Thursday, May 1, 2025

The Unexpected Awakening (471 words)

 

He chose to walk through the small forest that lay between him and his village, bypassing the long, winding road that would have taken twice the time. It was only three o’clock, and daylight still shone through the trees. The cheerful sounds of birdsong, the scampering of squirrels, and the gentle rustle of leaves made the path feel inviting. With no regrets, he stepped lightly into the tranquil woods.

An hour passed, perhaps a little more, and the forest seemed to change. The once-lively canopy grew hushed. The birds fell silent, the squirrels vanished, and even the wind that had stirred the leaves seemed to hold its breath. Twilight deepened swiftly into a shadowed gloom, and the forest stretched endlessly in all directions. A tight unease gripped his chest. He felt unable to go forward, yet too far in to turn back. Frozen in the silence, he instinctively looked up and brought his palms together in prayer. His fingers involuntarily touched a locket in his chain.

Scanning the scary surroundings, he spotted a faint glimmer of light through the trees. Pushing through tangled undergrowth, he came upon a small hut, its door shut tight. He called out—once, then again—but no answer came. He gently nudged the door open and peered inside. No one was there. A tiny lamp flickered in one corner beside a small clay pot of water. There was no sign of habitation. Just the lamp, the pot, and a sense of waiting. He sat down on the bare floor and, wearied by the day, drifted into sleep.

At dawn, the forest had transformed. Sunlight streamed through the branches, birds filled the air with music, and squirrels chased each other across the grass. He woke slowly, disoriented, trying to remember where he was. But the hut was gone. So was the lamp and the pot. The clearing itself looked untouched, as though no one had ever set foot there. It all felt like a dream, already dissolving in the light of morning. He stood in silence, the forest now radiant and full of life, yet holding a secret stillness—as if the night had whispered something he alone could hear.

A deep calm settled over him. A soft smile played across his face. He took a slow breath, letting the morning sun warm his skin. Then, with quiet confidence, he resumed his journey. The forest no longer felt unfamiliar or fearsome. It seemed to guide him gently forward. Whatever had happened—real or imagined—had stirred something within him. When he stepped into the clearing that led to the village, the bells of the distant temple rang softly through the trees.

He smiled—not because he had survived the night, but because something within him had awakened. The forest had not tested him. It had prepared him.

 

 

 

19 comments:

  1. Love this story. This story is simple yet powerful, using the forest as a symbol for inner change. I liked how the peaceful beginning slowly shifted into something mysterious, creating a sense of quiet tension. The hut, the silence, and the disappearance all added to the dreamlike atmosphere. By the end, it felt like the character went through a personal transformation—not through a big event, but through a quiet, spiritual experience. The writing was calm and reflective, which made the message even stronger.

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  2. Your story had a profound impact on me leaving behind a sense of hope !

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  3. I recall having read one of the past blog story with a similar opening situation. It was a ghost story unlike the present story.
    Jagadeesan

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  4. Thank you for helping me relive my own innumerous forest escapades in life.

    Well narrated!👍🙏

    Best wishes and warm regards
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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  5. It's one of your most amazing stories. Once you surrender unto God, he leads the way. When we realise this, we feel secure and truly light. To quote Gregory Peck “Faith gives you an inner strength and a sense of balance and perspective in life.”

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  6. A powerful story; It makes you consider how much of what holds us back is learned rather than innate. Think about a baby, reaching out without hesitation – there's a beautiful fearlessness in those early moments. It's as we interact with the world, experience setbacks, and absorb the anxieties of those around us that these walls of fear start to build.

    It's in those moments when we push past that internal resistance, that nagging voice of doubt or worry, that we truly expand our horizons and discover what we're capable of. It's not always comfortable, but that feeling of accomplishment after facing a fear is incredibly rewarding.
    Janardhan N

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  7. A risk he had taken to go through the forest brought him tensed moments. Nice story, real life situation nicely expressed.

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  8. I thought I had read the story earlier, then, it changed. No negative thoughts came to him which is good. This is a positive story and I loved it! Entirely different story by you, Kp!...Sandhya

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  9. Beautiful description of every little detail, extremely visual. Thank you for sharing. Great read.

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  10. The story started off as a mystery one, then ended up with a philosophical and a spiritual tone. Lot of points to ponder and to reflect on. Nice 👍

    Chitra

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  11. A skillfully worded and compact allegory made powerful by its brevity. Quite moving. Thank you - Arvind Rajan

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  12. Excellent. Left a profound impact.

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  13. Llike Mr. Jagadeesan, my mind too was initially drawn to the start of another story with a similar start but that ended on a supernatural note.
    Like always, I am able to clearly visualize as I read along. ‘ Even the wind seemed to hold its breath’ was something I really liked. The ending was nice.. something good to take away even from a not so pleasant experience!

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  14. You have a way with the woods, I must admit! The description of experience would resonate with anyone who's traversed through a forest. Something tells me this story is a repeat, but reading it is a pure not nevertheless!

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  15. I a nutshell, a fantastic story on the travails of a man travelling through a forest!
    In the background of the formidable forest and with progressive fading of the daylight, what a natural display of a range of emotions in the man travelling back home; right from a feeling of assurance and confidence to a feeling of uncertainty and eeriness!
    What a magical way in which the inner self in the man helped out as the darkness descended! As a defence mechanism against fear of the unknowns in the darkness of the night, hallucination of a dimly lit uninhabited hut with a pot of water provided the all-important rest and security.
    The daylight breaks out again the morning and the hallucination vanishes. But instead of any confusion as to what would have happened at night, the man is seen in a serene frame of mind and all prepared for the day with confidence!

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  16. Pattabhiraman SrinivasanMay 2, 2025 at 11:43 AM

    Wonderful storey!!

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  17. N L KrishnamurthyMay 2, 2025 at 11:45 AM

    Nice story.🙏

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  18. Though I remember to have read a similar story by the Author, now I wish to contemplate of the serene scene in the famous lines of in a poem by Robert Frost :
    “The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
    But I have promises to keep,
    And miles to go before I sleep,
    And miles to go before I sleep”
    They are not just tasks to be completed but are deeply intertwined with one’s values and commitments. These promises can range from personal goals to duties to others, embodying the moral and ethical responsibilities that shape our lives. The acknowledgment of these promises reveals a deep sense of duty and integrity. It emphasizes that while the allure of tranquility is appealing, it cannot override the necessity of fulfilling our commitments. The recurring line “And miles to go before I sleep” further emphasizes the journey that lies ahead. It serves as a reminder of the work and challenges that must be faced before one can achieve rest or fulfillment.
    A nice fulfilling story ! Kudos Sir.

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  19. Beautiful story that is surely a metaphor for life itself.
    — Deepak Raghavan

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