The dance
I was alone sipping beer in the restaurent.Band was on with people dancing
She walked towards me and asked ‘Care to dance?’
She was hot and danced with passion.’Meet me at 29, Carnaby road an hour later for some fun.’
‘This is 29 alright. No one lives here after the lady committed suicde ‘said watchman
She walked towards me and asked ‘Care to dance?’
She was hot and danced with passion.’Meet me at 29, Carnaby road an hour later for some fun.’
‘This is 29 alright. No one lives here after the lady committed suicde ‘said watchman
Uncaring
Raju,you cannot send her away.She has been with you for years since her younger days
Sorry dad, she has become old and not meeting my expectations.I want an younger one to satisfy my needs.
You are cruelly insensitive as she is not protesting
I cannot help it,dad
The butcher led away the cow
Sorry dad, she has become old and not meeting my expectations.I want an younger one to satisfy my needs.
You are cruelly insensitive as she is not protesting
I cannot help it,dad
The butcher led away the cow
Nice story. There is a twist even in such a short story. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteNice story. There is a twist even in such a short story. Amazing.
ReplyDeleteWow! The ghost comes and dances! But, why did she kill herself?
ReplyDeleteThree or four lines but they say it all, thats called powerful writing and you have it in your control gp :)
ReplyDeleteSecond one is very sad, I hate it when people send cows to butchers.
ReplyDeleteTales of horror, eh? Interesting! In just 55 words, even better!
ReplyDeleteSpooky and sad....nice stories :)
ReplyDeleteThe two stories were fun! It is an art to write in such few words.
ReplyDeleteWonder whats the significance of 55?
ReplyDeleteThe Unexpected!!!!!!!!!!!
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