Monday, October 20, 2025

The Transformation on a Deepavali Day (600 words)

Narayanan’s sister, Jalaja, had come from Seattle to Ernakulam on a short holiday to his house. She and their aged mom wished to visit the famous Krishna temple at Guruvayur. Though he was an atheist at heart, he agreed to take them to the temple town in his car. He had a great fondness for his sister and always tried to please her.

When they arrived at the temple gate, he asked them to go inside for darshan and said that he would wait at the tea stall, sipping tea.

“Narayana, why don’t you accompany us and come inside? It will make mom very happy,” said Jalaja.

He shook his head and said, “Please do not insist. You take your time and have a good darshan. I will enjoy watching the people and the temple elephant tied to the railing here.”

“Jalaja, do not waste your time. He is a Nasthikan (atheist) and will lecture like Jabali that there is no god. It is all his past karma. Leave him alone. We should hurry up before the crowd starts turning up,” said her mom.

When they went inside, Narayanan bought a cup of coffee and sat on a bench outside the tea stall with the day’s morning paper. He looked at his morning emails and kept his iPhone on the bench by his side as he turned his attention to the swaying elephant. Though he felt sorry for making his mom unhappy, he had always been irreligious and without faith. His father was a communist ideologue, and maybe it was his influence on him.

As he was browsing the headlines, he felt a movement by his side and saw a boy running towards the temple. He found his iPhone missing and ran after the boy. Nimble-footed, the boy ran fast inside the big temple Prakaram (corridor). The boy ran so fast amidst the crowd of devotees that Narayanan could not keep pace with him. Everyone stood and stared in wonder at this chase.

After one round of the outer prakaram (corridor), the boy ran inside towards the sanctum sanctorum with Narayanan closely behind him. Amidst the commotion, everyone, including his mom and sister, turned towards him. Both were surprised to see him and were happy that he had come just in time when the bell rang for the arathi. Narayanan could not see the boy. He mingled with the devotees and suddenly vanished

Just then, the priest moving the arathi clockwise around the God, illuminating the sanctum, was heard telling, “Today, the lord is in Shri Bala Krishna alankaram(decorated as a young boy).

With tears flowing on their cheeks, his mom and sister were grateful for His grace in bringing Narayanan inside the temple. As everyone raised their hands, Narayanan also raised his folded hands involuntarily with his eyes focused on God. He had a good darshan of the Lord, who seemed to smile at him.

When asked by Jalaja, “How come you followed us surprisingly?” Narayanan mentioned about the young boy who snatched his iPhone and ran inside the temple and how he could not catch him.

“What are you telling? I can see your iPhone very much in your shirt pocket,” she exclaimed.

As he felt the phone in his pocket, he wondered who and where that mysterious boy could be. He was pretty sure that the boy had snatched the phone. Confused when he looked again at the God in a child’s form amidst the light of the sole oil lamp, he felt, he knew the answer and an indescribable thrill of a change in his heart.


22 comments:

  1. Wow! A good vibe ! To strengthen faith in Almighty.

    Happy Deepavali !
    …… Chitra

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  2. When i completed the last line I felt goose bumps. This could be real one. My father-in-law when he was 88 years old visited Guruvayoor alone. After taking bath in the temple tank he had good darshan of the Unnikannan. When he cameout he lost his way to the bus station. Suddenly a boy appeared from nowhere and held his stand and took him to the right bus and made him to sit inside. When he searched to ask boy who he is, he couldn't see anyone nearby. Till his death he believed that it's only the diety inside who helped him. When he narrated this to me in person I too couldn't think otherwise. Now what is written by you Sir is nothing different from that. There are innumerable such incidents being talked around whether people believe it or not or true or false. Regards PKR

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  3. A nice way to start the Deepavali festivities, it reinforces our faith in Sri Krishna, who manifests in ways unexpected and unknown to us. Only a fortunate few are able to realise his manifestations. As always a great narration.

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  4. Such miracles do happen. God has his own way of showing up.

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  5. •Similar to Poonthanam Namboothri telling a story and asking the Guruvayoorappan is this true. And the Lord nodded his head and said it is true. I will finish your story and write: Jalaja asked the Lord is that you the boy who stole the Iphone of my brother. Lord Guruvayoorappan nodded his head and said it is true.

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  6. A good reminder of the unexpected ways in which blessings arrive! Nice.

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  7. Best story yet . Loved it and goosebumps . Hope such transformation happens to few in my family . Waiting for his grace.

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  8. Best story yet. Loved it . Goosebumps . Waiting for such transformation in few of my family .

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  9. Wow. So good. His slate was refreshed the moment he entered the sanctum. :) Tena vina trunam api na chalati.

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  10. Nicely written, God leads in mysterious ways. (JJ)

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  11. Beautiful story. Loved it!

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  12. There cannot be an apter story to match the mood prevailing on the happy and auspicious occasion!

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  13. In order to instil faith on an atheist, God has his ways to bring about the change without causing any loss of his legitimate holdings.
    Jagadeesan

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  14. A good read on this auspicious day, reinforcing the power of faith and how the Almighty God, in his mysterious ways, brings about change in Narayan's heart and mind.

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  15. Narayanan experiences the divine moment on his own , not because someone convinced him. A convincingly portrayed story!

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  16. Felt very happy, reading this story! The narration is so good that we feel it happening in front of our eyes! Thank you, Kp...Sandhya

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  17. When the Lord calls you, it's time to go. No room for excuses.

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  18. Beautiful and interesting story sir🙏

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  19. Rama Sampath Kumar : what a lovely story . Really touches the heart at the end. God certainly can create miracles just to show that He exists. The beginning of the story reminded me of a friend who said that her husband was an “ outstanding “ Christian. When asked what it meant she said - he waits for me outside the Church while I am attending mass inside.

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  20. Could an individual's innate good nature combined with divine grace, lead to such unexpected moments of spiritual awakening? A life event like that of Narayanan, that may seem like chance can, in fact, be a divinely orchestrated moment intended to draw a person toward self-realization. 

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  21. A moving story that begins in disbelief and ends in devotion. The child pranked, the Lord appeared, and even the staunch atheist bowed to faith. Sometimes, the divine chooses the most unexpected paths to open a heart.

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