Tuesday, September 14, 2010

55 word fiction

Rendezvous
‘Can you come after 8pm? I will be alone.’
'My hubby will be home. I will try to sneak out though cannot stay long'.
‘I think it is enough though this is the first time.’
‘Don’t worry.You will be pleased when you are done’.
At 8 pm Shanthi entered to teach Sita for dyeing her hair.
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12 comments:

  1. lakshmiSeptember 14, 2010 at 8:10 AM

    suspense held till the end indeed.......

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  2. UnknownSeptember 14, 2010 at 9:06 AM

    Easy 1...2...3. Read and write your own article. A new collabrative dimension - www.jeejix.com

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  3. Shanthi KrishnakumarSeptember 14, 2010 at 9:22 AM

    Wonderful short story. Love the theme 55 word fiction

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  4. WhirlwindSeptember 14, 2010 at 10:16 AM

    This is great! Keep them coming.

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  5. Preetilata【ツ】September 14, 2010 at 12:14 PM

    hahahaha :D good 1

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  6. RGBSeptember 14, 2010 at 1:50 PM

    Getting better with each post. The KP twist remains!

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  7. Jzt 4 me...September 14, 2010 at 3:05 PM

    Lol!!! No more words...hehe!!

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  8. Destiny's child...September 14, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Lol...I am loving these 55 words stories KP. Keep them coming :)

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  9. deepsSeptember 14, 2010 at 7:41 PM

    Liked the brevity, but I don’t know what, there is something lacking…

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  10. Latha NairSeptember 14, 2010 at 10:12 PM

    Agree with RGB-twist in the tale intact-55 or 550!

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  11. Jyotsna P kadayaprathSeptember 17, 2010 at 10:07 PM

    dear
    you are at your best now...
    really enjoying 55 word fiction.
    my prayers

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  12. RamyaJuly 19, 2012 at 4:59 PM

    Awesome KP, this one is superb lol :D loved it!

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