Monday, October 11, 2010

The secret

How could you do this to me?
I saw your hubby leaving.
But it is highly improper, you know
It is okay occasionally. Don’t you like it?
True, but you tempt me frequently.If it comes out I will be in soup
Don’t worry.It will remain secret
Sweets strictly forbidden,Lalitha.I am diabetic.Hubby will hit roof

8 comments:

  1. Namaste....
    Funny how you play on the "suggestives", have your reader thinking one thing only to lead them to something completely different. Very strategic, the element is always there and its a warning to some who make presume they know the conclusion.

    I like the style, keeps one on their toes. Predictability afterall can be a bit mundane.

    Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

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  2. thoroughly fun..I specially liked that you have used very nice clean words, nowhere they become double entendre...thats the beauty.

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