Thursday, February 20, 2025

A daring escapade (857 words)

 

Koyambedu bus stand was humming with activity. My bus to Bangalore leaves at ​7:30 am. I barely made it on time, rushing to hop ​in just as the doors were about to close​. I found a young boy of 11 years sitting on the window seat that was earmarked for me. I did not mind though he​ ​had not requested for switching the seat​.   After stowing my bag in the overhead compartment, I settled into the aisle seat beside him   He was in shorts and a colourful ​​T-shirt. He was busy watching the vast array of buses and passengers with bags rushing to them.

When he turned to look at me, I smiled and asked him, “Are you travelling to Bangalore alone?”

He nodded and said to my surprise, “Can I sit in the window seat​? I like watching the small towns and villages.”

I was happy he sought my permission and said, “You can sit. What is your name? Do you belong to Bangalore?”

“No, I live in Chennai. My name is Rishab​,” he said and started looking out.

“Do you like cricket?” I asked and he vigorously nodded his head

Intrigued ​that it was mid-week and there was no vacation, I asked him, “Do you have relatives there? Which part of Bangalore​ are you going​ to?”

When he kept silent, I prodded him saying he had not answered my question.

He looked at my face and said calmly without any emotion,” I have no one there. I do not know where I will be going at Bangalore.”

“Are you running away from your home? It is dangerous to be alone ​i​n ​an unknown city. Where did you get the money ​to buy the ticket ​on this Volvo bus? Tell me the truth. I am worried about you.” I asked in disbelief.

He did not answer.” Alright we can continue the conversation after breakfast​, I said. The bus stopped​ after an hour at a ​wayside restaurant. “Come along, we will have our breakfast,” I said and when he did not get up, I pulled him up and said, “Do not bother about money.”

The boy was relaxed after breakfast and in a mood to talk. I decided to give him some space before continuing our conversation.   After one hour, I told him, “I want you to be truthful. Why did you run away from home? What is the problem? Your parents must be worried now about you. Did you fail in your class​ or what?”

“Yes, I ran away. I did not want to stay there. My father keeps touring for ​a large part of the month and hardly talks to me when ​a​t ​the station. My ​stepmother though not cruel, is disinterested and busy with her friends and social circle. I did not want to stay there,” he replied.

“You are foolish. The world outside is wicked and very soon without any protection of ​a home, you will be thick in all vicious activities,” I warned him. Where do you intend ​to stay at Bangalore? I hope not at the​ bus or railway station as another rag-picker?” 

“Malleswaram.​ One of my friends, Shammanna, lives there. We studied together till last year.”

“Do you know where he lives in Malleswaram or the name of his father?”

He kept quiet as he had no answer.

“Do not worry. After we reach Bangalore, I will talk to your father. Do not be scared. I will ensure no harm comes to you. You can stay with me​ till then.

I felt sultry despite the cool bus and ​was restless by the thought of a young child​ driven to such ​a foolish step by uncaring parents.

“It is hot. Have this fruit juice,” I offered ​him one of the two I took from my bag. Sleep for a while till the bus stops for lunch.”

It was almost ​2​ pm when the bus entered the Central bus stand opposite Bangalore city station.​A​s we alighted from the bus stop, I heard a voice hailing the boy by a loud “Rishab​". I ​​turned to see an elderly gentleman in ​a silk kurta and dhoti with his wife in silk sari ​​and a driver in ​a white uniform. They looked affluent.

The boy turned ​i​n that direction and shouted aloud,” Thatha, Patti, one second​, I will be with you with my bag.”

“How was your first bus trip alone? Your mom rang me up at least half a dozen times enquiring whether you had reached safely,” said his grandpa and turning to ​the driver asked him to take the bag from the boy.

Pointing me out, the boy said “Thatha, this uncle who was seated by my side was very nice and concerned​ about my travelling alone asking me ​a lot of caring questions and bought me my breakfast​, fruit juice​ and lunch. He gave me ​his window seat too.”

Surprised​ and relieved at the new revelation, I saw the boy walking happily with his grandparents towards ​a big Toyota​ car. He turned towards me and shouted with a​ cheeky wink from a distance,” I am going to Malleswaram.​ Do not be worried.” 

 

22 comments:

  1. A very smart kid - street smart indeed ! He can survive well in this world.
    Ha ha ha ha

    Chitra

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  2. I didn’t expect the twist in the end! Smart kid who got everything he wanted.

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  3. A good one, a sassy fellow with good ruse i liked your noble gesture of ensuring that he is safe, seldom.people bother about strangers.

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  4. What a fertile imagination the boy had! And how he must have enjoyed putting one over his co-passenger. But he was lucky the co-passenger was a concerned person. A very different kind of story. Loved it!

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  5. Naughty child with a wild imagination and gift of tge gab. Very enjoyable reading. The twist maintained till the end. 😀😃

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  6. A very interesting sweet story. Enjoyed reading it. Atin Biswas

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  7. Surely, it must be essentially a fun story.

    Looks like I am a bit too conservative in approach.
    I guess that the boy was well provided for by his caring parents for the bus trip.

    Upto occupying a window seat is perfectly alright for a boy, may be even telling that he doesn't have any specific address to go to in Bangalore for the sake of fun is still passable. But projecting a picture of an adverse family situation to a complete stranger and unhesitatingly accepting the breakfast offered by that person just to bolster the made out adverse family situation story, perhaps tantamounts to hoodwinking a stranger, and not merely winking at him!

    I, for one, wouldn't expect any boy in my family to behave like that.

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  8. What a beautiful whipping up this story is about! I read it a few times over and found both the young boy and 'me' saying the right things, though 'my' conclusions from what the boy said could be somewhat presumptuous!

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  9. It is difficult to fathom what goes on in the minds of young boys or for that matter girls too. Some are having fertile thinking habit having practiced story writing in school assignments. I am not surprised by the behaviour of the boy. I would have fallen in his trap in such a surrounding.

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  10. Beautiful very good story. Thanks.ramakrishnan.

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  11. Brave boy with cunningness

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  12. Interesting story. The boy Is extra smart and the uncle is naive. When you have an assigned seat with a seat number and your name, never ever exchsnge to another person. If there is an unfortunate accident your family will never be able to identify your body.

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  13. Interesting story! The boy must be enjoying reciting this story with his thaaththa' s family and friends. Uncle must be enjoying how a small boy cheated him with a bull-story and he went along (just for fun, I made up)...anyway I enjoyed reading this story....Sandhya

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  14. His grandparents stayed & so nice they came to receive him.
    The affluent boy faked a sob story about step-mother & that he was running away from home.
    Relieved to know the truth. His mother actually called many times!

    Kids travelling alone is pretty unsafe & many do fall prey to unscrupulous people... Not many co-passengers help/offer like the protagonist did.

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  15. Rama Sampath Kumar: A nice way to have fun and enjoy a journey for the youngster while travelling alone! The thrill he got by fooling the elderly gentleman is just so well narrated - this story turns humorous only at then end!! Certainly surprises the reader who keeps feeling sympathy for the little fellow! As usual a story well told!

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  16. ‘Nice story- loved the twist and didn’t expect it’

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  17. Interesting story. But it is not at all safe to trust a total stranger what with many negative, violent things happening these days.

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  18. Very clever boy. He knows how to get on in life.

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  19. Nice tale !
    The young boy is at the perfect age, full of imagination! No wonder he takes the co-passenger for a ride!

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