After a hard day's work, I was returning to my room by the fast local. it would be 9 pm by the time I reached my place. As it would be too late to cook, I decided to have my dinner from the roadside 'Dhaba’. They make tasty food no doubt and at affordable rates though they recycle the used oil till it gets exhausted.
My parents were looking for a suitable match for me and the photos of a
few they sent did not enthuse me. Though not aiming at a drop-down stunner, I
was not prepared to settle for a plain looking Jane.
The train was crowded but I managed to secure a seat. Still, the
oppressive humidity, the hot breaths of passengers close to me, and the body
odour from their perspiration made the journey extremely uncomfortable. Just as
I reached for my handkerchief to cover my nose, I turned to my right and what I
saw made my heart skip a beat. Such beauty, such perfection in creation- no
sight can be more captivating. I forgot my handkerchief but adjusted my sitting
posture to enjoy an uninterrupted view for the rest of the journey.
There was a faint smile at the corner of her lips and her eyes twinkled
as a stray strand of hair curled insouciantly on her forehead. She wore a
sleeveless blouse and a thin yellow saree was draped carelessly over her chest and
shoulder. I could tell she was looking at me from the corner of her eyes, her
gaze unmistakable and unhidden. This emboldened me to gaze at her uninterrupted
except for short breaks to avoid disapproving stares from other passengers at
my crude ogling. I had four more stations to go and wished that the train
travelled slower yearning to feel the slight touch of her skin.
When the train stopped at the next station, the passenger seated beside
me abruptly stood up closing the glossy foreign fashion magazine that had
featured her on the centre fold. In that instant, my dreamy interlude came to a
sudden end and the nauseating odour started assailing my nose with a
vengeance.
Didn't know so much creativity could be packed in just 359 words! A lovely, breezy story that speaks volumes about the writer! I long to read the author's stories!
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ReplyDeleteA charming and lighthearted story that perfectly captures the magic of fleeting moments. The subtle humour and warmth make it a delightful read
A sweet and relatable glimpse into those small but memorable everyday moments!
Hahahahaha 👌🏽 -Meka
ReplyDeleteIntriguing story. Did not get bored at all,,,,, Sandhya
ReplyDeleteWhat just hit me! A wicked twist... Lovely story:)
ReplyDeleteBeauty is ephemeral although its lowering effect on the plain is permanent. (JJ)
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