It was a small tenement with just one room,
a small hall and a smaller kitchen. Bhagyam usually lay in the bed opposite a
TV in the hall. She was living alone here after her husband died. She was
getting a small government pension. She had no children but had siblings who
rarely visited her.
She had been having fever for the last
two days and was feeling weak and exhausted. She was past 75 and saw no purpose
in her aimless life. She was not able to read with her poor vision.TV was the
only diversion for her but volume had to be kept high these days. Luckily her neighbour
did not complain. There was nothing to look forward to and each day was no
different from the other.Except for her young lady neighbour who was kind to
her and made daily visits asking her whether she needed any grocery, she had no
friends. Nevertheless she often prayed for deliverance from this miserable
life.
It was past 10 pm and the TV was blaring.
Bhagyam suddenly felt a shadow flitting across the room.To her shock she saw a
tall, big, dark man standing near the door with protruding big eyes and with
long mustache that policemen generally flaunt. He was bare bodied with a dhoti
tied through the legs. He had a rope on one hand and a big mace on the other.
The door was locked and she wondered how he could have entered.
"Who are you? How did you enter? What is
this strange outfit like Yama (god of death)? Are you an actor come straight
from shooting studio? What brought you here? "she asked with no fear in
her voice.
"You are right. I am indeed Yama
come to take your life. Your time is up. I can enter through any barrier and
travel anywhere on my mount" he replied in a loud and baritone voice
"Hahaha, I was actually praying for
your visit and God had at last answered my prayers. Where is your mount anyway?"
she said with a big toothless smile. She then heard a grunt from outside.
"People in death bed shudder at my sight
and even die before I use my rope. You seem a strange and fearless woman. What
is your full name by the way? asked Yama
"What a blunderbuss you are coming all
the way to take my life without even knowing my name? I am Bhagyam anyway"
"What is your husband's name?"
“Have you come to take my life or my
husband's? For your information someone of your clan took him away ten years back.
His name is Kannabiran"
"Oh my God, is there anyone by name
Kannayiram in this building?"
"Yes, he lives next door and his
wife's name is also Bhagyam. Why do you want to know about them, tell me now?
"Sorry, grandma. There has been a mistake.
I actually came looking for Bhagyam Kannayiram but had wrongly entered your
house"
"What a clumsy fellow you are? The
municipal clerk who collected Aadhar details is much smarter than you. Mind you,
you cannot touch her after you have blundered and scared me needlessly. She is
my only bulwark. Take me instead or leave her alone. This is the minimum I beg
of you. People say you are very just”
The dark figure seemed to smile at her as
it vanished.
The next moment Bhagyam heard a loud wail
from the adjacent flat. She got up hit by panic and ambled her way hurriedly to the flat to learn that
the younger Bhagyam had fallen in the bath room and possibly broken her leg.
"Is she otherwise ok"asked the
old woman to Kannayiram.
"I think so and she is sitting on
the sofa and talking normally" he said
"Grandma, I am fine. Nothing is
wrong with me. It could be just a sprain and not even a fracture" the
younger Bhagyam said
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Hmm.. so Yama does listen or do all gods listen? hilarious one KP
ReplyDeleteInteresting...
ReplyDeletehahahah.. I like this. Thanks. And blessings, too, for you and your family.
ReplyDelete:) Nice one. I was expecting something other. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, this is an interesting new plot, Partha Sir!
ReplyDeleteIs it time for computerization of life-documents with people's correct address and door numbers?
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
What if such things really happen.... I mean picking up the wrong person.
ReplyDeleteGreat! Excellent Narration :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely little story! :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked it. Lord Yama is kind!
Great narration laced with the best humor I have read in the recent past, lovely!
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteand a great narration...! :)
Cheers
Khushi
liked it...I wish Lord Yama was like that:)
ReplyDelete:) nice liked the pun in the post :) good one KP
ReplyDeleteNice conclusion.
ReplyDeletePoor Yama also needs ID proof. All because Chitragupt had not entered the data correctly in the MIS!!
ReplyDeleteHaha. Very interesting pa especially the ending :)
ReplyDeleteHaha, interesting pa, especially the ending :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting that even the Gods make mistakes!
ReplyDeletedropping by from the WoW prompt.
nice idea :) loved the ending :)
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this. nicely put
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Congrats on the WOW Badge.
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