Suseela was not happy with the new tenants in the adjacent house. She was by nature helpful and non-interfering, yet something about them unsettled her.
It
was a small family of a husband, his wife, and another woman younger than the
wife. Soon after moving in, the wife came to Suseela’s house a few times to ask
about the neighbourhood, but the younger woman never accompanied her. Suseela
was never invited to their home either, nor did the man make any effort to meet
her husband.
In
their small municipal town, news travelled quickly and easily. Suseela learned
that the wife’s name was Champaka and that her husband ran a small
business. But Champaka was reserved, even evasive, especially when Suseela
gently inquired about the other woman, whom she had assumed to be a relative.
Months
passed by before Champaka gradually opened up. One afternoon, when her husband
and the younger woman were away, she confided in Suseela.
Champaka’s
voice trembled as she spoke. She had been married for seven years but remained
childless, a fact her husband never forgave. He abused her constantly, both in
words and blows, and made her toil all day like a servant. The younger
woman, Nalini, was not a sister or cousin as Suseela had thought, but her
husband’s mistress. When Champaka protested, he gave her two choices: to stay
silent and serve them both, or leave the house.
With
no family to return to and no means to survive, Champaka chose to endure.
Suseela’s
heart ached for her. “But Nalini is not even beautiful,” she told her husband
later. “Short, stout, with that loud voice… and poor Champaka, she’s so
graceful and beautiful.”
Her
husband only shrugged. “As long as there’s no complaint or law broken, what can
anyone do?”
Life
went on. Suseela noticed that Nalini often slipped into the house across the
road, the home of a bachelor schoolteacher who also practiced homoeopathy in
the evenings. She had heard Nalini tell Champaka that she was getting treatment
from him for a stomach ailment, but the long visits made Suseela suspicious.
The teacher, too, often seemed at his window, gazing toward Champaka’s house.
“Some
secret romance must be brewing,” Suseela thought, sighing for poor Champaka,
who remained confined in the house.
Every
evening, Suseela prayed that God would make things right for her and that
Nalini would run away with the teacher, leaving Champaka in peace.
And
one bright morning, her prayer seemed to be answered. Her husband returned from
the temple and said, “You won’t believe it. I learn that the teacher has eloped
with a woman from the adjacent house!”
Suseela’s
heart leapt. “Thank you, my God, Guruvayurappa,” she exclaimed, clasping her
hands. Finally, Champaka’s suffering would come to an end!
But
Champaka didn’t come by that day, nor the next. Growing anxious, Suseela went
to her house to share the good news in person.
When
she entered, she stopped short. Nalini was sitting inside : calm, composed,
even smug.
“Where’s
Champaka?” Suseela asked.
Nalini
gave a small, knowing smile. “Don’t you know? Your dear friend Champaka ran
away two nights before with the teacher.”
For
a moment, Suseela stood speechless. Then, as she turned to leave, a quiet smile
spread across her face.
“Good,”
she murmured, “A good turn for Champaka, at last.”

Now this is a juicy store!
ReplyDeleteYou are back in action, alright! 🤣😂
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
I guess in those days,, registering a marriage or a divorce was not a necessary practice. These days legal separation through divorce and legal wedding are much needed for a married life. Hope the teacher and Champaka did those for a much deserving happy married life for both of them.
ReplyDeleteChitra
Very nice story.ramakrishnan.a.
ReplyDeleteWell that was an unexpected twist. Gurvayoorappan answered though differently. I firmly believe he does what is best & deserving. As always well narrated.
ReplyDeleteNice story with an unexpected twist in the end!! God decides every move of ours!! This was the correct judgement for Champaka!! Well narrated!! -- Jayanthi
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story 🙏
ReplyDeleteA twist-filled surprise ending keeps you guessing until the very last moment, leaving you utterly stunned.
ReplyDeleteWith the last twist in the story there is a reason to be happy by all the characters. Susheela is happy for Champa, Champa is happy for herself for the relief from ill treatment by the husband, Nalini should be happy with the change of her status from mistress and husband also is happy for getting rid of his wife. Super. Regards. PKR
ReplyDeleteTo spin such a story in mere 554 words is absolute creative mastery - not over language or literature alone, but the myriad shades of human behaviour fuelled by grotesque needs! Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteSurprise twist.
ReplyDeleteLooks like Suseela has nothing else to do in her life and only interested in what is happening in her neighbor's house.
ReplyDeleteSailed along with the narrator Suseela by feeling sorry about the miserable life of Champaka and the maltreatment meted out to her by her husband and his mistress.
ReplyDeleteAnd finally, lo and behold, Champaka had the last laugh by eloping with the neighbourhood teacher, an act for which none whatsoever could feel unhappy about!
What a masterly story about a problem solver par excellence!
How come Nalini goes to the teacher cum homeopath for treatment of stomach ailment and seems to be making frequent visits. No such visits by Champaka is mentioned in the story
ReplyDeleteHow Champaka eloped with the teacher,no build up clue,sudden event!
Jagadeesan
Really loved this story! It’s simple, natural, and builds up so nicely. The twist at the end was perfect and left such a calm, satisfying feeling. It tied the story beautifully together.
ReplyDeleteThe twist is double whammy in that Champaka is relieved of her miseries for ever and Nalini got her status elevated to Mrs. from mistress. Sad that Sushi is jobless now with no more juicy news to her platter. Great story telling with so much drama in so few words!
ReplyDeleteAll is well that ends well!
ReplyDelete“Sometimes the best answers to prayer are the ones God doesn't answer.”
ReplyDelete― Robin Jones Gunn, Surprise Endings
🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣
ReplyDeleteBut how come 🤔🤔🤔....... I understood 💭💭💭
that it was Nalini........ Champaka didn't even seem to be on talking terms with the teacher cum homeopath..........Mika.
I knew this twist was coming :)
ReplyDeleteHer husband didn't deserve her.
Hmm! a good read .
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