Subban had no family and no job
either. He never knew where his next meal would come from. He was by
nature a timid man, kind and helpful, straighforward and disliked
fights.However,he had a weakness for toddy and would stand on the road inviting
the hesitant passers-by to the thatched shed partially hidden by trees
where the toddy aka kallu was sold along with
roasted nuts,pickles and steamed chana seasoned with some
spices. The owner of the shop who knew his usefulness gave him
daily free toddy and the left-over side dishes. Whenever there
was a heavy crowd, the owner would take his help to hand over the toddy bottles
on the basis of tokens in different colours. Over a period of time he had a free
run of the place in the absence of the owner but he never misused it.
As he was standing on the road one
hot day with a bottle of the brew and munching roasted nuts, a
bare-chested man with unkempt hair, beard and mustache came near him. He said
he was thirsty and extremely hungry. Subban took pity on him and readily gave
him the bottle with toddy and roasted nuts.When he gulped the entire
thing in one go, Subban gave him another bottle with some briyani.
With his hunger gone and the mood
elated with the intoxicating drink inside him ,the mendicant asked Subban to
sit by his side under the tree and said,” I am very pleased with you for your
kindness and ready help. I wish to repay the debt of gratitude. I have no money
but have some special powers that I can bestow on you. Would you be
interested?”
“What would that be ?” Subban asked.
“You must have heard of the
transmigration of souls into another body. You can choose the person into
whom you wish to enter. He in turn would enter your body. You can choose to be
a rich and powerful man, a holy hermit, a famous sportsman, a renowned warrior
or whomever you wish to. I am in a hurry. Tell me now immediately for me to
make the change. I will come here exactly after a month if you need my help,”
he said.
Subban’s only aim was to get out of
his poverty. He could think of no other person than a rich and powerful
politician from his area. He had a wife, palatial bungalow, cars and many
servants. Without any loss of time, he named the man.The bearded mystic
uttered some mumbo jumbo and presto the change was effected with the mystic
disappearing simultaneously
Subban waited for a few minutes for
the transmigration to take place but found himself still under the tree. He was
eagerly looking forward to the palatial bungalow, the scrumptious food, car and
other comforts. Nothing was forthcoming. Instead when a passer-by asked him
where the toddy shop was, Subban hit him in anger and snapped
“How dare you ask me for a toddy shop, you scoundrel? Do you know who I
am? ‘continuing with foul expletives.
The owner, who was watching from a
distance, was taken aback at the strange behaviour and wondered whether he was
overdrunk. He came near Subban and put his hand on him in a
friendly manner when the latter pushed his hand away and blurted
in anger, “Take your dirty toddy smelling hand off me.Do you know who I am? I
can have this shop closed within 24 hours, you cheapster, unless you pay me
50,000 rupees in hard cash by nightfall.”
Taken aback at his insolent behaviour
and demand for money, the owner without losing his cool took his hand away and
asked him gently, ”Subba,what has got over you? This is strange for I have
never seen you in anger. Take some rest in the corner of the shed. You will be
fine soon.”
This infuriated Subban further and
he shouted, “How dare you address me by name? You have the temerity to ask me
to take rest on the bench in this foul smelling and mosquito infested
shanty. You will pay for it soon, I warn you.”
The owner became furious
and hit Subban hard, forbade him from entering the shop again and
with the help of two regular customers threw him out on the road where he lay
unconscious.
*****
At the politician’s house, a few
businessmen who were waiting patiently for an audience with the leader were
taken by surprise when the leader himself, an agnostic, wearing an ash mark and
Kumkum prominently on his forehead, entered the waiting hall with folded hands.
“What brings you people here? Did I make you wait for long? Were you
served with refreshments? You could have met me in my office. Tell me what I
can do for you,” he said.
The surprised businessmen, noticing
the sea change in his usually boorish behaviour, sheepishly smiled and
proffering a suitcase said, “Sir, here is the amount agreed upon. I hope you
will kindly accept it and arrange for clearance of the file.”
“What file and what is to be cleared?
What agreement and why the money to me? All government transactions
should be made only at the treasury,” the leader expressed surprise.
Confused they looked at him when one
of the businessmen summoned the courage to say, ”He he he, this is the usual speed money you demand for clearing
our files and we always offer. We beg of you to accept it and help us.”
“I am not aware of such irregular
things. Please go away before making me lose my calm,” the leader said
and went inside abruptly.
