I was a young doctor then,
fresh out of internship and full of uncertain dreams. I had just set up a
modest private practice in a small, sleepy town, where life moved slowly and
people lived a simple life with silent grace. My practice had barely begun to
find its footing. Most days, I saw a trickle of patients—just a handful in the
mornings and fewer still by evening. I had turned the front hall of my rented
home into a consulting room, with a narrow space in between serving as my
examination area. There were no other private practitioners nearby, just a
government hospital—overburdened, under-equipped, and struggling to care for
the town’s poorest
One night, as the clock struck 2 a.m., I woke up to a soft knock at my
door. A young boy stood there, his face pale in the moonlight, his voice barely
a whisper.
“Doctor, an old lady in the apartment next to ours… she’s very sick. My
mom says it’s serious.”
I put on a coat and followed him, asking questions as we drove in my
rattling jalopy. He didn’t know much—only that the old woman lived alone and
his mother was with her now.
I found her inside a dimly lit room, curled up on a thin mattress,
barely a shadow of a person. Her body trembled with fever, and her breathing
was shallow. The neighbour, the boy’s mother, explained that she had heard
groaning and found the old woman alone, vomiting, feverish, and weak.
“I have been to your clinic a few times,” she said. “Your medicines
helped me get well. That’s why I thought of you.”
I examined the patient. She was dangerously dehydrated, her pulse
racing. She needed immediate fluids and care. I gently told her neighbour the
old woman needed to be admitted.
The sick woman’s frail voice broke the silence. “Please… let me go in peace. I have
no one. There’s no one left to care if I live or die.”
The neighbour looked at me with sad eyes. “She has a son abroad. But he
hasn’t visited in over a decade. She won’t take his money. She survives on a
small pension. No visitors, no family. Just us, the neighbours.”
I knelt beside her. “You remind me of my mother,” I told her quietly.
“I can’t let you suffer like this. Please, let me help you. This is not just
duty—it’s something deeper. Let me be your son tonight.”
Her lips trembled; her eyes were glassy. She slowly nodded, and a
single tear slipped down her cheek.
“You are a kind boy,” she whispered. “Just like my son should have
been. Tell me, how much do I owe you for coming here… for taking me to the
hospital?”
I held her hand. “You owe me nothing. Let’s talk about payment after
you’re well and back home.”
I got her admitted and stayed until emergency treatment began. Then,
exhausted, I returned home at dawn.
When I woke up again around 8 a.m., I rushed to the hospital with a
strange tightness in my chest. The duty doctor looked at me and lowered his
head.
“We did our best. She was too weak. She passed peacefully just after
sunrise.”
He added, “She kept trying to tell us something… about money, maybe…
something she owed you. Her voice was too faint.”
I stood silently, throat thick, heart aching.
“She was like a mother to me,” I finally said, my voice shaking. “She
owed me nothing. I’ll take care of her last rites. She deserves that much. No
one should leave this world alone.”
It was Mother’s Day; I didn’t have flowers readily to place by her
side. But I thought of the old woman who, in her final hours, found in me the
son she longed for—and gave me, without knowing, the deepest lesson in
compassion, love, and quiet motherhood.
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Beautiful story Mother’s Day is all about compassion and love To give as well to receive. 🙏
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A touching story, so well written - no name, no twists! Ma = Mamta is usually understood. To evoke the same response through a story is so wonderful!
ReplyDeleteA moving story which brought tears in my eyes
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story, Kp, apt for the Mothers" day. The doctor is a kind hearted man. Well narrated story, Kp ...Sandhya
ReplyDeleteAn apt tribute to selfless love of mothers in the form of this poignant story. Wished that she came back alive and well!
ReplyDeleteA beautiful tribute for Mother's Day. It was magnanimous of you too, to give her the sense of relief in her last hours. Your concluding sentence is so impacting.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful tribute to loving mothers!! The doctor has made the old lady feel so relieved and happy at the time of her death by his simple words!! The mother knows the worth of it!! Long live the dr!! -- Jayanthi
ReplyDeleteVery touching story.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! And fitting for Mother's Day. Stripping the essence of our existence down to a few powerful words. Arvind Rajan
ReplyDeleteA moving story. Capturing the emotion of "mother"
ReplyDeleteAs always the author is able to delve deep into the minds of characters , bringing out a strong sense of pathos!
ReplyDeleteVery apt and touching for Mothers day !
Sensitively written using fine words to set the atmosphere for bringing out the delicate yet tenuous characteristics of the doctor and through his eyes, the Mother!
ReplyDelete* tenacious for tenuous
DeleteHeart touching story.very nice.ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteVery touching. happy Mothers day to all the Moms out there. (jj)
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ReplyDeleteA very touching story on Mother's Day. So good to see that a doctor stepped up to be the son for an old woman abandoned by her own. -- Thangam
Good one. Apt for Mothers day
ReplyDeleteThe unconditional love and compassion shown by the Doctor without seeking reward is very touching. Both the Ma and Dr are blessed people.
ReplyDeleteAs always the author is able to delve deep into the minds of characters , bringing out a strong sense of pathos! Very apt and touching for Mothers day !
ReplyDeleteA straight from the heart poignant story on the occasion of the Mothers' Day.
ReplyDeleteAs always such an amazing story
ReplyDeleteYou left me teary eyed with your story! That seldom happens with me.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Wonderfully narrated:)
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