Swapan entered the bedroom
looking for Divya.Not finding her, he found the bathroom was also vacant. He
was to leave for Mumbai early morning the next day. Wondering where she would
have gone, he looked out of the window to see her talking across the fence to Shanthi
their neighbor. He saw her iPad open on the bed. He wished to shut it when he
chanced upon an email. Not one given to reading her mails, he was impelled to
read when he saw the salutation as Divya dearest. One can gauge what went
through his mind when he read the following mail
Divya dearest,
After my chat with you yesterday I could
hardly sleep the whole night. I need to meet you soonest. You were mentioning that
we can meet leisurely when your husband goes on tour. You were also telling he
may go tomorrow morning. Can we meet tomorrow at Dominos near your home at 10 am
and decide the venue where we can spend the day together.
I have lots of things to share with you.
I loved and married a wrong person. My spouse is a clumsy blunderbuss. We are
incompatible in every aspect, physical, intellectual and emotional. We frequently
quarrel and stop talking to each other for days. I derive no joy from that good
for nothing. My marriage has utterly failed. I wish to put an end to this farce.
You are my only recourse. We have been very
close since our college days and we keep our friendship as green as ever even
after marriage. I need an outlet and look to you for my next step. You were
mentioning that though your marriage cannot be termed as a failure it lacked
the fizz and excitement of the initial years. We are in the same boat somewhat,
lols.Looking forward to meet you tomorrow. Send me a sms.
Love and hugs
R
Swapan became confused.
“Who is this R close to her since college days whom she has not mentioned about
but whom she is meeting regularly? Is she taking off from work tomorrow for
this secret rendezvous? What is the crap about lack of fizz and excitement?
This tour is not important. I am having headache. I will not go but will leave
home early as planned” he was telling himself. He left the iPad as it was and
sat in the hall before TV.
Meanwhile Divya
came in laughing to herself. On seeing him looking at her she said “Sorry,
Shanthi was talking to me and would never let me go. She was complaining about
her in-laws who were expected to arrive tomorrow”
“What is there to
laugh about for you?” he asked rather abrasively
“Nothing” she
replied hurt by the tone of his voice.
“I will call you at
your office tomorrow after reaching Mumbai around 11am” he said casually
“No, I am not going
to office tomorrow. I just wish to relax” she replied.
He did not react
and left the hall quietly. He was now convinced something was amiss that needed
to be probed.
The next day around
10.30 am he entered Dominos with his hat drawn, sun glasses and a false mustache,
He saw in the corner Divya talking animatedly with another lady of her age.
After some time they left and he quietly followed them to find them entering
his house. Am I being foolish or has she got a scent of his reading her mail,
he wondered?
He rang her up
after a while and asked “How are you? I hope you are relaxing free from office
pressures”
“I am enjoying with
my friend Ranjana, my closest buddy since my college days. She sent me an email
asking me to meet her today at Dominos. Poor thing, she is passing through
troubled times with her hubby and looking to me for advice” she replied.
“I know. What
advice can you offer in a personal matter like that” he asked
“How do you know””
she asked
“I know because you
were telling me. Do you suspect me reading your mails?”
“No, not at all. I was
just telling her that after sometime small differences crop up and that she
should give him his space. I even fibbed to her that the fizz and excitement
have gone out of our lives too though you know it has surely not” she said with a giggle.”I
wish that you meet her one of the weekends at our home’ she added
Late that night
when they were in the bed, he whispered into her ears” Is it that you miss the
fizz these days” and dragged her close to him even as she hit him gently on his chest in feigned anger.
“Thank god if he
has seen just that mail. Let me clear my inbox first thing early morning” she
decided
I liked the O' Henry kind of finish - twist in the last line. Nicely written
ReplyDeleteAs always KP, a really good one!The twist was just too good.
ReplyDeleteI love twist in the tale in your stories...this is interesting! I didn't expect the last line though!!!
ReplyDeleteHi KP :-) At your usual 'mysterious' writing self, aye? An interesting read.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day. Blessings!
It was predictable, until the last line. The TWIST.
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
Rendezvous turned to be s social meeting.
ReplyDeletehahaha...what a finish :P You are one master story teller, KP :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting story.
ReplyDeleteLOL...
ReplyDeleteI liked this story , quite interesting.. :)
ReplyDeleteSir, really enjoy your writings! So fluent the flow and such varied topics and almost feel like am reading good vikatan stories! :) Very vivid the descriptions and characterisations. I know I have not been regular here, or any blogs these days. But really appreciate your regular work here and would love to come whenever I can. And thank you for your constant support and encouragement at my blog too.
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