That was the last local. There were very
few passengers in the train. Ravi had an hour’s journey to make. He chose a
corner of the compartment to snatch some sleep. At the next station someone had
boarded the train and came straight to the corner Ravi had chosen. There were
four or five scattered passengers towards the other end.
“Lucky I could get into this train. I am
told this is the last one”, he said
Ravi just nodded as he did not like this
interruption to his sleep. But the fat man had other ideas possibly wished to
chat during the entire journey.
“Do you take this last train daily? Are you
working somewhere?” he asked.
“Yes, I work in an IT company and
usually take the earlier train. I was held up today”
“Good. I know IT companies pay very well
for the hard work you put in and work only five days. You must be married and
living with your family”
Ravi did not respond and looked out at
the passing lights and cars.
“I am sorry if I had asked you personal questions.
I cannot resist asking as I have one qualified younger sister to be married.”
“It is okay. I am single and living
alone.”
“Where do you live? I am in Egmore”
“I am also in Egmore” Ravi said with a
smile
“Where?”
“I live in the first floor of the house adjacent
to Hotel Simha.It is close to railway station”
“Won’t you be disturbing your land lord going at this
late hour?”
“No, there is separate staircase and
entrance on the side. He may not even know when I come or go.”
“Being alone how do you spend time?”
I have my desktop, laptop, iPad, a small
TV, DVD and musical instruments. I enjoy myself with these” said Ravi
“It is surprising we haven’t met so far.
Any way please excuse me, I have an urgent call to make. Nice to meet you” said
the fat guy
Ravi closed his eyes relieved that he
had been let off by the bore so soon.
A short while later the fat guy dialed
some number and talked almost in a whisper. Ravi thought he was considerate to
him thinking he was asleep.
“Pandi, listen carefully. I am
travelling in train and cannot talk loudly. One guy is beside me sleeping. I
mentioned to you about that house in Ekattuthangal.I went to that area to inspect
as there was some complaint about signal being weak. I assumed it was that
house” and stopped talking turning to Ravi’s side. Finding Ravi sleeping he
continued in very low voice”There was none in that house as no one answered the
bell. I went to the rear side to see whether anyone was there. Finding none and
curiosity overcoming caution, I gently pushed the door. To my great surprise it
opened and the house bore no semblance of occupation.”
Ravi pretending to be asleep strained
his ears to listen as the telephonic talk became intriguing.
“I am telling the truth, Pandi.It is no
reel (imaginary falsehood).I gingerly walked in inspecting each room. They must
be rich with all floors carpeted, top class furniture, curios etc.I was careful
not to touch anything. Are you listening, Pandi? Here comes the important part.
I swear you will not believe what I am going to tell you”
Ravi could not contain his curiosity and
strained every nerve to catch the conversation.
The fat man continued on the phone.”I
went inside one large bedroom. There were three Godrej Almirahs.I suddenly panicked.
What if someone comes and catches me in the house, I wondered. I would be
branded a thief and handed over to police. Then I thought having come this far why
not see a little more. I tried to open one almirah.It did not open. Then I
tried the other. That too did not budge. When I tried the third, lo, it opened.
In my amazement I opened the locker door and that was also unlocked. Believe me,
there were wads and wads of currency notes may be running into several lakhs or
crores in higher denomination. Must be ill gotten money stashed away, I presumed.
I just took two wads .I had an apprehension it could be counterfeit as
otherwise who would leave it unsecured. I closed the doors and left them as it
was wiping the handles of any finger print. Without telling the source, I had
two notes from the bundle checked by my bank friend. He said they are genuine.”
He turned to Ravi’s side and found him
snoring mildly.”Pandi, listen carefully. Tomorrow sharp at 7am we will be there.
As you come from the main road it is Third Street to left. There is a post box opposite
the cream colored house. There are vacant plots on both sides. The fence is
green shrubbery. Bring a sturdy bag with you. We should not be greedy and take
a small portion each time.Good, so you will be there at 7 am sharp tomorrow.”
He saw Ravi in slumber and nudged him
when the train reached Egmore station. Both got down and went their separate
ways.
Ravi set the alarum at 5am and left in
his motorbike by 530 next morning to Ekattuthangal to steal a march over the
fat man and his accomplice .The directions were so clear, he thought, if the
job were done smoothly, he would be rich. He was there by 6 am but could find
no house with vacant plots on either side or one with a green fence and a post
box opposite. Could it be 2nd street or 4th street? He roamed
hither and thither till he finally gave up his hunt.
When he returned home disappointed and
climbed the stairs tiredly, he found to his shock the door ajar and every
little thing in his place taken away.
LMAO.... excellent twist... greed takes it all ....
ReplyDeleteHahahahahaa......was glued till the end....nice twist
ReplyDeleteGood one. Liked the twist. So much so for greed
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ReplyDeleteLol:)..good twist!
ReplyDeletehaha.. I guessed it with your long description :) :)
ReplyDeleteI sort of guessed it, but it was suspenseful nevertheless :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
I felt that there would be a twist somewhere!! You are very good with mystery stories.
ReplyDeleteI too some what guessed the climax.
ReplyDeleteThe twist is ok. But what makes me wonder is the plot used by the fat fellow. He could have walked in anytime this Ravi was out and gotten away with the spoils?
ReplyDeleteWasn't he compromising his position presuming that Ravi would fall for his story and decide to thieve?
haha... absolutely brilliant
ReplyDeleteNice twist in the tale! Enjoyed reading it. This time I didn't guess the twist!
ReplyDeleteVEry nice story with a twist..but what is El dorado? and why did you choose this title for the story
ReplyDeleteHa ha... you made me read till the end..... and that is the hallmark of a good story teller.
ReplyDeleteWhen he rattled out the list desktop, laptop, iPad, TV, DVD, I had a doubt what is coming (for him)
haha... superb sir :)
ReplyDeleteSo clever a thief! And such a foolish Ravi .Interesting.
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