Monday, October 11, 2010

The secret

How could you do this to me?
I saw your hubby leaving.
But it is highly improper, you know
It is okay occasionally. Don’t you like it?
True, but you tempt me frequently.If it comes out I will be in soup
Don’t worry.It will remain secret
Sweets strictly forbidden,Lalitha.I am diabetic.Hubby will hit roof


  1. Namaste....
    Funny how you play on the "suggestives", have your reader thinking one thing only to lead them to something completely different. Very strategic, the element is always there and its a warning to some who make presume they know the conclusion.

    I like the style, keeps one on their toes. Predictability afterall can be a bit mundane.

    Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

  2. thoroughly fun..I specially liked that you have used very nice clean words, nowhere they become double entendre...thats the beauty.