Tuesday, September 28, 2010

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Not one around in the isolated mountain resort.She knew her life was fast ebbing out as the last blood drained.She carried her lover’s child in her womb.When she insisted on marriage, he brought her here with false promise and stabbed her before leaving.

Luckily she could feel the locket in the chain on her neck that he had ignored in his hurry.It contained their photo.She opened it to touch his picture with her blood soaked finger and drew his initials on the floor.

‘This is enough.You will soon get nailed’ she muttered in wry smile as her life passed out


  1. another morbid story...:(

    why writing with such themes lately Sir?

    hope authorities could give justice to the woman's fate!

  2. killing in the name of justice...........

  3. Dear Partha,
    Good Morning!
    To be honest I don't like stories like this.;I mean with this neagative attitude.
    Partha,I believe we as bloggers have responsibility towrads the readers to take away a positive attitude and cheerful smile.
    The life is full of stresses and tensions.Let us bring a sunshine smile and happiness to the readers.
    There is an unborn child too..........
    Please change the track;my request.
    Wishing you a beautiful day ahead,

  4. Killing is wrong, but I dont support the girls like her who get pregnant before marriage and then ask the boys to get married.

  5. Good one......
    It is difficult to fit everything in 100 words.
    Keep it up :)

  6. You have succeeded in your aim to fit a story in just 100 words. Quite a feat... with a story that has a dark side to it. Surprisingly not your usual style. Yet I can understand too that sometimes the temptation is there to deviate from the usual. But yeah why not, if to test how much more you can do with your writing. I think you have come out well from that self-imposed challenge. I gather that some of your readers would rather have back your usual inspired and inspiring stories...Quite an impression you've made. Good luck to more wonderful writing. :-) God bless.

  7. Just 100 words and a complete story oh my god. From writers perspective its really a achievement. Thing to notice is in 100 words there is a past there is a present and also a Future... Awesome love your skill

  8. I agree that there is negative aspect, but it touches the heart. I don't know if it is the writing style or the subject... It is heart touching.

  9. Thank God that she nailed him before death...
    He deserves it... But does she deserve death, I wonder.