“Who is opening the curtain daily in the drawing hall? I keep it closed” said Mukund with some irritation as he drew the curtain close. He had just returned from office. He did not like the young man from flat on the same second floor of the opposite block standing in his balcony and staring at Mukund’s living room. That good-looking guy must be less than 30, tall, rugged looking with a week’s bristle on his face. Could the dislike be because Mukund was short, plump with thick glasses and a bulbous big nose?
Mohana, his wife, was busy in the kitchen and did not respond to his
question.” Where is Manisha? I don’t see her” he asked her.
“Why? She has gone to meet Lavanya in the opposite block to collect
some project report. She should be back any time” replied Mohana.
“Which floor is Lavanya living on?”
“I have no idea. How does it matter as there is lift as in ours?” said
Mohana
Mukund did not reply and went to his room to change his dress after a
wash. She peeped through the curtain to find no one looking at her complex.
When Manisha returned after a while, Mukund admonished her for keeping
the French window open.” What are you talking about, Dad? The windows are meant
to let in sunlight and air. Why do you insist that they be prevented from entry
to the hall by closing the window by curtains?” replied Manisha, a beautiful 18-year-old
girl. She had taken after her charming mom in looks.
“It is not the light or breeze; I am talking about” mumbled Mukund
“Then what?” she asked with a bemused expression.
Mohana intervened to say “Do not argue with dad. There must be a reason
for his telling.”
After some silence, Mukund cleared his throat and said to his upset
daughter “I see one guy always standing on the balcony of the same floor as
ours in the opposite building and staring at our apartment possibly to catch a
glimpse of you. That is why I wish to keep the curtains closed.”
“Dad, are you serious? When I walk in the road or in the college so
many see me and some even stalk me. Do you want me to wear a burqa or live in a
dark cell away from men’s eyes? You seem so outdated” she said laughing aloud.
“I am not going to keep the curtains closed because some man is watching our
flat and rather I will draw them open every time I see it closed” she added.
“Manisha, stop it. He is telling for your good” said Mohana and turned
to Mukund and said “Do not worry. I will take care. Our girl is always in her
room busy with her studies wanting to get into IIT and she does not idle away
her time.”
From the next day Manisha was happy that the curtains were drawn open
in the day time with living room bright till her dad returned home in the
evening. She was also pleased that her mom sat more in the living room to
listen to music or do some knitting. She also agreed with her mom when she said
men are always suspicious by nature and Manisha should not be upset with her
dad.
Manisha smiled and said “Mom, I can now understand why dad is
suspicious. Even at your age of 39, you look so young and gorgeous, that makes
me too jealous.”
“Silly girl, stop blabbering and drink your Horlicks before it gets
cold,” said Mohana
Two weeks later, Mukund received a call around 4pm from Manisha. “Dad,
please come home immediately. There is something amiss.”
“What is it about? I am busy here”
“Mom is not to be seen in the home. When there was no response to the
repeated bell, the aunty at the opposite apartment opened the door and gave me
the key telling that mom requested her to give the key to me as she was in a
hurry to go somewhere.”
“Did she tell where she was going? Did you try her mobile/”asked Mukund
“I did, dad. The telephone was shut. I rang up our relatives to see
whether she had gone there. She could not be traced. It appears she left around
11 am.”
After 30 minutes, her dad came home. He looked crest fallen and
perspiring heavily. Manisha brought a glass of cool water which he drank in one
gulp.
“Dad, I am worried about mom. She would not go without leaving
information behind or talking to you.”
“Listen carefully. I asked the security whether he saw your mom going
out. He said he saw her in a flustered manner leaving the complex towards the
main road. She had a bag in her hand. When I asked the security whether anyone
had accompanied her, he said the tall fellow with the stubble in the opposite
block had come out in a taxi at the same time and talked to your mom for a
minute before he left. I don’t know what is happening” he said with worry and
anger writ large on his face.
“No, Daddy. That guy would have left for some errand on his own. Why do
you connect them?”
“I also thought like that and went to the second floor of that complex.
That flat was locked. I enquired at the opposite flat and learnt, he had
vacated it and left the key with them around 11 am. He did not leave any
address behind” sobbed Mukund.
It hit Manisha like a sledgehammer. Could mom be so treacherous, she
thought? No, never can it happen, she reasoned. Tears filled her eyes as she
hugged her dad consolingly.
It was 630pm and they were debating whether the help of police should
be sought when they heard the doorbell. It was Mom. There was no bag in her
hand.
“I am sorry I could not inform you or Manisha before I left. There was
an urgent call from the nursing home where my maternal aunt is living with
dementia. I thought she had died as they did not tell me anything more than my
required presence for taking her to the hospital. As I came out of the complex,
the tall fellow from the opposite flat who came in a car asked me if I needed
to be dropped on the way. I declined his offer to help. It transpired my aunt
fell and sustained a fracture. She was taken to hospital along with me. They put
plaster and sent her back to the hospice. I took a few old nighties and towels
for her use. I could not ring as there was no charge in my phone and I thought
I would return before Manisha came from college at 4 pm. My aunt could faintly
remember me and would not allow me to leave. The nurses gave her some tranquillizer
and advised me to stay till she dozed off to sleep. I am sorry I got delayed.
Were you both worried?”
Manisha did not say anything but hugged her mom and smothered her with
kisses, even as her dad standing beside her mom, hung his head in shame for
having doubted his wife.
Good twist.
ReplyDeleteManam oru kurangu, manithan manam oru kurangu!
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Doubt and sense can't co-exist. Beautiful story captured around a living room curtain! Brilliantly written
ReplyDeleteNice story.
ReplyDeleteOne should not come to the conclusion suddenly. 🙏🙏
I guess this was before cell phone time. She could have left a note behind.
ReplyDeleteBut again, trust is very important in a married life, and her husband lacked that in her. A good story to point that.
Chitra
One of your wonderful stories. A great pointer to how our minds work overtime and gets engaged in unwarranted thoughts. Beautifully narrated as always.
ReplyDeleteKannal kanbathum poi. Kaadhaal ketpadhum poi. Theera visaripadhey mei. Don't come to a conclusion without discussing/investigating thoroughly.
ReplyDeleteOnce we allow negative thoughts to take over, our mind tends to spiral further, and a naturally suspicious nature only makes it worse. Mukund not only jumped to the wrong conclusion but also convinced his daughter of the same. Neither took the time to verify the facts or understand the situation. Thankfully, Mohana wasn’t in any serious trouble. A well-crafted story with an important lesson!
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