“What has befallen him? Has he lost
his senses?” they murmured among themselves and left the scene in disbelief.
His wife came to him to ask him,” It
is nearing one and the lunch is ready.”
On seeing the dining table
with a large spread of multi varied items of food ,delicacies and
dessert, he asked. “Is there any party today and for what occasion? Where are
the guests?”
“Nothing of the sort. It is the usual
daily fare for the two of us. What is wrong with you asking funny questions? I
have been noticing since last night that you are behaving oddly, ” she asked.
“Are you not aware of the lot of poor
who do not get even one meal properly and yet you are wasting so much? I insist
you prepare only the required quantity and avoid such criminal waste,” he
admonished her gently. She jabbed her jaw to her shoulders in sheer contempt
for her husband and thought to herself whether he had really lost his
mind since yesterday.
Early next morning, when the leader
was seen along with one assistant walking in the bustee of poor people
checking for himself their living conditions and enquiring about the
availability of water, the drainage facilities, removal of garbage and
cleanliness, the people were wonderstruck in disbelief at the change
in him especially when there was no election in the next few years.
Word spread quickly about the strange transformation in the leader
who opted for a smaller car and simple living and his growing popularity.
*****
Exactly after a month the mystic was
at the toddy shop as promised when he saw Subban turned into a local
bully threatening passers-by, picking fights for no reason and robbing people
by force or stealth.
The mystic realized instantly
the mistake he had made in effecting the transmigration of
souls between two living individuals and in the process, he had only transferred the problems of one and
undesirable traits of the other from one person to another without increasing the wellbeing
of the society. He decided not to interfere anymore with God’s plans and
promptly restored the status quo ante (as existed previously).
Subban was now back happily occupied
in the toddy shop helping his master as before and the wily political leader
returned to his arrogant ways and collecting his illegal mamools.
A story with good twist..! The mystic shouldve known what he was doing
ReplyDeleteI wanted the politician to be good for some more time!!:) And i wonder whom I will choose if i am forced. Forced being the operative word:)
ReplyDeleteA rare occurance.! Cannot imagine you writing on such topics like a Pro !
ReplyDeleteExcellent story.
ReplyDeleteThis story takes me back to the Vikramaditya days!!
ReplyDeleteGood one Partha sir 😊 - Mahesh.
ReplyDeleteThe story took me back to Vikramaditya days!! Janardhan N
ReplyDeleteJust finished reading your story. Totally engrossed in it.. A different kind of story with different vision. I loved the plot and your narration.
ReplyDeleteThis is entirely a different plot than your earlier ones. Enjoyed reading this. Would have liked the leader to be the reformed one and Subban also live comfortably with good manners. Still what is said in the last paragraph is very right. We, humans should not interfere in God's creations, whether good or bad. Everything has a purpose. Good one!
ReplyDeleteI remember the dsys I was reading Chandamama, the curiosity being sustained till the end, it was a similar experience reading this super story, so proud of you! / Padmaja
ReplyDeleteVery nice and original! Definitely material for a much longer story, money or movie there!
ReplyDeleteBest regards,
Srikanth
Wish the mystic had just left things as they were and not meddled in the ways of nature! At least he realised his mistake. Good one!
ReplyDeleteAnother wonderful story. Loved the plot and the narration.
ReplyDeleteIt is difficult to imagine and write about the experience of a drunken man unless you observed some one very closely. Fantasy with some realistic touches!
ReplyDeleteCHINNARAJ
What a cheeky, tongue in cheek story!
ReplyDeleteHa ha...wished that the wily politician mended his ways for good for the betterment of the society! I guess we are mere puppets in the hands of the maker, loved the imagination albeit with the harsh realities plaguing us!
ReplyDeleteGood one, lesson well conveyed. Make me curious, transmigration of souls is possible?!
ReplyDeleteInteresting story.
ReplyDeleteHad written a story about "Soul-exchange"- that was the prompt given by Blogchatter.
You may like to read it here-
http://www.anitaexplorer.com/2014/06/soul-exchange.html
What a welcome change in attitude of politician!
Could we not have allowed that to continue? Wish it happens for all! All would work for society's good, and not just with thought of elections!
Nice read!!!
ReplyDeleteI wish the exchange had continued. The 'good' politician would have bettered the lot of thousands and one arrogant fool in the toddy shop would have been despatched soon enough! Nice story Sir!
ReplyDeleteNice one with a twist! I didn’t realise that he is just changing the souls
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