Sunday, March 2, 2014

The kiss in public

Kiss her in public, I will give you money
I cannot do publicly
Take it or leave it
Hmm…will she like it?
Don’t bother. She would not mind.
Why this strange condition?
To ensure you stop asking me for money again
Okay, I need money badly
He produced an ugly looking damp frog to kiss

This 55 word story was written as a response to Write Tribe Festival of Words 3 - 9 Sentence Fiction

37 comments:

  1. Haha... I'm not sure who to feel sorry for now - the frog or the man? :)

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  2. Ugly souls also deserve to be kissed, anyway, short and sweet one :-)

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  3. Excellent post.

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  4. Oh the things people will do for money! Ewww. :)

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  5. :P Did he or did he not??
    I am so glad to see you take part in Write Tribe and then combining it with a 55er. Brilliant :)

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  6. A complex situation that became disgusting in the end....really funny :)

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  7. Ha ha ha.. that was funny. Hope it was worth the money though.

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  8. Either the frog turned into princess or the man stopped asking for money!!

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  9. Okay, I am all for love , but kiss a frog? I would shy away. Nobody could pay me enough ;) Love the fact that you combined 55 words and 9 sentences!

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  10. Down to the point story - really liked it:-) But Yeeek..... Hopefully the frog turned it to the most beautiful princess and they lived happily ever after:-)

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  11. and did the damp frog turn into something like a princess as in fairy tales. enjoyed the story.

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  12. Totally unexpected slimy twist there :)

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  13. Perhaps the frog will turn into a beautiful princess.

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  14. I loved the frog :D but more than that I loved the reason for the kiss :D Waiting to see whether the money wins or the frog :D A crisp one, KP sir :)

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  15. such a innovative technique to keep away unwanted elements

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  16. Lol! That cracked me up at the end...love the 55-er! :D

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  17. :-) And imagine if that frog had turned into a princess! :D

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  18. A very funny situation. It brought a smile! Very enjoyable story, KP.

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  19. i m glad it s under '55 word story'. :)

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  20. Ha Ha! That was a superb twist.

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  21. aha what all we do in need.humorous.dxbnidblog

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  22. Funny one. One of yr best 55 words.

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  23. Haha. I never expected a slimy ending ! Good one.

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  24. An interesting take and totally love it:)

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  25. I choose this to read because of the title. I already planned my PDA comment. I have nothing prepared to say about kissing frogs in public.

    Other than I would probably LOL--like I did when reading this!

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  26. A lesson to the people who will do anything for money:)

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  27. haha.. that was very intelligent.. so how was the kiss ? :D

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  28. Haha...can't stop smiling... He needed money that bad huh?

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  29. LOL :D Did she turn into a princess??

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  30. I come here to read every story ending with a unexpected twist, though this was a funny one here .

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