Saturday, August 3, 2024

The Kidnap (603 words)

                                      (A short story of yesteryears that will leave you with a smile)

 “Uncle, let me go. Why have you brought me here? I am scared. My parents would be worried and looking for me” cried the ten-year-old boy, in a trembling voice

“Keep quiet, I warn you.  I am not letting you go so soon. Let me get some money from your dad and I will think about it later” barked the man, his eyes cold and speculating, beneath a big drooping moustache.

The boy started crying loudly. The man slapped the boy hard and asked him to be silent if he were not to get hurt.

 “Ayyo, ayyo. It is paining. Please allow me to go. I will ask my dad to pay you whatever money you want”, pleaded the boy with flowing tears. Annoyed by the loud cries, the wicked man took out a roll of duct tape from a bag and put it on the boy's mouth securely. He tied his hands behind and also his legs.

“You ignored my warning. Now suffer the consequences” said the kidnapper as he spat the pan through the window.

 He closed the shutters and started smoking. Scared beyond wits, the boy turned silent and was looking at him wistfully. More than an hour passed and the man had exhausted his cigarettes. He was pacing in the room restlessly for two hours with his patience wearing thin waiting to make the ransom call.

Suddenly he heard loud knocks at the front door. He immediately lifted the top of a hollow centre table and thrust the boy inside.” If you make even a slight noise I will kill you. Beware” he warned the boy as he replaced the top and kept a flower vase on it.

As the pounding of the door became incessant, he opened the front door to find a policeman with two other men.

When he looked askance at them, the policeman said “We have come in search of a young boy. This man here who was in the tea shop across the road says he saw you with a boy. Where is he? The other person is his father and says the boy is missing for two hours from the house where he was playing.”

“I know of no boy. What crap is that man talking? He must have seen someone else”

“Anyway, let me search inside the house” the policeman replied and went from one room to the other and searched thoroughly opening the shelves, lofts and almirahs. When they drew a blank, the policeman said “This is the room where this man has been staying as it is filled with cigarette smoke. Call your boy by name” he told the father of the boy.

“Ambi, Ambi” he called loudly twice. The boy heard his dad but could neither make any noise nor move cramped as he was inside. Panic struck him afraid they would go away.

The policeman turned to the boy’s father and said “We are not finding him here. Come to the police station and lodge a formal complaint. We will take further action. No point in wasting time here. Let us go”

As they were about to leave, the man from the teashop suddenly exclaimed “Look, under the centre table”

They saw a puddle of yellowish liquid trickling from below the table. The policeman caught the kidnapper who tried to flee even as the other men removed the top to find Ambi tightly bound.

When they removed the tape, the boy proudly said “Daddy, when I heard your voice, I tried to shout or make noise. When I could not, I started peeing hoping you would find me”

 

28 comments:

  1. Whoa ! Perfect timing. 👍

    Chitra

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  2. Good one, it surely did make me smile. Appreciate the presence of mind of Ambi.

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  3. Stumped! Good one 👍🏼

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  4. With his mouth gagged and limbs tied, what an ingenious way thought of by the boy to catch the attention of others!
    An amusing and a clever plot rolled in one!

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  5. I thought it was an accident since the boy was quite frightened.

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  6. Nice.ramakrishnan.

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  7. A great presence of mind so subtly expressed by you. We need to teach our kids such things . Definitely brought a smile .

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  8. This story brought a smile to my face. I was getting g worried right up to the point of the last para! Loved it and it's unusual ending

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  9. Nice story

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  10. As the dialigue in Shakespeare's Hamlet. The boy must have thought "to pee or not to pee". Then decided to pee.

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  11. I applaud the native intelligence of the policeman who insisted on searching the drawing room further, the tea vendor who spotted the wet floor under the centre table and the lad, who takes the cake !! Salute 🫡

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  12. Great story with a ingenious ending. The story kept me bound till the end.. Definitely brought a smile to my face. Thank you 😊

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  13. Super 😊 Regards - Mahesh

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  14. Great idea....Sandhya

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  15. Nice to know that the boy did not pee out of fear!

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  16. Ambi's presence of mind and the ACT saved the day !. Hilarious and nice story

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  17. Helps to be hydrated while being kidnapped.(JJ)

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  18. Brilliant presence of mind and resourceful thinking!!

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  19. Rama Sampath Kumar: Nice.. like an exact true life reportage! Loved reading the kidnapping episode! Brave boy and remarkable the way it is written like our era Earl Stanley Gardener. Perry Mason in a non detective style.Thank you Athimber.

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  20. Interesting till the end

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  21. The boy is very intelligent or the author of the story ? regards P K Ramachandran

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  22. Great idea. A good read :)

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  23. Hmm... But your tagline after the title is letting away the cat out of the bag. Don't do it and allow the readers to enjoy the unexpected twists.

    Best wishes and warm regards
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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  24. The story is an eye opener for a kidnapper to be aware of possibility of the kidnap victim adopting tactics unknown to him and outsmart him!

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  25. Smart boy 👏👏

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  26. Very pleasant feeling that the boy is rescued. Out of the box thinking once again. Every story has an unusual twist. Good going.

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