Tuesday, April 8, 2025

Echoes of Love in a Hypnotic Trance (1260 words)

(An old and interesting story many might  have missed)

The only problem with Bhaskar is his inferiority complex. A highly qualified and ​w​ell-employed guy, he had everything a young man would aspire for. He had a ​very charming wife, a nice apartment in ​a relatively posh area and a couple of good cars. Tall and with ​a good physique​e, he would have passed off as a handsome guy but for his big ​​beak-like curved nose that stood out ​prominently in the otherwise good features like ​​w​ell-aligned teeth, twinkling eyes, broad forehead and curly hair. The nose acted as a blot attracting unwelcome att​ention. Since his young age, he had the habit of covering his nose on some pretext with his palm or averting others' gaze by turning his face sideward

Bhanu, his wife​, who worked in a foreign bank, was bubbly and ​an extrovert by nature. She had many friends and ​was fond of social gatherings and parties. She would insist that Bhaskar accompany her but he mostly found some excuse to stay away. On a few occasions​, he had gone, and she would be swarmed by both men and womenfolk, attracted by her intelligent conversation, genial nature, and witty banter. She would invariably introduce Bhaskar to one and all. There would be an uncomfortable silence for a short while before the noisy conversations resumed. Bhaskar hardly missed the amused look on their faces and Bhanu’s feeble attempt to suppress her embarrassment. Some of them would continue talking to him in an affable manner but most would slowly move away.

One night, when they were lying in bed watching TV, Bhanu said, "Bhaskar, if you promise not to mistake me, I wish to tell you about the conversation I had with Kausalya this afternoon.”

“Why this prelude? Spill it out​,” he replied

“I don’t care what others think​, but I love you from the bottom of my heart. You are a blessing and ​a gift to me​,” she said.

“You were talking about Kausalya. What is this then?”

“Okay, she was telling me about her cousin’s husband who had got his nose rearranged like the Tamil actress. It seems the deformity has gone​, and he looks different and looking very much better”

“Oh, you consider this as deformity. I never knew that you harboured such a feeling. For your information​, I ​h​ave already checked with some top cosmetologists and ENT specialists. I was advised to leave it as it is as the outcome of surgery may not always be satisfactory​, especially in my case. I thought you never minded it as you had seen me before agreeing to marry me. This seems to bother you now, is it?”

“Oh my god!! That is why I asked you beforehand to promise me. I should not have spoken on the subject. Your nose does not bother me. I like you for what you are but ​I thought if there is a way to make it straight​, why miss it. I will not talk on this subject anymore.”

“You have said what all you wanted to ​t​ell.​ I know I am an embarrassment to you in your circle. That is precisely why I avoided coming with you. If you so wish, you can find a ​b​etter-looking man for you. I will not stand in your way​,” he spoke in anger and stomped out of the room. He did not return but slept on the couch in the living room with the TV on. She came down after ​s​ome time, pleaded with him ​t​o forgive her and finally took him with her.

Ever since his complex made him see unintended messages in her every action, he became quieter and kept farther than usual. She attended fewer parties and was closeted before TV. The usual gaiety was missing in the house. It was a stultifying and humdrum life.

One Sunday after lunch, she sauntered across the hall to the French window and was seen watching outside intently with her eyes wide open. Bhaskar​, curious​, went behind her and saw a green parrot sitting on the branch of a tree and pecking at something. She turned to him and asked innocently​, “Isn’t it beautiful?”

His face became red thinking she was taunting him​, and ​he left the house without replying. He was seething in anger, thinking that she disliked him and possibly her heart had turned towards someone else. He could see ​that these days, she had become cold towards him and rarely talked, unaware that he was the one who had distanced himself from her He started suspecting and began to eavesdrop her phone conversations. When she was not around, he saw the calls she had received and made. He even stalked her ​a couple of times.

It was then he saw an advertisement in a magazine. It read, ‘Learn Hypnotism in 15 days. You can unravel the inner thoughts of the person you love. You can hear firsthand what is on her/his mind. You can use it to influence too the way you want.’

Bhaskar knew this is ​a harmless but sure way of finding out the truth without involving outsiders. The man who was to teach ​him cautioned him that hypnotism worked best where the subject has trust and confidence and not in hostile situations. Bhaskar joined the class. He changed himself to appear loving. He cajoled her to return to her happy mood, took her out to films, had dinners at restaurants, and showed his affection in many other ways. Things became normal​, and happiness seemed to return.

After a month​, one Sunday afternoon, Bhaskar said in a jocular tone​, “I am going to hypnotize you for fun. Are you ready to subject yourself?”

“Why not? I never knew you were a hypnotizer. Where did you learn? What should I do? Why don’t you ask questions directly?” she asked

“No, I will induce you to sleep and ask questions that you would respond from your subconscious mind. Are you willing? I learnt it long back”

“Yes, I have nothing to hide from you”

“Okay, lie down and relax all your limbs and body.​ Look at my eyes as I count one to ten. By then you will fall into slumber, deep slumber, sleep and deep sleep. I will ask questions thereafter”

“Hmm”

“1…2…3….4…5…6…7…8…9…10…11…12….13…14…15”

“Bhanu, Bhanu do you hear me? You are asleep but ​your subconscious is awake. Answer me, Bhanu”

There were some unintelligible guttural sounds.

“Bhanu, do you hear me?”

“Yes” she said in ​a feeble voice

“Good, ​​can you hear clearly what I say?”

