It had been a grey, drizzly morning. Chilly winds brushed against the windows as Preethi played with her two sons, aged five and three, in the living room. Suddenly, a faint, unfamiliar cry reached her ears. She paused. It was the soft wail of a baby.
Curious and concerned,
Preethi opened the front door. To her shock, a newborn lay wrapped in a clean
dupatta on the verandah, a feeding bottle placed beside her. The infant, barely
a month old, shivered and cried softly—perhaps from hunger, perhaps from the
chill.
Who could abandon such a
tiny infant in the open, at the doorstep of an unknown house?
She looked around, hoping
to see someone. But the street was empty, save for the familiar sight of the
old mochi hunched beneath a tarpaulin shelter under the tree across the road.
Preethi rushed to him.
“Did you see anyone come to our house just now? A baby’s been left at our
door.”
The cobbler squinted,
thoughtful. “Amma, a little while ago, a young woman—about 25—opened your gate.
She was well dressed. I didn’t notice a baby. She stood near your verandah for
a moment. I thought she must be a visitor and looked away.”
“Did you see anything
else?”
“She had a slight limp.
After she left, I heard a car start somewhere nearby. I couldn’t see who got
in.”
Back home, Preethi knelt
beside the baby, stunned by her delicate beauty. A chubby, round face. A small
mole gracing her chin—a distinctive mark. Lifting the child to her shoulder,
she felt a surge of emotion. The baby’s crying stopped instantly, replaced by an
unsure smile as she nestled into Preethi’s warmth.
Her boys stood nearby,
wide-eyed. Preethi handed the baby to her elder son and hurried inside to fetch
a blanket, a soft shirt, and warm milk. After feeding, the baby smiled. That
simple gesture etched itself into Preethi’s heart.
When she called Mahesh, he
said he’d be home right away.
He, too, was moved the
moment he saw the child. The couple had long dreamed of having a daughter, but
life had brought them two lively boys instead. While they weren’t opposed to
keeping the baby, Mahesh responsibly contacted the police. The officers advised
them to send the child to a foster home. But when they saw the couple’s growing
attachment and desire to retain the baby, they allowed them to keep her,till
the baby’s mother returned to claim her.
They named her Maya.
Years passed. No one came
forward. After three years, Preethi and Mahesh officially became her legal
guardians. They moved into a new home in an upscale neighbourhood. Maya, with her
infectious laugh and inquisitive eyes, became the heart of their family.
Life settled into a
comfortable rhythm—until the afternoon that changed everything.
Preethi had stopped by Mahesh’s office to take him to a dental appointment. As he wrapped up work, a tall woman in her late twenties entered with a file.
“Leaving already?” she
asked, surprised. “I had something urgent to discuss. No problem—tomorrow,
then.”
Mahesh stood. “Sure. Meet
my wife, Preethi. This is Mrs. Deepa Ram, our senior HR manager.
Preethi nodded. Deepa was
striking—tall, poised, with hazel eyes and a quiet elegance. But as she turned
to leave, Preethi noticed something else: a faint limp.
A chill coursed through
her. Her mind darted back to that long-ago morning. The mochi’s words. A woman
with a limp.
That night, Preethi lay
awake, the image of Deepa haunting her. Could she be Maya’s mother? And if so, why
abandon her? Who was the father? Surely not her husband. No mother would leave
her child if the father stood by her.
Preethi turned toward
Mahesh, asleep beside her. He had been a kind, loving partner. She needed to
unravel this discreetly.
Over coffee the next
morning, she said lightly, “I liked Deepa. She’s graceful, warm. She didn’t
seem annoyed when you had to leave.”
“She’s talented,” Mahesh
replied. “IIM diploma. Her husband also works in the city. That’s all I know.”
“I’m thinking of inviting
her for high tea on Saturday. A ladies’ thing.”
Mahesh grinned. “Sounds
perfect. You have her number?”
Saturday afternoon
arrived. Deepa came precisely at 4, holding a box of chocolates. She wore a
cerulean salwar suit and carried herself with a natural grace. Preethi’s boys
ran off after greeting her, but Maya lingered, studying Deepa curiously.
Deepa smiled and extended
her arms. Maya glanced at her mother for approval. Preethi nodded.
The little girl ran
forward and climbed into Deepa’s lap. Deepa hugged her tightly, tears pooling
in her eyes as she kissed her over and over. Maya laughed, clinging to her.
Preethi stood watching, a
swirl of emotions rising within her—wonder, suspicion, and a strange
tenderness. She went inside to fetch snacks and fruit juice.
Moments later, Deepa
gently turned Maya’s head and glanced behind her left ear. A small smile
flickered on her face.
She didn’t notice the eyes
that had quietly been watching her from behind the fridge in the kitchen.
When Preethi returned with
snacks, she found Deepa hastily wiping her eyes.
“Maya, go play with your
brothers,” Preethi said, a note of firmness in her voice.
The girl looked
disappointed but obeyed, casting a wistful glance back at Deepa before running
off.
“You looked upset,”
Preethi said gently. “Is everything alright?”
Deepa hesitated.
“I can tell something changed while you were here. You were cheerful when you arrived.”
After a long pause, Deepa
murmured, “You’re the first person I’m telling this. My husband and I have been
married for five years. We’ve always wanted a child, especially a daughter. But
I can’t conceive. The doctors confirmed it twice.”
