Friday, November 26, 2010

55 Word fiction

Obsession
He made sure to see her thrice daily.


Her blue eyes, the way she spoke and her smile made her his obsession.

She never knew his love for her.

She talked a lot but never to him .

She just ignored him.

He hung on to her words till his mom switched off the TV


16 comments:

  1. Dear Partha,
    Good Evening!
    Short and sweet!
    The unknown love is always a treasure to be cherished!
    Romantic verses bloom in your heart so well.:)
    Wishing you a lovely evening,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  2. Funny mood today :-)
    lols

    Short but great !!!

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  3. Excellent Fabulous Write Up. Specially The Last Line,
    He hung on to her words till his mom switched off the TV

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  4. oh ho all for the sake of a TV
    and you had me thinking whats gonna happen


    nice one

    Bikram's

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  5. Lol
    That skyrocketed and came to ground zero in no time …
    The best thing is it all happened in the space of a few words ….

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  6. He hung on to her words till his mom switched off the TV

    ...ha,ha,ha.... Good one.

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  7. and they say, it is the ladies who stay glued and relate to the characters in the TV

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  8. Ha! Ha! Looks like he had a crush on Aishwarya Rai.

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  9. hmm u tricked ur readers :)) gr8 one!

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  10. happy ending stories . Nice :)

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  11. Ha ha ha... Interesting twist KP!

    Were you ever attracted to a pretty tv host like your character in your fiction?

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