“Yes”

“Tell me, do you love anyone?”

“Yes, I love a handsome man”

Shocked Bhaskar asked​, “How long have you been loving him?”

“For ​the last three years”

“Does his company make you happy?”

“Very much, he keeps me very happy”

“Can you describe him?”

“Tall, strong, muscular and handsome”

“Any distinguishing mark about him?”

“Nothing”

“What is his name?”

“You can call him,​ Surya, Aditya, Ravi​.”

Shocked again “Tell me what his particular name is?”

“Bhaskar, my husband”, she said and suddenly sat up on the couch and asked in a bewildered tone “Hey, why​ am I lying here on the couch​? What are you doing? Did I sleep off or what?”

He smiled happily and hugged her​, showering kisses.”​ You were under hypnosis for a short while​,”​ he said

“Did I blabber anything?”

“Nothing except professing your deep love for me”

She jumped and embraced him without telling him that she was feigning all the while and that she never was lulled into sleep and that whoever taught him hypnotism was a fake.

 

26 comments:

  1. Yet another beautiful story. Loved the narration. You have well portrayed- the typical reaction of people and their ways, Bhaskar's suspicion and most importantly Bhanu's attitude and her thinking. Glad Bhanu got it right.

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  2. hahaha.. thats one smart woman. she definitely deserves someone better than that insecure loser

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  3. A smart woman who knew how to handle his insecurities. A refreshing story in todays scenario

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  4. Trust you! I guessed it that much!😃
    Thank you for sharing.

    Best wishes and warm regards
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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  5. A sweet story this time, cute to reminisce and visualize. It's light hearted and fast paced. The takeaways are deep, as usual though! Doubt is as much a seed of discord, as trust is to love. So nicely portrayed! Brilliant!

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  6. Very entertaining story with a few twists and turns. Well done, sir!
    Deepak

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  7. Enjoyable and all too real (JJ)

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  8. Felt happy with the happy ending but there will be a black do in their relationship...Do you think she will for get this attitude of her husband? I don't think so...Narration was too good!....Sandhya

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  9. Good story. Ramakrishnan.

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  10. What a lovely story with a clever twist at the end! Bhanu totally outsmarted him, but only because she loves him. In the end, his insecurity never stood a chance! Everything is fair in love and war!

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  11. A strong relationship is always built on trust. It would certainly leave a bitter taste in the mouth of Bhanu, that he not only has an inferiority complex but also no trust in her. As Sandhya has pointed out above, there will always be a black spot in their relationship. -Thangam

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  12. Trust is important in relationships because it allows you to be more open and giving. You are more likely to be forgiving of their shortcomings or behaviors that irritate you because overall you believe in them and know they have your back. Bhanu successfully practiced it and keep the relationship successful.

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  13. Nice story, refreshingly different. Smart girl, managed the situation without making things ugly!

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  14. Quite a common tickler of imagined doubt rocking the marriage boat. Men are more prone than women in this unfounded suspicion. As a story ,it ended on a happy note proving Bhanu outwitting Bhaskar

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  15. Beautiful story. I read and enjoyed with interest.🙏

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  16. Must congratulate the author for an outstandingly interesting story that beautifully sketched out the thought process of the two main characters.

    To me, the author painted Bhaskar as a regular individual, otherwise obsessed and perturbed by the hooked nose of his so much that he even failed to read the genuine love that his wife Bhanu had for him! Instead of being able to realise about his own faultline and going to a counsellor for advice, he went on for a crash course on hypnotising only as to read the mind of his wife!

    On the other hand, the author painted Bhanu as a smart, intelligent and caring individual who genuinely loved her husband. She was acutely aware of the root cause for her husband's mental problems, but didn't anticipate that her suggestion of a rhinoplasty would result in a totally adverse response from her husband. However, it was ultimately left to her to resolve the oppressing conjugal relationship between her and her husband when she played along getting hypnotised by her husband only to uproot the seed of mistrust that had taken roots in the mind of her husband!

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  17. Just read the story. A powerful story line! . I like the flow of thoughts. . It’s especially moving when a woman’s empathy and her true love is what helps unravel the quiet storms within a man

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  18. Loved the story :) Beautiful way of resolving an issue. :)

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  19. Rama Sampath Kumar: when suspicion sets on , one can go to any length and the mind refuses to accept the reality.
    It is not easy to address the underlying reasons for the mistrust. Open and honest communication, coupled with efforts to rebuild trust, is certainly not easy, especially when it comes to a man suspicious of his wife’s fidelity. Many times , the suspicion is based on unfounded fears. Low self-esteem and feelings of inadequacy which has led to suspicion - and this is normally the case when the wife outshines her spouse.This is amply brought out in this piece.

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  20. Subhashini SukumarApril 13, 2025 at 7:46 AM

    What a beautiful story and the ending is too Good.

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  21. A lovely story. Often most of us believe that external matters - looks, status, wealth - are the most important ingredients of love between men and women. However, this story reiterates the eternal truth that true love transcends all these external ingredients and is truly based on the beauty of the two minds.
    I strongly believe that the women are, in general, the superior species for whom the inner beauty of men is far more important than their external beauty, status, and wealth. Atin Biswas

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  22. Physical appearances fade over time - the heart matters, the money one possesses matters, understanding each other matters. Unfortunately in the quest for physical beauty and attractive features, a lot of relationships break. Regards - Mahesh

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  23. Realistic at the end. It would have been unbelievable if he had learned hypnotism so easily- CHINNARAJ.

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