Trring, trring....the telephone rang repeatedly.
It was noon.
"Hello"
"Is Krithika there?"asked a
voice softly
"Madam is taking her bath. Who is calling?"
"Tell me who you are"
"Subbiah, I am the cook .If you
tell me your name, I can inform madam"
“You can say Ravi. Do you work whole
time?"
"No sir, I
will leave in another hour. I work up to 1 pm." "Is the master available at home? I
will have a word with him"
"No sir, he has gone on tour and
will come after two days"
"I will ring after sometime. Is madam
going out?"
"No sir, the car has gone for service.
Madam will be in the house watching TV"
"Why, is there no one else? Kids?"
"No one.She will be alone.. They have no children.
Don’t you know?"
Ravi was very happy. Ever since he met
her in a party, he was struck by her beauty. She even danced with him but was
half drunk. Whether by design or accident, her body frequently brushed with his
and he took that she was indicating her interest. But she never asked his name
or details. She went away dancing with others. Ravi elicited her name and
number from the hostess.
From then on he stalked her. But she
never showed sign of recognition or interest even when he accosted her once and mentioned
about her dancing with him. She did not seem to recollect though she admitted that
she attended the party. She brushed aside his advances and requested him not to
bother her. But he was not one to take a no easily.
The opportunity he had been waiting for
had materialized today. He had a shower and dabbed himself with deodorant.
Exactly after one hour he went to her place and rang the bell hoping to catch
her alone. He was confident that his masculine charm can overcome her initial
resistance.
One man looking like a servant opened
the door and asked him to come in and be seated. When Ravi looked questioningly,
he said" I am Subbiah.I had informed madam about your phone call. Aren't you
mister Ravi? She is expecting you"
"Oh, very good. You had said that
your job is up to 1pm."
"Yes sir, I was held up. I will get
you coffee and then go away"
"No, no.I don't need anything. I
don't want to detain you. You can go. I will also go after a few minutes"
"Okay sir. I will inform madam.
Please wait"
A couple of minutes later Subbiah in a
clean shirt and pant with his arm on Krithika along with an inspector of police entered the
hall.
The inspector held Ravi's arm even when
Krithika was telling "This is the guy who has been stalking me and
frequently telephoning. He will tell his name and plead with me to meet him.
When I stopped answering, he would still ring and I could hear the heavy breathing.
I was hesitant to tell my husband initially and one day when he asked why I shuddered
whenever the phone rang, I confided in him. Today he duped this guy as if he is
a cook and made him come telling that I am alone."
Abruptly Ravi fell at the feet of
Krithika and said" Please forgive me this time. I will no more trouble you.
Since you were on intimate terms with my friends Subash and Kumar, I thought you
would be friendly with me too. I am sorry"
“It is a lie, a blatant lie” she
screamed
“No, I can bring them to you and make
them tell” Ravi protested
Krithika's face became pale and lowering
her head she ran inside her room even as her husband looked at her in utter disbelief.
Suddenly the inspector turned to Ravi
and bellowed angrily " Get lost this moment, you wretch. Next time I see you stalking her or telling lies,
I will put you in jail and torture you."
The inspector friend then gently put his
arm on her dazed husband and led him to the sofa.
The twist in the tale was good. It might take sometime for the husband to calm down!
ReplyDeleteExpect the unexpected.
ReplyDeleteA good twist, but makes one read on.
Good One ! You surely have a flair to give interesting twists to your stories. This twist was least unexpected!
ReplyDeleteMoral of the story: Drinking is bad for health and... :P
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Police officer is a good twist for story :)) Loved itt!!
ReplyDeleteAwwww.................
ReplyDeleteOuch, I thought you'd end with the whole plan of setting a trap but you took it one step further! You're a master story teller where twists are concerned!
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ReplyDeleteRavi bowled a beautiful googly.Poor hubby - in utter shock & bewilderment !
ReplyDeleteInteresting story.I thought she retained the Subbaiha for her help from Ravi..
ReplyDeletewhat a twist KP... didn't expect :):)
ReplyDeleteinteresting and griping !