She exhaled. “Today… with
Maya… it stirred everything I’ve buried for so long. The ache, the longing. I
couldn’t help it.”
Preethi sat beside her and
put a hand on her shoulder. “You’re strong to share that. And Maya clearly has
taken a liking for you. She rarely connects with strangers like that.”
After a while, Deepa
composed herself and took her leave, promising to return.
But Preethi had seen it when
Deepa brushed aside Maya’s hair to look behind her ear. There, unmistakably,
was a tiny black dot—just like the mole on her chin. Preethi had somehow missed
it all these years.
That night, as Maya went to sleep,
Preethi sat with Mahesh in the living room.
“She’s Maya’s mother,” she
said softly.
Mahesh looked at her,
startled.
“I’m certain. I saw it in
her eyes and the way Maya responded. And there’s a birthmark behind her ear.
Deepa looked for it.”
Silence.
“She cannot have children.
I didn’t tell her. But she’s the woman who left Maya at our door. The mochi
described her perfectly.”
Mahesh sat back; his face
unreadable.
“She never told her
husband, I think. She must have been unmarried then. Maybe the father
disappeared. Who knows? But… what do we do now?”
Preethi’s voice broke.
“She’s Maya’s real mother. And we promised—if her mother came forward… we’d
give her back, though she has not claimed yet.”
Still, Mahesh didn’t
answer.
Laughter rang out from the
next room—Maya’s high-pitched giggle echoing alongside her brothers’.
Preethi turned toward the
sound. Maya was just a little girl, playing without a care, unaware of the
choice her parents were about to make.
And so, the decision
lingered in the stillness of the room, unspoken, unresolved.

Does not feel right for the couple who take care of the child for so long to hand over the grown child now to someone on the basis of some suspicion and physical traits that could be a coincidence. Very fishy - have a suspicion that the man was responsible for the pregnancy and Deepa placed the child at their doorstep. Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteLots of complex emotions surrounding motherhood, love, and sacrifice in this story. The tension between Preethi and Mahesh's deep bond with Maya and the potential return of her possible biological mother is very moving.
ReplyDeleteVery good story. Majesh's silence tells a thousand stories.
ReplyDeleteVery heart warming story... I don't think Preethi will be happy to hand over the child now after taking care of her for so long and the children also will be upset and will miss Maya... The only person to be happy will be Deepa... Feel sorry for Deepa... Very well narrated story... Sandhya
ReplyDeleteSuspicion alone may not be enough to make a life changing decision. The story ended with so many guesses from the reader’s views. Interesting.
ReplyDeleteChitra
A wonderful story leaving the outcome to the readers imagination. As a reader I feel there is more than one possibility. Mahesh s silence says it all. I think Maya is at the right place with the right parents and rightly entitled to Deepa s pampering. Bottom line Deepa is indeed a strong woman.
ReplyDeleteHmm...
ReplyDeleteI am not very comfortable with stories that are left lingering!😃😂
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Hadn't anticipated that the story would be built up absolutely deftly to leave the reader so tantalisingly poised at the end!
ReplyDeleteMahesh's silence leaves the reader with manifold imagination. Deepa, also in a dilemma of her own predicament , however strong she appears to be. Suspense remains and the author left to reader's imagination to solve the puzzle !
ReplyDeleteGood story 🙏
ReplyDeleteFull of suspense and emotions. nice story
ReplyDeleteSentiment of a mother on seeing the abandoned newborn, , even if she is already a mom of two children, has been expressed beautifully.
ReplyDeleteI must give it to the author's unmatched skill in naming - Maya for the main character here! And that this should also be the story title brings the crux of the issue centerstage! And finally the open ended stop to the story! Bewitching style, topped with events around a reality that's been around eons! Certainly among the masterpieces by the author.
ReplyDeleteA different story, but the author is adept at showcasing human emotions. Quite some scope for the reader to interpret as he/ she likes! I have only one niggle.. Maya’s fate is being decided and she doesn’t even know..
ReplyDeleteVery well narrated in your typical style. You gave us the choice of guessing. I guessed the husband must be the child’s father. What ever it is they should not give the child after so many years
ReplyDeleteThe fact that Maya has come to a house with loving parents is heartwarming. But the issue of the father should be settled between Preeti and Mahesh for the air to be cleared between the couple. Mahesh' silence seems to confirm the paternity but it is a dishonest silence IMO. - Thangam
ReplyDeleteThis has to rank among my favorite stories of yours. So many loose ends left for us to ponder. The unanswered questions dangle tantalizingly in our minds. The narration was just perfect! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Deepak for the nice comment
ReplyDeleteWow! Brilliantly narrated. Subject to reader’s imagination. :)
ReplyDeleteWell crafted. Understood both, father and mother. A highly interesting read.
ReplyDeleteKP Sir...Your pen weaves magic, crafting worlds where emotions run deep, plots twist with grace, and suspense lingers like a haunting melody.
ReplyDeleteLove found her not by blood, but by a door creaking open to destiny and in the dance of destiny and devotion, a child found not one mother, but two hearts forever hers.
A beautiful story of the healthy love of a foster mother for her adopted baby and the natural instinctive love of the real mother.
ReplyDeleteThe author has weaved a very captivating story with a suspense about the final outcome. Atin Biswas