Friday, November 26, 2010

55 Word fiction

Obsession
He made sure to see her thrice daily.

Her blue eyes, the way she spoke and her smile made her his obsession.

She never knew his love for her.

She talked a lot but never to him .

She just ignored him.

He hung on to her words till his mom switched off the TV

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16 comments:

  1. chitraNovember 26, 2010 at 3:39 PM

    Ha..ha..good one.

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  2. WhirlwindNovember 26, 2010 at 4:38 PM

    Nice one!

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  3. anupamaNovember 26, 2010 at 4:44 PM

    Dear Partha,
    Good Evening!
    Short and sweet!
    The unknown love is always a treasure to be cherished!
    Romantic verses bloom in your heart so well.:)
    Wishing you a lovely evening,
    Sasneham,
    Anu

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  4. AnyaNovember 26, 2010 at 5:03 PM

    Funny mood today :-)
    lols

    Short but great !!!

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  5. CreativityNovember 26, 2010 at 5:56 PM

    Excellent Fabulous Write Up. Specially The Last Line,
    He hung on to her words till his mom switched off the TV

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  6. Destiny's child...November 26, 2010 at 6:08 PM

    Poor chap! :D

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  7. BikramNovember 26, 2010 at 6:43 PM

    oh ho all for the sake of a TV
    and you had me thinking whats gonna happen


    nice one

    Bikram's

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  8. deepsNovember 26, 2010 at 7:47 PM

    Lol
    That skyrocketed and came to ground zero in no time …
    The best thing is it all happened in the space of a few words ….

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  9. ChitraNovember 26, 2010 at 8:59 PM

    He hung on to her words till his mom switched off the TV

    ...ha,ha,ha.... Good one.

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  10. lakshmiNovember 27, 2010 at 8:09 AM

    and they say, it is the ladies who stay glued and relate to the characters in the TV

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  11. DeepaNovember 27, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    Ha! Ha! Looks like he had a crush on Aishwarya Rai.

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  12. AnonymousNovember 27, 2010 at 11:43 AM

    LOL good one

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  13. A New BeginningNovember 27, 2010 at 1:37 PM

    hmm u tricked ur readers :)) gr8 one!

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  14. SindhuBhairaviNovember 27, 2010 at 4:50 PM

    ha ha :) that was nice!!

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  15. ShafiNovember 28, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    happy ending stories . Nice :)

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  16. AmityNovember 28, 2010 at 3:54 PM

    Ha ha ha... Interesting twist KP!

    Were you ever attracted to a pretty tv host like your character in your fiction?

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