Monday, February 10, 2025

The nomad's unfailing prediction (825 words)

Ramalingam was a worried man these days. The condition of his wife who was ailing with a serious heart complaint for some years had deteriorated suddenly. She had difficulty in breathing and was unable to exert even a little. The doctors had said that nothing could be done to arrest her progressively worsening condition and that she should just manage with medicines and rest as much as possible. Though the couple never spoke about it, they knew the end was not very far, maybe a year or two or even less. They were living alone in their flat with their sons living abroad. Ramalingam spent long hours daily praying to God to give her a long life. They were a loving couple and were averse to living with their sons in foreign countries.

It was one early morning around 5 am they heard a kudukudupandi (a gypsy like tribe) at some distance on the road making a loud noise with his rattle (udukkai). These gypsies are generally attired in a black coat like a sherwani often tattered and stitched at several places with dozens of small bits of clothes in different colours on their shoulders. They have a big red dot above a black line drawn with a khajal between the eyes. They generally sport a long moustache.

They follow the rattling with predictions of the events likely to befall some of the residents of the small street. The one today on the road invoked the names of Demi goddesses “Oh Jakkamma, Oh Makkali, Oh Bhagwati.” The couple fully awake trembled with fear as they heard the approaching kudukudupandi. They pretended, however, to be asleep with their eyes closed each wanting the other not to hear the forecast. Although afraid of any adverse tidings, they still could not resist the temptation to listen. They waited for him to approach their apartment. They sharpened their ears to listen to the predictions with rapt attention.

 As he came near the apartment complex, there was a brief silence followed by a long rattling of the rattle( udukkai) before making general statements of good times to come (Nalla kalam pirakkudhu) for the residents before turning to specifics. He said one prince would be born to a girl within a week, one man would turn a sanyasin and run away from the house and one death of a female would occur within three days in the vicinity. Usually, superstitious people were apprehensive of this tribe as what they said usually occurred.

Their lifestyle was shrouded in mystery and what they did during the day was unknown. It was believed they spent the nights in burial grounds doing occult practices to gain the skill to predict correctly. They usually come again after the day break and collect alms from the households. Most people out of fear that he would curse never refuse and even turn generous giving away old clothes besides rice and money.

Ramalingam and his wife unknown to each other listened to the prediction of the imminent death of a female. Both never spoke about it to the other though anxiety and fear were writ large on their faces. Ramalingam did puja that day for a longer period and went to a Ganesh temple nearby.

 The old lady knew her end was near but was unwilling to leave her husband alone. She knew his adamant nature and aversion to staying with sons. That night she heard dogs bark incessantly, not a good sign, as dogs have the power to see Yamadhuthas and ghosts. This accentuated her fear. Ramalingam made discreet enquiries about an old woman in the adjacent complex who was unwell with typhoid. To his dismay, he heard that she had recovered well. The second night Ramalingam’s wife had a dream of ugly and grotesque faces that were scary. She remembered her grandma saying that such faces appear before death signifying the awaiting hell. She also spent the day in silence and prayer  like her husband. In the evening, she gently told him that if anything were to happen to her, he must not stand on false prestige and live alone. He chided her asking her not to talk rubbish and that she would live longer than him. She fell silent thereafter.

It was the third night. Both could not sleep. He put his arm around her as they were sleeping. She snuggled close to him. There was an amalgam of apprehension love, concern, warmth, and gratitude in those moments. The night passed away smoothly with nothing untoward happening.

It was 6 am. A greatly relieved Ramalingam hurried to get milk from the milkman in the adjacent compound to make hot coffee for his dear wife. When he neared the shed, he heard a loud wail of the milkman’s wife and milkman. It transpired that one of the cows had died the previous night while giving delivery to a calf.

The nomad’s prediction has after all come true.

23 comments:

  1. The emotional bonding , concerns and support between the couple are beautifully narrated in this story 👍

    Chitra

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  2. The way the prediction came true is a pleasant anticlimax. But it brought out beautifully the old couple's deep love and care for each other. Loved the story. Atin Biswas

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  3. A beautifully narrated story highlighting the true love and mutual respect they have for each other. We don't hear these kudukudupandis now I remember we used to hear them as kids& my mom telling me their prophecy was true.

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  4. Ammavukku nalla kaalam pirandhaachu

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  5. You kept the readers engaged till the end . Evoked nostalgia about the kudukudupandis and their bulls .

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  6. Absolutely SWEET story revolving around typical ancient practices in our country - the magnificent Bharat! Takes the reader on a nostalgic trip and leaves one pondering about many interesting aspects of human living! Lovely piece!

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  7. Kudukudupandi - still shivering at the mention of the name

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  8. Very nice story. Ramakrishnan.

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  9. Lovely story with a nice ending. The narrative style helps the readers visualize as they read along.

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  10. What a brilliant choice of picking a Kudukuduppandi to write a story around! Leads one to reminisce those olden, golden days! And as usual, a story with many imports for the reader. God give long years to the writer to feed us with joy!

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  11. Liked the way the apprehension was portrayed with the couple being apprehensive but not panicky and appreciating the time they had together. Also liked the way the prophesy was made to come true, although not in the way it was expected to! -- Thangam

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  12. An amazing story, bringing back an almost extinct group of Kudukudupandi, and portrayed a brilliant narrative by proving a prophesy was made true. Loved the story very much.

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  13. Loved the narrative. You have expressed the emotions beautifully. Starting with the love between the couple, then moving to the suspense, mystery and fear from the predictions to the relief in the end. Your writing makes it very easy to visualize the situation in our minds. Very nice story and very nicely written.

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  14. Oh interesting. How we jump to the worst possible conclusions. You have kept us tenterhooks with nostalgia from our childhood.

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  15. Fear of death is the biggest fear in all. Though death is the biggest truth, we tend to ignore it for ourselves. Nice story Sir

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  16. Very nicely narrated with a surprising twist in the end!

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  17. Fun story! It really shows how superstitions can mess with people's heads, making them stress over vague predictions. The twist, where highlights how we often misinterpret these things, and a good reminder to stay rational!


    Srikanth

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  18. This is a beautifully written and poignant story. It highlights the unpredictable nature of life and the way we often misinterpret signs and portents. The story subtly explores themes of love, loss, superstition, and acceptance.

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  19. The tension in the narration was maintained till the end. Never expected this twist though...very good one. The love and affection between the couple is explained very well....Good one, Kp....Sandhya

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  20. KP Sir, you almost convinced us that kudukudupandis are genuine soothsayers! Clever ending!!

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  21. Wow! Loved the ending :)

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  22. Now, this is typical and expected of Mr. Parthasarathy. The suspense was maintained till the end.

    Enjoyed reading.

    Best
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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