About seventy guests, including a throng of
young children, had gathered to celebrate the joyous occasion. Mr Sahayam dressed
in a brightly laced sherwani and his wife decked in a glamorous Kanchi silk
sari stood near the centre table, his proud smile glowing under the red balloon
cluster hovering above. A well-decorated cake, its candles flickering, awaited
the start of the celebration. The air buzzed with chatter and laughter, while a
buffet table lined with glistening steel containers promised a feast to follow.
As the
guests gathered around the centre table, eager to watch the president
blow out the candles, a man in a dark suit entered through a side door. His
face, except for his eyes, was obscured by black silk. His deep, commanding
voice sliced through the festivities, snapping everyone’s attention to him.
“Ladies
and gentlemen, I apologise for this unwelcome interruption, but it’s necessary.
This will be over quickly with your cooperation,” he said, pulling a shining
gun from his holster.
A wave of
uneasy murmurs rippled through the crowd as he continued, his tone growing more
severe. “Do not create a commotion or you may get hurt. I have only one target;
the rest of you can breathe easy. Now, every one of you raise your hands across
your chest and clap when the president blows out the candles. No funny
business—I am dead serious.”
He then
turned his focus to the president. “Venerable Sir, start the party by blowing
out the candles. Don’t worry, you’ll have your fun soon enough.”
Amid the
tension, the lights turned dim, with all faces ashen and drenched in sweat, Mr Sahayam, half in fear and
half in mirth, blew out the candles. Suddenly, a gunshot rang out, followed by
an explosion of glittering metallic streamers from the balloon above. The
lights came back on as hidden speakers blared the "Happy Birthday"
song. The dazed crowd quickly realized it was all a prank, orchestrated by the resort
entertainer in league with the Secretary of the humour association.
Laughter
and applause erupted as the entertainer, now without the black silk mask,
handed Mr Sahayam a large, richly decorated gift box. The guests were amused,
their earlier fear turning into joyous relief.
But amidst the fanfare, no one noticed a man
standing at the fringe of the crowd, clutching his stomach, until he collapsed.
The crowd
soon gathered around the fallen man, their faces twisting in confusion and
fear. Blood soaked through his shirt, forming a dark purple stain around his
hand. Who could have done this ghastly act? And why? Strangely, the security detail
remained oblivious, even as anxiety spread among the guests. Some wrung their
hands, others quickly distanced themselves from the scene.
To the bewilderment of all, the entertainer in the black suit slowly approached the
fallen man. He nudged him with his shoe.. Lo, the man instantly stood up, pulling off
a napkin from his stomach, and burst into laughter. The crowd, stunned, soon
realised it was all part of an elaborate ruse that went well with the club’s
activities, and they too began to laugh.
With the
tension broken, the guests happily gravitated towards the buffet table, eager
to indulge in the feast that awaited.
Fascinating mini-climax followed by the real climax!!
ReplyDeleteFull of suspense, thrill and laughter. Nice story
ReplyDeleteHeld my attention for a couple of moments, I have to admit.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
The author keeps the audience on tenterhooks with shock after shock! The pranks from the Humour Club are brilliantly executed , good thing no one had a heart attack!
ReplyDeleteYou are very good at narrating a story. Well done
ReplyDeleteChitra
Quite a suspense!
ReplyDeleteDouble suspense.
ReplyDeleteA very captivating and fascinating 'now on now off' thriller!
ReplyDeleteFull of tension in the beginning and full of laughter later! Great narration, Kp, loved this! ...Sandhya
ReplyDeleteDark humor! I thought the man at the end had died truly
ReplyDeleteYour story reflects the cultural influence of the country you are now in. Better return to native soon!
ReplyDeleteJagadeesan
Frankly I could not digest the Managements' mischief at a birthday bash ceremony, not once but again. Great narration and suspense for the story, with a different skill, of course.
ReplyDeleteWow!! Double suspense, read it in one breath!.
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ReplyDeleteGuns n roses!!! Absolutely straight out of a Texan cowboy movie!!!
ReplyDeleteWith 624 words you have created two terror attack followed by surprises. My heart is still pounding after I read the second event and believed as real. Did you plan any such parties? Your thinking has no boundaries Sir. PKR
ReplyDeletevery intriguing story, narrated very well as usual, but logical incidents.-P.Chinnaraj
ReplyDeleteA very interesting story with double suspense!! Read with baiting breath.
ReplyDeleteAhaha! Your imagination is something else.
ReplyDeleteThriller suspense. Humour club prank was just superb and your imagination is at its best. Fortunately no one died of a heart attack. Nice one and the suspense was in full swing till end of story.
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