It was a great surprise for Ashwin to run into Vinay, his school buddy,
after nearly a decade at a marketing conference in Bangalore. They had studied
together for six years in Chennai and were close friends, but Vinay moved to
another city after school while Ashwin remained in Chennai. Over time, they
lost touch, but fate brought them together again. The morning session of the
conference had just ended, and as they broke for lunch, Ashwin and Vinay sat at
a corner table to catch up.
“Hey Ashwin, you haven’t changed much but look a little chubbier!”
Vinay chuckled. “You were always the ‘fat boy.’ But seriously, you look great
and cheerful. You must be happily married with kids by now. I see from your
card that you’re in a good position. Tell me what’s been going on since we last
saw each other.”
Ashwin smiled. “Yes, by God’s grace, life’s been good. I have a
wonderful wife, two kids—a boy and a girl—a stable job, and an apartment. Life
is smooth. My parents are still in the village. You probably know I did my MTech.
But enough about me—you were always the smarter one! Now, it’s your turn.
What’s been happening with you?” he said, laughing.
“Don’t flatter me!” Vinay replied. “I did my management diploma at IIM
and landed a good position with a fat salary. I’m based in Mumbai but travel a
lot for work. My parents are here in Bangalore. There’s not much else to
say—life has become somewhat routine.”
“You haven’t mentioned your family,” Ashwin said, leaning forward.
“What’s your wife doing? How many kids do you have? You travel often, so you
must visit next time you’re in Chennai.”
Vinay’s face suddenly changed, his smile fading. “No, I’m not married,”
he said quietly.
Ashwin was surprised. “What? You’re around 33 or 34, right? Is there any
particular reason you’re still single? If I remember correctly, you only had
one elder brother.”
“That’s a long story,” Vinay replied with a sigh. “When’s your flight?
Do you have some time?”
“Of course, I drove here, so I can spare a couple of hours,” Ashwin
said, curious. “Tell me, why are you still single? Is there someone in your
life?”
“It’s noisy here. Let’s move to the garden. It’ll be quieter,” Vinay
suggested.
They found a quiet spot outside with two bottles of beer. After taking
a few sips, Vinay began slowly.
“Ashwin, I’m pretty unlucky when it comes to love. I was in love with a
girl in college in Mumbai. She was brilliant—top of the class—and we had this
healthy competition to outdo the other. She was well-mannered, and I adored
her. She loved me too, but she always kept clear boundaries. We planned to
marry once we were settled in our careers.” He paused and rolled up his sleeve
to reveal a tattoo of the letter "V" in black ink.
“Her name also started with V, like mine. We both got these tattoos as
part of a promise to wait for each other. She was hesitant at first, worried
about raising questions, so she got a tiny ‘V’ tattooed on the back of her
calf. It’s so small it could pass off as a mole unless you looked closely.”
“That’s sweet and romantic,” Ashwin said, intrigued. “But what
happened? Why didn’t you two marry?”
Vinay sighed deeply. “Be patient, I’m getting there. After two years,
she told her parents about us, and her father hit the roof. He couldn’t accept
someone from a different caste. She tried everything—pleading, crying—but her
father wouldn’t budge. I suggested she leave home, but she refused. She didn’t
want to marry against her parents’ wishes. She asked me to forgive her and
released me from our promise.”
Ashwin was silent momentarily, then asked softly, “What happened to
her? Do you still keep in touch?”
Vinay shook his head. “No, that was the last time we spoke. She cut off
all contact and begged me not to contact her. I’ll never forget her tear-filled
face as she walked away. Later, I heard from a mutual friend that she had
married someone her parents approved of.”
Ashwin frowned. “That’s unlucky, Vinay. She should have courageously
walked away, but some people can’t. Still, there’s no point dwelling on it now.
She’s probably moved on. You should too—you need to find someone.”
