It was then the passengers heard a commotion. A
man in his early forties, in a white shirt and pyjama, caught hold of a young
man in blue jeans and a red coloured t-shirt by his collar and told him angrily
pointing to another passenger, “I saw you picked his pocket. Hand over the
wallet to him right now.”
The young man instantly whisked
out a small knife and tried to slash the older man who held his collar. The
agile man gave him a whack on his hand and the knife fell on the floor.
The good Samaritan laughed aloud
telling “Don’t ever try your tricks on me. I have seen many like you.”
With the purse retrieved, the
passenger who had lost it was profuse in thanking the brave benefactor. A
couple of other passengers tied the hands of the pickpocket and waited for the
train to stop at the next station. Everyone was in awe of the man as the
passengers usually do not intervene in the activities of pickpockets who travel
in groups and who do not hesitate to harm people when caught. The pickpocket
was pushed out by the irate passengers when the train stopped at the next station.
New passengers both men and women surged in blocking the space at the entrance.
But our good man who stayed on in the train moved towards the exit gate.
As the train was proceeding
fast, there was a shrill scream from a young woman caught in the crowd at the
entrance. When people turned towards her, she accused a middle-aged bald man in
his fifties of having groped her at improper places taking advantage of the
crowd and proximity. Our hero who was nearby pounced on the rogue and beat him
hard. The other passengers too joined in what turned out to be a free-for-all
all in meting out instant justice. The culprit was bound with his hands behind and
was pushed out of the train at the next station to hand over to the police by
other passengers who alighted.
While our hero was surveying
triumphantly, the admiring crowd that surrounded him, four men in white uniforms
who had boarded the compartment at the other entrance was seen approaching the
hero of the day. One of the uniformed guys shouted.” Here is our quarry. Come
quick and block the gate before he does something rashly.”
Our hero who saw them turned
pale and tried to move away towards the other gate. One passenger who was a
witness to all the happenings since the catching of the pickpocket accosted the
men in uniform and said,” You seem to be going after the wrong man. This gentleman has in a few minutes helped nab a pickpocket and an eve-teasing rogue.”
“We know, sir. He is our man and
we have absolutely no doubt. He escaped while we were taking him along with
others from the asylum to the hospital. He believes he is an inspector of
police.”
The man started crying when the
uniformed men took him in their custody bringing home the truth that such bravery,
he displayed for public causes comes only when one is insane. The passengers felt
really sad for the man’s plight even as he was dragged away.
Interesting story. Another feather to your cap
ReplyDeleteFun and exciting story to read! Loved it!.
ReplyDeleteThese days, at times , the good and kind people are seen as the crazy and naive ones. Bitter truth reflected in the story. Nice
ReplyDeleteChitra
Nice story. The last line drives a truth that brings out the seriousness in an otherwise funny story. The feeling that someone has to be insane to exhibit bravery or hep someone is indeed sad but true. Good thing is though crazy our hero did help catch the pickpocket and helped the young woman. He may be crazy to the world but seems more aware than the sane! Nicely written!
ReplyDeleteMaybe we do need a certain insanity of mind to give us purity in thought and action, as displayed by the unusually good Samaritan
ReplyDeleteExcellent story. I personally know of a person. He failed the police exam. He was so devastated, he became a paithiyam (mentally ill) in Tamil Nadu. He would go to the street and control the traffic. Many thought he was an off duty police officer.
ReplyDeleteSome form of lunacy is unpreventable; the natural outcome of caring for people and things over which we have no control…Nicely articulated as a story. Janardhan
ReplyDeleteYet again an interesting story. Loved the way you have narrated. So true is this .... " bringing home the truth that such bravery, he displayed for public causes comes only when one is insane." Typically people are least concerned with happenings around them.
ReplyDeleteGood story।he showed bravery but he seems to be insane
ReplyDeleteStory tells that to do something different a person has to have some straight which ordinary selfish people don't have.
ReplyDeleteNice story sir
ReplyDeleteHard truth of the day reflected in a captivating short story !
ReplyDeleteInteresting story.thanks.ramakrishnan.a.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant twist - unfortunate story of our times - the sane refuse to intervene - lost in their smartphones, the insane try to do good, and get captured and put in chains in an asylum. Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteWow. Didn't see that coming. Liked the twist. Good read :)
ReplyDeleteFeel sorry for the man. Without knowing the danger of nabbing the pickpocket when everybody knows that he might harm us, this man nabbed him. Hope he serves his term and comes out as a good man.
ReplyDeleteA very interesting story indeed. These days anybody standing up against such nefarious acts would be considered insane only! KP, you have a way tell simple truths in a captivating way. Atin Biswas
ReplyDeleteAs usual there is a different twist to the tale! I like the way you keep the readers guessing !
ReplyDeleteThe surprising twist at the end lifted the apparently regular story, out of ordinary.
ReplyDeleteGood one!
ReplyDeleteWow, that IS a story. Liked the twist. Thank you for sharing!👍
ReplyDeleteHemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Kurasawa rightly said “In a mad world, only the mad are sane. Fine story telling! (JJ)
ReplyDeleteKP sir, indirectly you are taking a dig, not at the conscientious mad man but at the zillion indifferent commuters, I feel!!
ReplyDeleteAll good samaritans are insane, for they are at the recieving end..Happens commonly in society
ReplyDeleteMakes one wonder.... Just because the so called insane man thinks he is an inspector of police, does that justify putting him in an asylum? After he behaves quite sanely and humanely in the face of a crime.
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you have portrayed the sad truth of the times. Only crazy people risk their lives to help others, while knowing they could be harmed. Only here, the hero is truly insane! An enjoyable read.
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