Devadasan wanting to reach his
village early took a shortcut through the wood instead of the regular and long
road. He aimed to cover what would have taken two hours by road in half the
time. It was only 4 PM, and the day was bright. The forest was alive with the sounds
of birds chirping overhead, squirrels darting between the trees, and the gentle
rustling of leaves in the breeze. With no fear or second thoughts, he ventured
deeper into it.
After an hour had passed, an
unsettling silence crept in. What he had once felt vibrant and alive now seemed
ominous still. The leaves hung motionless, the squirrels had vanished, and the birds'
songs had fallen silent. As darkness swiftly enveloped the wood, a wave of
anxiety and fear washed over him. Instinctively, Devadasan made the sign of the
cross with his hand. He stood at the crossroads of indecision, with several
forks in the pathway, unable to go back and too afraid to move forward.
Scanning his surroundings, he
spotted a faint glow in the distance. a dim light, filtering through the trees.
He was unsure whether to proceed towards the dim light till he saw a faint sign
of a cross there. Driven by hope and faith not knowing what else to do, he
pushed through the thick underbrush until he reached a small, solitary hut. He
called out twice, but only silence greeted him. With caution, he eased the door
open and peered inside. To his surprise, the hut was empty. In a corner, there
was a tiny oil lamp flickering weakly, casting a long shadow across the mud
floor. A pot of water sat beside it. Besides a charpoy, there was no other sign
of life or habitation.
He waited, expecting someone to
return, but no one came. Exhausted, he lay down on the cold, hard bench and
soon drifted into a deep sleep.
As dawn broke, the world seemed
to come alive. The birds had started singing again, and the squirrels had
returned, running and sprinting playfully across the dewy grass. Devadasan woke
up, confused but calm. The eerie night felt like a distant nightmare. He
glanced around for the lamp and the pot of water, but both had mysteriously vanished.
Startled, he found himself sitting on the floor with no charpoy in sight. He began
searching the small hut, looking for any trace of what had happened. He came
away from the place only to find to his great horror a tall anthill a few yards
away.
Quickly he moved away and saw a
branch of a tree hanging horizontally across a small tree, that he mistook as a
cross the previous night A slow smile spread across his face. There was now gratitude
in his heart, joy in his mood and a spring in his walk towards his village.
A beautiful story fortifying our belief in God. As said.. "Faith is unseen but felt, faith is strength when we feel we have none, faith is hope when all seems lost." As always well narrated.
ReplyDeleteNice story. Appears that faith can create miracle! Atin
ReplyDeleteЁЯШГ The reverse of what we expect.....arandavan kannukku irundathellaam paeii...... good one .....ЁЯСМЁЯП╜.Meka
ReplyDeleteUnfinished agenda finished!
ReplyDeleteNice story. Ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteAs the daylight faded and the shadows lengthened in the woods, the mind started playing all kinds of tricks on Devadasan. Undeterred, he still pushed on.
ReplyDeleteCome the daybreak, hope, sanity and confidence returned.
God does help those who help themselves!
Thanks for another story reinforcing faith in God, else how would a scared person see a cross and imagine a cosy hut in the jungle? -- Thangam
ReplyDeleteRama Sampath Kumar: Many a time our life’s journey, is filled with darkness. Darkness can be terrifying when we’re stuck, unable to navigate our way ahead.
ReplyDeleteIn such moments it’s natural to hang on to faith and hope and look for a way out. Your piece shows us that a turning point awaits us further down the road. For instance, the cycle of darkess in the evening gives rise to the light at dawn.Within this order, we can feel that life reassures us nothing is permanent; every experience endures its own rebirth. A lovely piece with a deep meaning .
Short and Sweet! An experience deep in the woods, very realistically captured. Firing up peoples' imagination in less than 500 words is such a brilliant art!
ReplyDeleteVery atmospheric! You are a consummate storyteller- Arvind Rajan
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