( An interesting short story that I hope will keep you hooked)
“Where are you going? How long are you
waiting?” he asked her
“To Jaipur, Saheb. It is more than two
hours and no bus stops here.”
“Okay, get in. I am also going there” As
she hesitated not knowing where to get in, he opened the front door.
He drove silently for some time and then
asked “Is Jaipur your home town?”
“No, it is a village here. There is no
work here. My husband is a lazy and violent alcoholic. I am leaving him for
good and going in search of some work. I have some relatives there” she replied
“You look so young. Any kids?”
“Luckily no. I am married for less than
two years”
He saw a service station a little away.
Wishing to use the restroom, he stopped the car. He hesitated for a fraction of
a second whether to leave her alone in the car. ” Do you also wish to come? “ he
asked her.
When she declined, he rushed to the
restroom and came back as quickly.
“Had you come, we could have had a cool
drink. It is so hot outside. My throat is parched” he said and took the Bisleri
bottle kept by his side and gulped half the bottle. He offered her the balance
but she declined.
He would have driven hardly for 15
minutes when he clutched his head and said that he was feeling giddy. He
stopped the car and with a concerned look, she had his head rest on her
shoulders before he blacked out. She got out of the car, pulled him to the side
seat and made him recline in a sitting posture even as she sat behind the wheel
with a smirk on her face.
She opened her bag and changed into a
clean and swanky salwar suit, dabbed her face with a makeup kit, combed her
hair and wore sun goggles. She was transformed in a jiffy to a modern young
lady as she took a turn towards Delhi. She drove for some distance till she
found a service plaza. She swerved the car to the rear side and parked it. She
opened the computer bag that was in the rear seat and found some money. She
took the bag, opened partially one of the windows and briskly walked away.
As she came out of the plaza with a Coke
bottle in hand and the computer bag, she found a car coming out of the parking
lot driven by a young man. She raised her thumb and the man asked her where she
was going
“Gurgaon”
“Hop in,” he said as he opened the front
door
She gave him one of her seductive smiles
and said “It is so sweet of you. I am Lolita” as she settled down in her seat
almost brushing close to him.
“I am Vinod, it is a privilege and
pleasure to be of small help to you. How come you were stranded here?”
“My car broke down and I am in a hurry
to Gurgaon. Luckily, I met my Good Samaritan in you “she said as she fondly
patted him on his shoulder.
“What do you do for a living? Single?”
“I do many things. Though an
advertisement executive by profession, I like to socialize, dance and mingle
with men. I am single. How about you?” she asked not lifting her hand off his
shoulder.
“Me too a single and am into real estate
and fixing many lucrative deals. I look forward to a lasting friendship with
you” he said as he put his hand on her thigh. She did not make any effort to
brush his hand away. Emboldened he stopped the car at the side and drew her
near to give her a peck.
“Not now. Later as much as you wish
after we reach Gurgaon. I told you I was in a hurry. We will meet maybe
tomorrow itself” she said
As he was a little disappointed, he
drove silently even as she caressed his hair. As they were nearing Gurgaon. she
said abruptly” Look out to your right side at the petrol pump that is a little
away. Stop the car for a moment”
When he turned his head after he stopped
the car, he felt a sledgehammer karate blow on the region near the neck and
collar bone. He felt something crack inside as he slumped down unconscious. She
quickly rummaged through his bag and found wads of currency. She filled the
computer bag and threw the computer behind a bush. Making him sit in an upright
position, she walked away quickly from the vehicle.
As a three-wheeler with an old driver
stopped by, she got in and said “Mall”. She thrust a five hundred rupee note into
the hands of the surprised driver at the mall and hurried inside with the computer
bag in her hand only to melt away in the vast crowd of shoppers.
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I thought she would drive away with the first car!
ReplyDeleteLolita seems to be professional!! Will she ever get caught?
ReplyDeleteHmm... I like the story ending differently with no respite being discussed for the victims.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Modern highway Robber
ReplyDeleteVery nice.ramakrishnsn.a.
ReplyDeleteLolita may be professional alright ,but one day law will take care of the crime and put an end to her career. I am confident law cannot be fooled.
ReplyDeleteJagadeesan
You are good at writing short stories in different genres. 👏👏👏
ReplyDeleteChitra
These days never trust young women.
ReplyDeleteA very captivating story!
ReplyDeleteA thorough professional, the woman is, in picking the right preys!
Of course, there would always be some young men who, on seeing a damsel in distress, would throw all caution to the wind and get straight onto the act of chivalry!
Interesting storyline!! Nice one.
ReplyDeleteA good one. Whew what a professional, scary albeit. Life is a full circle, it's a matter of time.
ReplyDeleteNever ever give a ride to a hitchhiker.
ReplyDeleteIn Malayalam " Pala nal kallan oru nal akappedum" . She will be caught one day for sure, how smart as a professional be. Good story.
ReplyDeleteNow the question arises, “ who shd be more careful, the driver picking up a hitchhiker or the hitchhiker ?”….!!!
ReplyDeleteNice one. First time on your blog. Hope to catch some more stories soon.
ReplyDeleteI was looking for a twist in the end. Anyway, the narration was captivating! ...Sandhya
ReplyDeleteLesson: Never offer any help to unknown person. Ramachandran P K
ReplyDeleteAmazing how you are able to come up with such different ideas
ReplyDeleteA tale of the don of deceit, decoy, daredevilry, defraud...full action packed thriller!!
ReplyDeleteCurious to know if there is any genre that you haven’t ventured into :)
ReplyDeleteUnimaginable the way life takes a turn. Do not know who to trust these days. A wonderful twist to the story. She will meet her fate soon. How not to be is what I learn from this story. Keep rocking. Your creativity in each story is at its best.
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