I was waiting at the small railway station.
It was cool with big trees lined along the station. I have been here for
more than two hours. Three passenger trains stop either way at this wayside
station for two minutes or so. The next train was expected in an hour. There
were no other passengers seen on the only platform. A couple of cattle were
seen chewing the cud at the far end. One man was sleeping a little yonder, must
be a beggar. There was no waiting room. I was feeling hungry and opened the
packet that my niece had given me. The aroma of pan cakes (dosa) with chili
powder smeared on them triggered my appetite further. I had come to a village
that was a few miles away from station. There was no water with me. I
remembered a small shop outside the station but was hesitant to go leaving my
luggage behind. I looked around. It was only then I spotted a young boy of
about ten years watching me from the entrance gate. His curly hair needed a
cut. He had good features, dark and skinny and his eyes were glued on me. He
came running instantly when I called him.”Can you get me a water bottle from
the shop outside?” I requested him proffering a twenty rupee note. In a trice
he brought it. When I opened the box I found many pancakes and turned to look
at the boy to find he had receded to his corner. I called him again.
“Have these two dosas. Do you live in
the vicinity? Are you studying?”
He started eating with relish and
replied “Yes, I live close to station with my uncle. I am not studying.”
“How come at this young age you are not
attending school. Are there no schools nearby? There is one of course a few kilometers
away from where I came.”
He kept quiet for some time. I prodded
him for an answer giving him one more dosa.That did the trick.
“I am an orphan and living with my
father’s cousin. My aunt has not taken kindly to my coming to live with them.
She stopped me from school and make me help her in the chores. They have two
cows and I take the milk to distribute to customers. I also take care of the animals,
cleaning the shed, washing them and such like.”
“That is totally cruel. Why don’t you
tell your uncle?”
“I did and got beating from both for
complaining ungratefully when they were giving a shelter and food. I stopped
asking and reconciled to my fate. I thought of running away but am afraid.”
“Would you like to come with me to the city?
I will take care of you. I have a girl younger than you to play with. You can
go to the best school. I will come next month. Decide in the meanwhile. I will
talk to your uncle then. It is late this time”
“Thank you, uncle.When will you come?
Please come soon. I wish to attend school”. I saw his eyes were moist.
Meanwhile the train entered the station
with much noise. Soon after there was some activity and from no where a few
passengers appeared and one or two got down from the train. The station master
in his white uniform and with red and green flags came running towards me, may
be because I was the only well dressed guy from the city.
“I failed to meet you earlier as I was
held up elsewhere. Which village are you coming from? I have seen you coming to this place earlier occasions too.
“I came to meet my niece in
Vaidhyanathapuram village for day.I haven’t met you also earlier”
Meanwhile I saw the boy standing at the entrance to the station. I turned to station master and asked him ”Do you see that young boy yonder? Do you know him and his background by any chance?”
Meanwhile I saw the boy standing at the entrance to the station. I turned to station master and asked him ”Do you see that young boy yonder? Do you know him and his background by any chance?”
“Why, did he give any trouble to you/”he
asked anxiously
“No, not at all, I just wished to know”
“He is my son, Mahalingam by name. A
very intelligent boy, he is a topper in his class. He is multi-talented. With
his prodigious memory, he can recite some chapters from Bhagavat Gita and
Narayaneeyam.He can mimic actors like Rajini, Salman Khan and even talk like Amitabh
Bachan.He takes part in all histrionic activities in school. He plays chess
very well. Very obedient boy but given to pranks he plays on gullible people. Strangers
often come to me and complain about him to my embarrassment. That is the only flaw.
What did he tell you?”
I said “Nothing special”
There was a long whistle and the train started
moving even as the station master waved his green flag. I turned towards the
entrance and saw the boy putting his tongue out with thumb on his nose and
waving his fingers at me. I could not suppress my smile.
I was feeling so proud about you.
ReplyDeleteAnd then came the ending. HEHEHEH!
Still proud Sir!
That was indeed an unexpected twist, hilarious one KP. Really nice.
ReplyDeleteOH ! The cheek !!! That was a nice narration. I was thinking that this was a turning point for the boy too ;) when the whole story turned around ;)
ReplyDeleteHahaha :) Such a prank. Love the boy ;)
ReplyDeleteHahaaha.....cant stop smiling either
ReplyDeleteI knew there was going to be a twist in the tale )
ReplyDeleteI too am smiling! Nice one!
ReplyDeleteRib tickling ending to a heart warming story!!! :-)
ReplyDeleteThat cheeky boy :) Good one
ReplyDeleteWonderfully narrated! As always your trademark 'twist in the tale' shines through. Lovely. :)
ReplyDeleteNice!!!!!!
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This made me smile !!! beautiful writing as always sir :-)
ReplyDeleteThis was brilliant sir - a touch of Malgudi Days and William the trouble-maker combined in one.
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What a twist in the tale! The naughty boy!!!
ReplyDeleteI loved it as it's a happy ending :)
A nice story with a funny twist. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteI didn't expect this twist, though I expected one in general. Good one :)
ReplyDeleteDestination Infinity
OMG!! What a smart cheeky guy!!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading this post :)
That was unexpected, but leaves me smiling too. The pranks some youngsters play!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed reading the post, KP. Now I feel like having dosa and chutney powder too.
Lovely ending.... i cried in the middle of the story and smiled in the end :) way to go!!
ReplyDeleteTwist to the tale:)..but nice one!
ReplyDeletePut a smile on me as well, what a cute little naughty boy!
ReplyDeleteWhat a prankster! Nice.
ReplyDeletevery very nice :). I am smiling, as well!
ReplyDeletewow you are a master story teller. loved the twist
ReplyDeleteLoved the naughtiness of the boy :).
ReplyDeleteThat was indeed interesting.
ReplyDeleteI love happy endings. Good story with nice twist.
ReplyDeleteYou are at your hilarious best KP !
ReplyDeletehahaha :D Prankster at prowl ;) very good one KP
ReplyDeleteI loved the boy. For a moment I thought I was reading R K Narayanan..
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