Tuesday, September 14, 2010

55 word fiction

Rendezvous
‘Can you come after 8pm? I will be alone.’
'My hubby will be home. I will try to sneak out though cannot stay long'.
‘I think it is enough though this is the first time.’
‘Don’t worry.You will be pleased when you are done’.
At 8 pm Shanthi entered to teach Sita for dyeing her hair.

12 comments:

  1. suspense held till the end indeed.......

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  2. Easy 1...2...3. Read and write your own article. A new collabrative dimension - www.jeejix.com

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  3. Wonderful short story. Love the theme 55 word fiction

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  4. Getting better with each post. The KP twist remains!

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  5. Lol...I am loving these 55 words stories KP. Keep them coming :)

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  6. Liked the brevity, but I don’t know what, there is something lacking…

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  7. Agree with RGB-twist in the tale intact-55 or 550!

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  8. dear
    you are at your best now...
    really enjoying 55 word fiction.
    my prayers

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  9. Awesome KP, this one is superb lol :D loved it!

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