I turned off the TV and looked out of the window. The city beckoned with its crowded streets, speeding cars, and neon-lit buildings. The marquee on the front of the bar and restaurant glittered in changing colours. I saw smartly dressed couples entering the restaurant, chilling out, shaking their legs, and enjoying a sumptuous dinner.
It was cold outside, so I changed
into a jacket, dabbed some perfume, took my small computer bag, and stepped out
toward the garage. It was an exhilarating feeling to be in the bustling street
lined with tall buildings and electronic billboards.
After parking the car, I entered
the restaurant and ordered a drink. The place was almost full except for my
table. As I sipped the drink slowly, my eyes half-closed, I heard a rustle
around me and smelled a gentle fragrance. She was a beauty, tall and lissome,
with her long hair falling insouciantly on her beautiful face. A strand of
oyster pearls stood out prominently on her long neck.
She seemed hesitant initially,
but when I smiled and drew a chair for her, she sat down with a happy smile.
When I ordered her an extra drink, she did not protest.
“I am Vivek Sharma and I live in
this city. Glad I could meet you. Care to join me for dinner?” I asked.
“I am Subhasree, I was looking
for an empty table. Thank you for sharing the table. I am also happy to meet
you. I live in the suburbs but work here and frequent this restaurant on
weekends.”
We exchanged pleasantries and
drank leisurely, watching young couples dance on the floor to the brisk music.
When I looked at her meaningfully, she nodded in agreement. I took out my
bulging wallet from the back of my pants and put it in the bag before taking
her hand to dance. The proximity of the charming lady gave me a strange
feeling. We danced as if we had known each other for a long time.
“It is nice dancing with you,”
she whispered in my ear, her hair brushing my nose and tickling it.
“Sure, it is. We should make it a
habit every weekend. Lucky, I met you,” I said.
We returned to our table and had
spring pasta with blistered cherry tomatoes. We rejoiced in our newfound
friendship. I gave her my card. She promised to give me a ring when she was
free.
"Can you wait for a couple
of minutes? I'll drop you wherever you wish to go. Keep an eye on the bag. I'll
be back in a jiffy," I said as I rushed to the restroom. There were many
waiting ahead of me.
When I returned in a triumphant
mood after a slight delay, I was shocked to find the table empty. The woman was
nowhere to be seen. Maybe, I wondered, she had also gone to the restroom. How
careless of her to leave behind my things. As I turned to check, I saw my
jacket on the chair, but the computer bag was missing. I waited a few minutes
before calling the waiter to learn she had left.
The bill had not been settled,
and the jacket was stripped empty. It then struck me that she had not given her
card or details of her whereabouts. The waiter returned to place the folding
pad containing the bill.What a sucker I was to trust an unknown woman and
leave the bag with my wallet.
When the Restaurant Manager heard
about my predicament corroborated by the waiter, he graciously agreed to my
paying the amount the next day even when I offered to return with the money
before the restaurant closed.
I gave up hope of
recovering my bag and as I lay brooding over my foolishness,
my phone buzzed with an unknown number. Hesitant but curious, I answered.
“Hello?”
“Vivek, it's Subhasree. I’m sorry
I had to rush urgently to the hospital to see
my mother who had developed complications. I kept the
bag with me to keep it safe and left the jacket behind
for obvious reasons. Can we meet at the restaurant at the same
time over dinner tomorrow?"
Relief washed over me, as I saw her waiting with the bag at the same table and hopes surging high in me of a romantic turn. Needless to say, the wallet was in the bag.
"Love and hope are twins"- Maria Gowen Brooks
A nice story. Loved the concluding quote. Love and Hope are very much needed in everyone's life. Keep writing
ReplyDeleteApt quote for a nice story. You are very talented.
ReplyDeleteTake care Periappa.
Chitra
Hmm....possible story.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.
Best wishes and warm regards
Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy
Love and hope are twins - what a beautiful and powerful statement - thanks for sharing. Regards - Mahesh
ReplyDeleteKP Sir, you had created the right environment for us readers to become highly sensitive to the various senses in that atmosphere. Whether we are aware of it or not, we are picking up stimuli from all around us, which is why when something changes, we too get immersed in the feelings and moods of the main character.You have made us put ourselves in your character’s shoes and start agreeing with everything that he thinks or does , be it right or not!
ReplyDeleteA twist on a twist! - a very beautiful story 😊
ReplyDeleteA good story .
ReplyDeleteMust admit that, like a classic opera director, the writer made me 'twist and turn' with his deft notes in building up the story!
ReplyDeleteAnd what a way to describe the mystery lady whose long hair fell 'insouciantly' on her beautiful face!
Unexpected ending - all is well that ends well
ReplyDeleteBoth Love and hope are intertwined to have a successful living. As a norm the writer has made the 'twists and turns' keeping his readers spellbound .
ReplyDeleteLove the story!! Keeps you hooked on in anticipation of the turn of events.
ReplyDeleteTimely communication is necessary lengthy relationship. Just saying. (JJ)
ReplyDeleteYour narration keeps us on the edge till the end! Nice story!
ReplyDeleteJust when I thought I knew the ending from a mile away... Wonderful twist!
ReplyDeleteA nice story.ramakrishnan.a.
ReplyDeleteThere is no justification for Subashree leaving suddenly whatever be the emergency. She could have left a note,or given info to bearer or restaurant owner or called up Vivek Sharma before leaving as his business card was with her. Much of Vivek's palpitation could have been avoided had he kept his valuables with himself rather than hand over to a stranger who had not shared her contact details. I don't appreciate Vivek's infatuation and careless behaviour.
ReplyDeleteStory is interesting with its usual KP twists and turns with an object lesson for all.
Good one! A double twist- what fun!
ReplyDeleteLove and Hope never let's you down.
ReplyDeleteNice Encounter. 💖
A nice feel good story!
ReplyDeleteCaptivating description of the bustling city life and an unexpected encounter and a lost connection. Delightful story of chance meetings and the unexpected kindness of strangers.
ReplyDeleteNice story with twists and turns to a happy ending
ReplyDeleteSir, When I read your short stories, I shut the door to my imagination and read till the end; reason being they are unique in nature. Also, my vocabulary is enriched by a few words with every story that you post.
ReplyDeleteVery nice story Sir. Humanity and morality still pervade this earth.
We may draw conclusions swiftly, but the reality could be something different. Regards
Subhashree is vey beautiful beyond doubt. The introduction in para 3 says in all. Yiur skill and romantic sense is superb👌 Regards P K Ramachandran
ReplyDeleteJust when I thought the moral of the story would be don't trust strangers, it turned right around! By now I should have known better!
ReplyDeleteNice story :) but doesn't hurt to be careful around strangers :)
ReplyDeleteYour imagination at its best. Every story is so real and exciting. A little twist when she was missing from the scenario. But everything ended well. Thanks for all that you are doing. Such a stress buster. Keep rocking.
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