a twitch or a real wink hoodwinking him saying it was involuntary even as she went inside
giggling all the way.
Wink is nothing but a voluntary twitch! Second chances are rare!!
ReplyDeleteJanardhan
The difference between a wink and a twitch is the difference between romance and reality (JJ)
ReplyDeleteTwitch in the eye to the same guy twice? She may be a teaser or a F Bxxch. I have seen personally in my life.
ReplyDeleteIt's just good fun. No need to get abusive, please🙏
DeleteSrikanth
Are you the blog moderator? If there is a problem let the writer of this post take action.
DeleteWonderful, conclusion left to readers' imagination. Twitch is involuntary, while wink is voluntary. Either she genuinely has a twitching problem or pulling a fast one on Sushil. Albeit, sushi totally flustered.
ReplyDeleteA story with a subtle romantic note. Or was it a story with a subtle reality ? ( involuntary twitch ) He should ask her next time 😀.
ReplyDeleteChitra
Yes, when the heart rules, reality takes a back seat.
ReplyDeleteStory exposes the limitations of Beer, story would have been different with other drinks.
ReplyDeleteThe mind always sees what it wishes to😉
ReplyDeleteI was just thinking about the comic Bollywood scene in many films about the twitch or tic being mistaken for a wink, and that’s what happened here too!Nice lighthearted story.
ReplyDeleteNice, fun story! Perhaps she did and perhaps she didn't? 😂
ReplyDeleteSrikanth
She seems to be teasing him! She sees so many men everyday! All sorts of men. This man should realise it. But nice story, Kp.....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteNice, light-hearted story
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ReplyDeleteNice and Simple narrative. Enjoyed the story.
DeleteIt is good to see you continuing your blog. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteLife is all about taking a chance, he could have asked her out for a date, point-blank, that's all, instead of worrying so much. Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteWas 'unpardonably amused' at the classic confusion of the 'incorrigibly romantic' soul as to whether it had really been a signal from the 'professionally pucca' waitress or not!
ReplyDeleteStory is really good. It gives scope to readers to think. It is humorous too.
ReplyDeleteNow I need to ask you this question. Was it in Trinkas, Kolkata? :-)
ReplyDeleteGood story. Made me remember many such incidents in my life, though I am a near teetotaler! :-)
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Captivating and heartwarming! Your beautifully crafted words painted a vivid picture of blooming romance or is it..the next twist of a booming baritone of her hisband who happens to be the owner of the restobar!
ReplyDeleteWhat happens next?
ReplyDeleteMore winks to follow ;) ;)
Nice romantic story
ReplyDeleteSmart lady, keeps the hero of the story and the the readers guessing!
ReplyDelete-CHINNARAJ
Light hearted story. The end is left to the reader’s imagination. When we have a hectic day, these kind of stories make you feel light. Your language is so good. Professional touch!!! Keep rocking. Ranjani Murali
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