Kiss her in public, I
will give you money
I cannot do publicly
Take it or leave it
Hmm…will she like it?
Don’t bother. She would
not mind.
Why this strange
condition?
To ensure you stop
asking me for money again
Okay, I need money badly
He produced an ugly
looking damp frog to kiss
This 55 word story was written as a response to Write Tribe Festival of Words 3 - 9
Sentence Fiction
Haha... I'm not sure who to feel sorry for now - the frog or the man? :)
ReplyDeleteUgly souls also deserve to be kissed, anyway, short and sweet one :-)
ReplyDeleteExcellent post.
ReplyDeleteOh the things people will do for money! Ewww. :)
ReplyDelete:P Did he or did he not??
ReplyDeleteI am so glad to see you take part in Write Tribe and then combining it with a 55er. Brilliant :)
A complex situation that became disgusting in the end....really funny :)
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha.. that was funny. Hope it was worth the money though.
ReplyDeleteEither the frog turned into princess or the man stopped asking for money!!
ReplyDeleteOkay, I am all for love , but kiss a frog? I would shy away. Nobody could pay me enough ;) Love the fact that you combined 55 words and 9 sentences!
ReplyDeleteDown to the point story - really liked it:-) But Yeeek..... Hopefully the frog turned it to the most beautiful princess and they lived happily ever after:-)
ReplyDeleteand did the damp frog turn into something like a princess as in fairy tales. enjoyed the story.
ReplyDeleteTotally unexpected slimy twist there :)
ReplyDeleteFunny one!
ReplyDeletePerhaps the frog will turn into a beautiful princess.
ReplyDeleteI loved the frog :D but more than that I loved the reason for the kiss :D Waiting to see whether the money wins or the frog :D A crisp one, KP sir :)
ReplyDeleteLOL! Funny story.
ReplyDeletesuch a innovative technique to keep away unwanted elements
ReplyDeleteLol! That cracked me up at the end...love the 55-er! :D
ReplyDelete:-) And imagine if that frog had turned into a princess! :D
ReplyDeleteHahahaha...simply loved it.
ReplyDeleteA very funny situation. It brought a smile! Very enjoyable story, KP.
ReplyDeletei m glad it s under '55 word story'. :)
ReplyDeleteHa Ha! That was a superb twist.
ReplyDeleteaha what all we do in need.humorous.dxbnidblog
ReplyDeleteHa ha Ha!! This was funny :)
ReplyDeleteFunny one. One of yr best 55 words.
ReplyDeletehaha... good one :D
ReplyDeleteHaha. I never expected a slimy ending ! Good one.
ReplyDeleteAn interesting take and totally love it:)
ReplyDeleteI choose this to read because of the title. I already planned my PDA comment. I have nothing prepared to say about kissing frogs in public.
ReplyDeleteOther than I would probably LOL--like I did when reading this!
A lesson to the people who will do anything for money:)
ReplyDeletehaha.. that was very intelligent.. so how was the kiss ? :D
ReplyDeleteHaha...can't stop smiling... He needed money that bad huh?
ReplyDeleteLOL :D Did she turn into a princess??
ReplyDeleteLOL . ..
ReplyDeleteI come here to read every story ending with a unexpected twist, though this was a funny one here .
ReplyDeleteCute twist.
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