Thursday, June 2, 2011

55 W fiction

Morality
What I do not like about Rinku is her going gaga over every hunk she sees. I am in love with her and want her to play straight. I hate cheating girls. I killed my wife because she deceived. I will warn Rinku tomorrow at our rendezvous when her husband is away.

A touch of compassion
I am don’s sidekick. He sent me to bring forcibly a young woman he had seen for his postprandial fun. I saw through window her nursing a babe in arms. I saw a mom in her and whispered “escape immediately by back door. You are in danger” and tell myself no one is at home.
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22 comments:

  1. NRIGirlJune 2, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    Liked the first one. @KP!

    I have a question: What does 55 W stand for? I thought it could mean 55 words but can't quite prove my theory because the first one only has 52 words... So decided to check with you on that.

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  2. L KRUPAAJune 2, 2011 at 5:06 PM

    Well written! Appreciate your thinking.

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  3. WhirlwindJune 2, 2011 at 6:24 PM

    Liked the touch of compassion!!

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  4. BikramJune 2, 2011 at 9:30 PM

    First one i liked Look who is talking of decieving ..

    Bikram's

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  5. anupamaJune 3, 2011 at 7:56 AM

    Dear Partha,
    Good Morning!
    Imagination is good;but you know my taste!:)
    Second story is good as it gives the value-Love the Mother in the lady!
    Wishing you a lovely day,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  6. CreativityJune 3, 2011 at 9:23 AM

    Excellent Write Up!

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  7. RenuJune 3, 2011 at 10:38 AM

    Liked the second one more..compassion is very important in life.

    first one..people like thata re common today:)

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  8. A New BeginningJune 3, 2011 at 11:52 AM

    Great stories as ever :)

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  9. Ankita June 3, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    hii

    really nice :)

    i loved the second one :)

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  10. deepsJune 5, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    short and sweet as always with 55s...
    as for the first one however i wonder if the title is apt!!

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  11. Pramoda MeduriJune 5, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    Good narration uncle.. well tried.;)

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  12. AnonymousJune 6, 2011 at 12:39 AM

    Both are good. The first one shows the guys double standard and the second shows a compassionate side... Thanks for sharing

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  13. SMJune 6, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    well written

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  14. PreetiChoudharyJune 6, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    I always like your writing... Its good. :)
    Thanks for sharing.
    Regards

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  15. SandhyaJune 8, 2011 at 6:23 PM

    I laughed at the first one!

    Second one is also good!

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  16. AnyaJune 8, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    That comment from NrIgirl is good
    I do also not understand 55 word f.

    the first story is 52 words
    lols

    But now serious Anya
    hahaha....
    I like the short story's very much

    :)

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  17. Meera SundararajanJune 9, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Short and sweet. Why about villians now?

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  18. RJune 14, 2011 at 4:12 PM

    both were very interesting and dark! how about somehting light ?


    well written!

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  19. Rhapsody PhoenixJune 15, 2011 at 4:49 AM

    hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......ok, still pondering....

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  20. TanviJune 15, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    Interesting ... but so dark! But I liked them!

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  21. the thinking cupcakeJune 16, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    hmmm...that was some idea--the fact that it was in just 55 words made it a lot more interesting :)

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  22. SujataJune 21, 2011 at 11:47 AM

    Very nice post

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