After returning to Chennai, Ashwin soon got caught up in his routine
and Vinay’s story slipped from his mind. One weekend, he and his wife
Visalakshi went to Mahabalipuram, walking along the beach and visiting the
local sites. It was an exhausting but enjoyable day.
Later that night, as they lay in bed, Visalakshi winced and said,
“Ashwin, my legs—especially my calf muscles—are really aching. Could you
massage the calf muscle and apply Iodex balm? It’s unbearable.”
“Of course, my dear,” Ashwin said, reaching for the spray. As he lifted
her nightgown and started massaging, his hand lingered for a moment longer when
he noticed a tiny tattoo—a letter "V"—on the back and top of her
calf, as she lay with her eyes closed.
Mmmm. She is happily married now. Hopefully , Ashwin will convince Vinay to get married to move on with his life
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This time around, I started guessing about the end and I did succeed! You could write a series of short stories as a continuation of the lives of Ashwin and Vijay! Just a crazy thought to have your wonderful storytelling coming along!
ReplyDeleteOh ho...Hope he doesn't give importance to it and carry on with his life. The girl had kept her boundaries should be remembered. Why spoil a happy life? Yes, I know that it is not easy to forget the story....Hmmm....well narrated story....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteThis story is so well-written! I love how it brings out the emotions and connects the past and the present. The ending was handled beautifully and is really touching, with focus on closure and understanding hopefully. It leaves you feeling both sad and hopeful at the same time. Very nice story!
ReplyDeleteOh! When did you notice that what had once been steady was now shaky ground? Did you look down to see if your own knees were trembling?
ReplyDeleteJanardhan N
Imagining what will happen to thick friends Ashwin and Vinay once
ReplyDeletethey had a chance meeting with Visalakshi ! Enjoyable narrative.
I knew it. I knew it. I knew it. HaHaHa. Nice story.
ReplyDeleteQue sera sera!
ReplyDeleteInteresting. In life such unexpected twists and turns happen. One has to deal with it dispassionately. Nice story. PKR
ReplyDeleteRama Sampath Kumar: Nice and as usual well written. Half way through could sort of guess the end… maybe by now got used to the flow of your thoughts! Turning to the story what a shock it must have been for Ashwin Life is such it many a time brings in many a surprise : every family has its own secrets which however much they try to hide , comes out in the open sometime or the other..
ReplyDeleteUpon re-reading the story, I perceive the ending as more conclusive than it initially appears. The scene where Vishalakshi comfortably asks Ashwin to massage her calf muscle indicates a deep bond and mutual trust between them. This suggests that, despite any apparent ambiguity, their relationship is strong and resilient. The ending is handled with finesse.
ReplyDeleteAs always beautifully narrated. Now that Ashwin put two& two together, curious to know his next course of action.
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist .
ReplyDeleteNeat narration. But I guessed the flow at the tattoo 😅
ReplyDeleteThank you Manimekala
DeleteVisalakshi had accompanied Ashwin and was away shopping when Ashwin and Vinay had their conversation. On returning from shopping to join Ashwin,she kept herself out of their visible range but could overhear their chat. After returning to Chennai ,she wanted to test Ashwin, she put on an act of calf pain having applied an indelible ink as tattoo. Ashwin though shocked didnot show any emotion as the ink had dried off due to application of pain balm. Vaisalakshi ruse flopped!
ReplyDeleteGuessed the ending, but a nice story nevertheless!
ReplyDeleteOh no, not from you, so predictable!
ReplyDeleteSmooth story telling though!
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
An emotionally layered story! It raises so many questions about the choices people make, the weight of societal pressures, and the small coincidences that can bind lives together in unexpected ways, is it not?
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Surprised that Ashwin didn't guess that earlier :) Good read, predictable though.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story.
ReplyDeleteI guessed the girl was now his friend's wife :)
I expected the twist, but it was still narrated in a very interesting way. your storytelling kept me engaged, and the unexpected turns added depth to the plot. It was a delightful experience that made me think twice about my assumptions!- Chinnaraj
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