Mohan, a taxi driver, was returning back
from Ooty to Mysore through Bandipur National Park known for its elephant and
tiger reserve. Though he had travelled many times in this picturesque route
studded with variety of trees and had come across elephants, spotted deer, monkeys,
different birds like peacock and eagles, the journey never staled. This day he
had not seen the usual tourist traffic possibly because of forecast of heavy
rain. There was however no rain and the weather was humid. He was in the middle
of forest and it was slightly dark .His bladder was full and stopped to relieve
himself.
As he was drinking water from a Bisleri
bottle, a dark skinny figure clad only around the waist appeared before him. He
had matted hair and long beard. The eyes were deep with a faraway look. He did
not utter a word but looked at him and the bottle. Mohan opened the car and
took out another bottle with cool water and gave it to him saying “Please drink.
The weather is highly humid”
He hesitated for a while looking at him
intently before he accepted. He drank the whole bottle in one go. Mohan felt
pity for him and gave him another bottle saying “You keep it with you. You seem
to be very thirsty. Have you taken any food? Here are two plantains.”
In what appeared as a smile, he bared
his yellow teeth and nodded his head in satisfaction. When Mohan turned to
reach his car, the man said “Just one minute” and looked around on the ground
for something. He picked an old horse shoe and cleaned it with his cloth.
Holding in his palms, he closed his eyes and mumbled something for a couple of minutes.
As Mohan was getting impatient, he opened his eyes and gave him the horseshoe
and said “Keep it carefully. It will grant you two wishes if you hold it
between two palms” Before Mohan could ask anything he had just vanished as
abruptly as he came.
He was amused and started driving back
to Mysore. Suddenly he had the urge to try his luck. He has been dreaming to
own car for tourist taxi purposes hut had no money. Who knows if the bearded
man were a siddha with some occult powers,
he thought to himself. He stopped the vehicle and ensured no one was around. He
stood facing East side and held the horse shoe in his palms after cleaning it.
He closed his eyes repeated his wish “I want a crore of rupees” twice. Nothing
happened and no one appeared before him. He looked around and there was no
semblance of money or a clue.
Disappointed he drove the car cursing
his luck and his unrealized dream. He would have driven for about 30 minutes on
the desolate road. To his great surprise, he found a suit case on the left side
of the road a little ahead. The car screeched to a halt there and he opened the box
to find wads of 1000 rupee notes. He could not believe his luck and gratefully
remembered the siddha purusha. He hid
the money by spreading it in the boot of the car and covered it with bed sheet.
He threw the box away and was in cloud nine as he drove the car thinking of
what model and how many cars to buy. The dream is now within his reach and his
life would be changed. He can now find a good girl and marry.
A little while later he found the road blocked by a barricade by the policemen. When
he stopped the car one policeman ordered him to open the trunk. They were
checking cars that carried freebies, liquor bottles and also cash for distribution
as elections were close by. When they found the money and questioned him its
source he mumbled horse shoe, siddha
and the wish. They slapped him and took him to the lockup in the nearby police station.
Some other policemen came and questioned him further. Much to their annoyance,he
could not tell them more than he saw the suit case and took the money. He could
not explain why he threw the suitcase. They tortured him to make him sing. His
talking about the man who granted him wish infuriated them. They beat him blue
and left him hungry without even water for hours. He never knew when he would
be let out or sent to jail. The whole body ached with bruises all over.
He looked around. There were no windows
save a small opening at the top of wall that was high with no means for an
escape. As he was feeling bad at the adverse turn of circumstances, he felt the
small horseshoe in his hip pocket. He took it out and kept in his palms. As he
surveyed the situation, he knew there was no away to get out unless he was a monkey.
A few minutes later the locked door to the lockup opened and a policeman with
an inspector entered. To their great shock, the driver was not to be seen. They
looked up at the ventilator 14 feet high. No one can jump that high and it was
physically impossible. Trace alerts were sent
Tourists driving along Bandipur forest
have been observing of late a monkey with a horseshoe in its palms looking curiously
at every passerby.
I bet they are wondering about the Monkey and the Mysterious horse-shoe ! A truly entertaining read. How do you weave it so beautifully ! :)
ReplyDeleteVery funny. I thought of different endings but definitely not this. I also like the way you have subtly included a moral like there is nothing like easy money. Very nicely written as usual.
ReplyDeleteArre I saw this monkey with the horse shoe on my recent visit to bandipur :) nicely written as always.
ReplyDeleteExtraordinary read! Hope the monkey gets to meet the siddha again, to become a human again, only this time wiser with a lesson learned!
ReplyDeleteNice one! Hope he meets the siddha again and gets back to be a human again!
ReplyDeleteClassic one KP. What wd u do if you a siddha purusha , perhaps a wish to weave more such intelligent plots.
ReplyDeleteTruly enjoyed the read and also all these comments above! Truly you have great art for story weaving KP!!
ReplyDeletehahaha...twist upon twist...nice :)
ReplyDeletevery good twist..didnt expect it:)
ReplyDeleteThat was a wonderful twist in the end. The talisman saved him, pity that the wishes were restricted to a couple .
ReplyDeleteI liked the story until the climax. Maybe he could have just made a wish to 'go home and find one crore rupees' and leave the logistics part of how this is to be achieved, to the horseshoe? :P
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
hahaha...boons in the hands of a fool is so wasted!
ReplyDeleteOne has to be careful about what one wishes for ) Good one!!!
ReplyDeleteas weird as the case of missing Boeing 777!!
ReplyDeleteSo he is still wishing that the horse shoe will grant him one more wish....ha ha ha. Brilliant
ReplyDeleteHad there been three wishes! poor fellow.Interesting till the end.
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha ha ! ROFL !
ReplyDeleteWonderfully hilarious. A different style of story from your pen.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting the tales you spin :).
ReplyDeletezaaalim ending... hahahaha
ReplyDeleteBrilliant KP sir :) too good! When driver had one more wish why did he think of a monkey - he could have asked to be made the PM of the nation :)
ReplyDeleteOMG thats was awesomely interesting :D loved it KP
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful story. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteWhat a twist! You do have a way with unexpected endings :-))
ReplyDeleteYou write wonderfully, keeping the readers guessing... good story telling skills KP :-)
That was a very interesting story!! And very gripping too!! It is true, we should be careful of what we wish for. :)
ReplyDeleteMystical powers and your story telling prowess .You sure know the ways to grab our attention
ReplyDeleteI never expected the ending... My detective brain started working and I guessed and guessed but not this ending. Loved it...
ReplyDeleteHa haahaa i am still laughing.. One never knows when a genie springs into action.. A marvellous tale that had me in splits
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