(A short story of yesteryears that will leave you with a smile)
“Uncle, let me go. Why have you brought me here? I am scared. My parents would be worried and looking for me” cried the ten-year-old boy, in a trembling voice“Keep quiet, I warn you. I am not letting you go so soon.
Let me get some money from your dad and I will think about it later” barked the
man, his eyes cold and speculating, beneath a big drooping moustache.
The boy started crying loudly. The man slapped the boy hard and asked
him to be silent if he were not to get hurt.
“Ayyo, ayyo. It is paining.
Please allow me to go. I will ask my dad to pay you whatever money you want”, pleaded
the boy with flowing tears. Annoyed by the loud cries, the wicked man took out
a roll of duct tape from a bag and put it on the boy's mouth securely. He tied
his hands behind and also his legs.
“You ignored my warning. Now suffer the consequences” said the
kidnapper as he spat the pan through the window.
He closed the shutters and
started smoking. Scared beyond wits, the boy turned silent and was looking at
him wistfully. More than an hour passed and the man had exhausted his
cigarettes. He was pacing in the room restlessly for two hours with his
patience wearing thin waiting to make the ransom call.
Suddenly he heard loud knocks at the front door. He immediately lifted
the top of a hollow centre table and thrust the boy inside.” If you make even a
slight noise I will kill you. Beware” he warned the boy as he replaced the top and
kept a flower vase on it.
As the pounding of the door became incessant, he opened the front door
to find a policeman with two other men.
When he looked askance at them, the policeman said “We have come in
search of a young boy. This man here who was in the tea shop across the road
says he saw you with a boy. Where is he? The other person is his father and
says the boy is missing for two hours from the house where he was playing.”
“I know of no boy. What crap is that man talking? He must have seen
someone else”
“Anyway, let me search inside the house” the policeman replied and went
from one room to the other and searched thoroughly opening the shelves, lofts
and almirahs. When they drew a blank, the policeman said “This is the room
where this man has been staying as it is filled with cigarette smoke. Call your
boy by name” he told the father of the boy.
“Ambi, Ambi” he called loudly twice. The boy heard his dad but could
neither make any noise nor move cramped as he was inside. Panic struck him afraid
they would go away.
The policeman turned to the boy’s father and said “We are not finding
him here. Come to the police station and lodge a formal complaint. We will take
further action. No point in wasting time here. Let us go”
As they were about to leave, the man from the teashop suddenly
exclaimed “Look, under the centre table”
They saw a puddle of yellowish liquid trickling from below the table.
The policeman caught the kidnapper who tried to flee even as the other men
removed the top to find Ambi tightly bound.
When they removed the tape, the boy proudly said “Daddy, when I heard
your voice, I tried to shout or make noise. When I could not, I started peeing hoping
you would find me”
Whoa ! Perfect timing. 👍
ReplyDeleteChitra
Good one, it surely did make me smile. Appreciate the presence of mind of Ambi.
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeleteStumped! Good one 👍🏼
ReplyDeleteWith his mouth gagged and limbs tied, what an ingenious way thought of by the boy to catch the attention of others!
ReplyDeleteAn amusing and a clever plot rolled in one!
I thought it was an accident since the boy was quite frightened.
ReplyDeleteNice.ramakrishnan.
ReplyDeleteA great presence of mind so subtly expressed by you. We need to teach our kids such things . Definitely brought a smile .
ReplyDeleteThis story brought a smile to my face. I was getting g worried right up to the point of the last para! Loved it and it's unusual ending
ReplyDeleteNice story
ReplyDeleteAs the dialigue in Shakespeare's Hamlet. The boy must have thought "to pee or not to pee". Then decided to pee.
ReplyDeleteI applaud the native intelligence of the policeman who insisted on searching the drawing room further, the tea vendor who spotted the wet floor under the centre table and the lad, who takes the cake !! Salute 🫡
ReplyDeleteGreat story with a ingenious ending. The story kept me bound till the end.. Definitely brought a smile to my face. Thank you 😊
ReplyDeleteSuper 😊 Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteGreat idea....Sandhya
ReplyDeleteNice to know that the boy did not pee out of fear!
ReplyDeleteAmbi's presence of mind and the ACT saved the day !. Hilarious and nice story
ReplyDeleteHelps to be hydrated while being kidnapped.(JJ)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant presence of mind and resourceful thinking!!
ReplyDeleteRama Sampath Kumar: Nice.. like an exact true life reportage! Loved reading the kidnapping episode! Brave boy and remarkable the way it is written like our era Earl Stanley Gardener. Perry Mason in a non detective style.Thank you Athimber.
ReplyDeleteInteresting till the end
ReplyDeleteVery intelligent boy Ambi
ReplyDeleteThe boy is very intelligent or the author of the story ? regards P K Ramachandran
ReplyDeleteGreat idea. A good read :)
ReplyDeleteHmm... But your tagline after the title is letting away the cat out of the bag. Don't do it and allow the readers to enjoy the unexpected twists.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
The story is an eye opener for a kidnapper to be aware of possibility of the kidnap victim adopting tactics unknown to him and outsmart him!
ReplyDeleteSmart boy 👏👏
ReplyDeleteVery pleasant feeling that the boy is rescued. Out of the box thinking once again. Every story has an unusual twist. Good going.
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