The town folks got scent somehow
of an approaching trouble by word of
mouth that the ruthless thugs plan to loot the town very soon. The residents living in all parts of the town kept a close vigil to see if any strangers on motor bikes were seen loitering amidst their midst and
trying to gather information.
Nandu, a farmer from a nearby village, had come to this town in search
of his wayward elder brother who it was rumoured had fallen into bad company of
dacoits. His old and sick mother has always been pleading with Nandu to trace
his elder brother and bring him home. She hoped that her elder son would mend
his ways once he saw his wife and children struggling in poverty not realizing that it was actually
the poverty at home that drove him initially into their fold.
Nandu knew it was difficult to get out of such violent gangs once you
get in and become wise to their hideouts, their ways and the identity of the
members. Even a faint attempt to escape brought an instant and fatal reprisal. Nevertheless, Nandu had no mind to ignore
her request when he came to know
that the gang may loot the town in a
couple of days and had stationed himself in a friend’s place.
It was in the morning on the fateful day that four roaring motor bikes
entered the town from Western direction
followed by two or three each from the other three directions and were
seen being driven here and there within
the small town shooting aimlessly in the air
and at anyone who crossed their path spreading great fear and panic.
The residents locked their doors securely and those especially women
and girls who chanced to be outside their homes scampered to hide safely in
their homes or wherever they could. Farmers from fields and workers from places of work hurriedly
tried to reach their homes.
Nandu who was outside in the
local bazaar hid himself in an open garage
near him but could not close the doors fully in the hurry. There was a
small gap. It was however
dark inside with an unpleasant smell
of stale grain in gunny bags, hay and cattle dung. Gun shots were heard
intermittently from outside and the bikes
were roaring past.
It was then he heard a motorbike stop outside the garage and someone
trying to kick start it repeatedly in vain. There was then total silence that
was harrowing. To add to the disquiet
the timorous Nandu got the shock of his life when he heard someone
breathing from close quarters and
stifling a sneeze. He was afraid to be alone in the dark garage possibly with a
dacoit.
As he inched his way towards the door. he heard someone inhaling snuff softly. He was now sure about
the presence of another man in the garage. Soon he heard the
soft clapping of one palm by the
other usually made by ghutka
users. He remembered that his elder
brother was addicted to ghutka like himself and also snuff. The frequent
soft clap from him after crushing the stuff
with his thumb assured Nandu it must be his brother.
Emboldened he softly queried, “ Is it Motu of Siyagarh?”
There was no reply but the soft clap of palms continued.
“ I am Nandu, your brother,” and
he added,” If it is Motu give me a sign of recognition.”
There was a loud laughter and Nandu taking it as a positive sign
happily moved closer to the place from where the laughter came.
It was then the door was pushed open by someone and in came the bright
sunlight.
Nandu froze in fright when he saw a glistening metal from the masked man inside pouring bullets at the figure at the
entrance. Nandu was now not certain after witnessing the ruthless killing, whether the masked man was really his brother
as he had assumed.
Overcome by fear and to assuage the angry man, Nandu unconsciously
proffered his ghutka tin towards him. There was then a ‘Gabbar Singh‘ hilarious laughter followed by
a confident step towards him.
“ Nandu, ma aur thum kaise ho? Dar gaye kya?” (Nandu, how are ma and
you? Got afraid or what?”) he asked as he removed the cloth covering his face
only to reveal a face with a deep scar on his jaw, twisted lips, yellow teeth
and an evil smirk.
Nandu with mixed feelings of
gladness at having traced at last his elder brother and a strong distaste at his wanton cruelty on an unknown
man, bent low to touch his feet as was customary. There was a bitter pain at the
realisation that Motu was beyond redemption.
A good prankster.
ReplyDeleteThank you for bringing smiles through your short stories
Chitra
Prank? Srikanth
DeleteInteresting story. Felt like watching a Surya movie.
ReplyDeleteThank god, now Motu s family can stop expecting him to take care of them and carryon with their lives.. . Once they enter the bad company, it is not easy to come out of it.., well narrated story.. .
ReplyDeleteGood one, loved thd narration. Typically, once in bad company it would be difficult to get out of it despite realisation. Nanda a dutiful son with added responsibilities now.
ReplyDeleteAn experience of watching a short movie, lovely!/ padmaja
ReplyDeleteK P Sir you are going places !
ReplyDeleteThat too to places unlikely to have trodden by you ! Short and sweet story
Has all the elements (excepting song and dance as well as a mushy romance) of a successful masala movie. 😀
ReplyDeleteLike someone said “Bad company ruins good morals” Nandu’a realization that his bother was beyond hope is probably true but a brother’s love cannot stop him from being happy at having found his brother and hoping for the best. The narration of the story is so good that I could visualize the dark garage scene like a movie. Very interesting story. I cannot help but comment on your apt pictures for the title too. Really enjoyed the story. Please continue sharing many more interesting reads such as this.
ReplyDeleteGot reminded of a Tamil movie starring actor Nanda and Jeeva. One brother lands in Mumbai in search of another. Name evades my memory.
ReplyDeleteRiveting but sad. Om, Srikanth
ReplyDeleteGood one! A lot of action and drama! Nice!
ReplyDeleteCruel twist of fate to lose a sibling to bad company and to see him in that state of affairs! The relief still of finding a long lost brother still so vividly brought out! Alas, if only the ending was like ..."and they lived happily everafter"!
ReplyDeleteA fascinating new plot that has all the ingredients of a latest flick!
Amazing and puzzling both! No one would know how to behave in such a situation.
ReplyDeleteRenu
Motu is now a hard core dacoit & beyond penitence.
ReplyDeleteNice story
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