My
husband and I enjoy sitting daily in our spacious balcony in the late evenings on
the fifth floor of our building complex. We had a panoramic view if we looked up of the dark sky
and the shimmering stars and if we looked down the landscape of
the busy city illuminated with lights of various hues from different buildings
advertising their products some in marquee, some in changing colours and some
in blinding constant light. The variety was baffling and innovative.
“I have
something to tell you. Do you remember one Suresh who studied with me in IIM
and went on to join a MNC?"I said.
"Yes,
I know, Savitri. You had also mentioned that he fell in love with you and
wished to marry you. What happened?" asked my husband Murali
"Your
memory is sharp. True he loved me and I was also initially not sure whether I
loved him or not. There were certain things about him that put me off. He was highly
opinionated and had extreme views on most subjects and never allowed room for dissent.
Slightly abrasive on that score, he was not very popular. Otherwise a perfect gentleman,
chivalrous and helpful by nature. he helped me a lot with study materials and
in the project work"
"Agreed
and you also had a weakness for him till something went wrong and you moved away
from him. Where is he? Did he talk to you by any chance?"
I
laughed and said “How did you get that impression that I had a weakness for him.
I knew he can be a good friend and never a partner in my life.Anyway, he did talk
to me. He has come to the city on some work and wondered whether we could meet
for a quick lunch at Samrat tomorrow. I just wished to keep you informed."
"Why
should I be kept informed? Do you think I am a suspicious type or what? Healthy
friendships do not cease after marriage" Murali said
It was
the next day and as usual we were in the balcony. It was Murali's turn to
broach on the meeting with Suresh.
"Savitri,
I thought you would yourself tell me about the luncheon meeting with your class
mate. Did you both meet? What does he say?"
"Sorry,
I wished to tell you but we had just settled down in the balcony. You seem to be thinking
about it all the time" I giggled as Murali made face at me
"Yes,
he came on time. He is bloated and pale looking not the healthy guy he was
years back. With receding head, he looked older for his age."
"I
am not interested about his looks. What did he tell you?"Murali asked
impatiently
I noted
the asperity in his tone and said nothing special was discussed.
"Come
on dear, you must have been together for an hour at least. Where is he now, how
many kids, about his wife, his job and things like that" prodded Murali
"He
has not married and works in Delhi. He was telling he had not been keeping well.
When I pressed on what was ailing him, he brushed aside the question. His
parents it seems are in village and have become old. He felt sorry he could not
be of much help to them except financially. He is in a senior position, President
or some such thing. He talked about common friends, professors and also asked
about you." I said
"That
is sad about his not keeping well at this young age. You could have called him
.for dinner. When is he leaving for Delhi? Invite him for breakfast tomorrow. I
can go late to office. I would also like to meet him."
"Are
you sure?" I asked with disbelief.
"Certainly,
why not? Ring him up right away"
I tried
his number two or three times and then said to Murali “it is ringing with no
response"
"Try
his hotel number where he is staying" Murali suggested
"Good
idea" I replied and rang up
"What
are you talking? I met him this afternoon. How can it be that he had not checked
in? He told me he was leaving tomorrow evening" I told the receptionist at
the hotel.
When
the lady repeated the same thing, I gave the phone to Murali and said “They are
blabbering some nonsense. You talk to them ".
"What
is the problem in connecting to Mr. Suresh?” Murali asked the receptionist
"Sir,
he had booked the room from Delhi but he did not check in at all. When we
contacted his secretary at Delhi, we heard the sad news of his heart attack in
the plane. His body was being flown back is all the information we have. I did
not tell the lady who spoke with us now this sad news" said the
receptionist politely.
"Are
you sure about the factual correctness of what you are telling?"Murali
asked
"Hundred
percent.I can give you his secretary's number if you wish"
With
utter disbelief and confusion writ large on his face, Murali told her of what
he had heard.
I let
out a scream and cried"Oh no, it cannot be. Who was that sitting with me
at the hotel then? Believe me Murali, won’t you? He was talking to me happily
and was glad that he could meet me after so many years. Who was he then?"
Murali
put his arm around me and led me inside.
The last wish. Didn't expect that ending.As usual wonderful narration Partha sir.
ReplyDeleteImpressive narration, but I turn a bit imbecile to catch the climax.
ReplyDeleteGood One with a super natural twist.
ReplyDeleteAwww...very touching ending..
ReplyDeleteThe climax was so unexpected.
ReplyDeleteSo was it his ghost. Bit confused
ReplyDeleteHey... that is too dramatic!
ReplyDeleteGhosts appear only for few seconds not for one whole hour. Good read though, kept me hooked till the last line. :)
Never expected the twist! Narration is very good, as usual, Partha Sir!
ReplyDeleteNow ghosts are also entering your stories to create a twist? :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Awesome narration :D Master story teller proves again :D
ReplyDeleteFrankly the twist was unexpected. I reread the story again.:) Great story sir.
ReplyDeleteWhat an unexpected twist in the end ! Maybe the guy had a hamshakal or duplicate. Perhaps the real Suresh was lunching with Savithri and the humshakal had a heart attack :)
ReplyDeleteFirst time here...that's an unexpected twist in the end!..nice narration..
ReplyDeleteEngaging narration.. the end was shocking and sad.
ReplyDeleteInteresting story. Do you believe in ghosts? :-)
ReplyDeleteMay your day be blessed.
I don't believe in ghosts. End was quite unexpected. Our mind denies what it can't understand. If someday someone is able to convince me that ghosts do exist.. I will ever be ready to change my opinion.. till then. Let ghosts be ghosts :P
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