It was past 9 pm and the broad road was desolate except for the occasional speeding cars. On one side of the road, there were high-rise buildings housing several big IT companies and on the other side an elevated metro line and railway station. Usually, the place jostled with activity during the daytime with office goers and small vendors. The metro station was also busy with passengers coming in and going out. After 7 pm, a ghostly silence descends on the place and the road becomes empty. The trains are also few and far between and the station has an empty look.
Billa and Ranga were walking on the road after dinner and drink booze from a restaurant
and bar a little away. They were the last customers before the restaurant
pulled down its shutters for the day. They were on the high and were walking
unsteadily on the road near the IT offices talking loudly and singing film
songs intermittently.
“Billa, look ahead. We seem to be fortunate today. A young woman is
walking alone ahead of us. She must have been delayed at the office. A foolish
girl, obviously,” said Ranga.
Billa shrunk his eyes and struggled to focus on the figure walking ahead.
He said, “Yeah, a tall woman in jeans and a top. Let us hurry and close the gap
before she reaches the main road.”
As they hurried their steps, she increased her pace. These two guys in
turn rushed and were almost running to narrow the gap. When they came closer,
they saw her turning her head under the street light to see them stalking but strangely
slowed down her steps.
Ranga said, “Billa, what a
beautiful woman and a nice catch if only we can lay our hands on her! We seem
to be in luck today.”
Billa said, “Ranga, look, she seems to have now slowed down her walk
possibly waiting for us to come near her.”
They caught her up soon and Ranga asked, “Why are you walking alone in
this deserted at this hour? Aren’t you afraid?
“No, what should I be afraid of? I am accustomed to walking alone on
this road and have had no trouble,” she said.
“What a foolish girl you are! Haven’t you heard of people getting frequently
mugged and women criminally assaulted here on this stretch? I think you should
not have chosen to walk today. We will accompany you, especially in the dark
stretch ahead without lights till we reach the main road,” said Billa in what
seemed a friendly tone.
“You do not seem to have listened properly. I told you that I had been
walking alone a few times till I was alive and continue walking almost daily
these days,” she said with a bewitching smile.
“What crap you are telling? Don’t think so you can get away with such a prattle from us today,” said Billa with a lecherous smile, as he stretched his
hand to put on her shoulders with Ranga closing to prevent her escape.
“Do you think so? See me now,” she said, as the duo saw before them a
skeleton having a big head with hollow eyes, toothless and wide jaws, dangling legs
and unduly long hands staring at them.
They let out a shrill scream in
fear and ran helter-skelter down the street in the opposite direction with the
figure chasing and howling behind them.
Totally different genre; wonderful to read nonetheless!
ReplyDeleteJanardhan N
That was a surprising end, and a new style for you. I was expecting the lady to show some martial arts skills and your end caught me off guard. Good one
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the twist in the end. Super !
ReplyDeleteThank you for entertaining us with your stories
Chitra
The twist in the tale is back! Yaaay!
ReplyDeleteTotally hooked!!
ReplyDeleteSome animals (men) won't even leave a dead girl alone. At least, Billa and Ranga ran away. (Just read in a newspaper this morning some guys were having fun in the mortuary. )
ReplyDeleteThis is new! I too thought she will turn around and hit them black & blue saying she was an officer to catch people like Bill and Ranga:)
ReplyDeleteTwist in the tale 😃 Sadly safety of women continues to be a worry point. Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteInebriated young men are not great arbiters of judging and sure to end the kind of meandering mess. Thought they were under a hallucination of seeing a shadow which evaporated in thin air. The blunt twist made the story really enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteA great twist indeed. Message to all the men some beautiful ladies seen on lonely roads are more than just ladies. I wish such surfaced every time a woman was assaulted.
ReplyDeleteSuch a great talent for you. Amazed at how it comes to your mind.
ReplyDeleteInstead of any feeling of unease creeping in, the reader of the ghost story is happy that this time around, the 'victims' were notorious antisocials!
ReplyDeleteHa ha - did not expect this ending 😊👏👏
ReplyDeleteSuperb a good twist
ReplyDeleteNice change in the end.thanks.ramakrishnan.a.
ReplyDeleteHa ha! Loved the ending. Clever use of the names Ranga and Billa, the notorious killers.
ReplyDeleteThe old Billa Ranga case with the enigmatic ‘Partha Twist’ :)) Brilliant 👌🏼
ReplyDeleteThe old Billa Ranga case with the enigmatic ‘Partha Twist’ :) Brilliant 🤩
ReplyDeleteThe only ending I expected from you! Good one!
ReplyDeleteSuper ending!
ReplyDeleteI was hoping she was a ghost! Great that you made her follow them :)
May we have more such ghosts in real life who can teach such men lessons so that no person will even dream of disturbing women.
Totally enjoyed this story with the unexpected ending even though I was waiting for the twist. Totally caught me off guard 😁
ReplyDeleteWhat a chutzpah to spin a yarn like this! :-) :-) :-)
ReplyDeleteFun reading it! Thanks for sharing!
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
I am amazed by your thought process. You have an eternal fountain of plots . Waiting for the next one eagerly . Hope to see these published soon
ReplyDeleteGhost who walks and drives away evil.
ReplyDeleteEvery story has a different twist. Was a little scary but loved the ending. Your creativity at its best.
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