Thursday, July 11, 2024

Haunted Milk Booth (1090 words)



Please note this story is not for fickle hearts😆

Inspector Palani stood to attention. "What is the matter, Palani?" asked the Superintendent of Police.

"A strange thing, Sir. People and even vehicles have avoided using the main road beyond the district hospital after dusk since a month or two.. They use instead the narrow road in the residential area that runs parallel to it. There is often a bottleneck as two cars cannot travel on that narrow road side by side. There is no platform for pedestrians either. It is a mess, Sir."

"Why are they not using the main road? Make the narrow road one-way," said the Superintendent.

"It is haunted, Sir, near the Avin milk booth. It seems the ghost there is violent."

"What nonsense are you blabbering? Aren't you a man in uniform? Post two constables with patrol cars this evening on duty for the night. We can convince people tomorrow and tell them it is safe, and that policemen would be there daily at night."

"I did ask two constables. They refuse to go out of fear," said the inspector.

"What crap? Issue them written orders. I want them there tonight. Report to me tomorrow morning" roared the Superintendent.

The next morning, the Superintendent got a call at 7 am. "I am Palani here. An untoward thing has happened, Sir. Both the policemen were found dead near the Avin booth. There was a big crowd there. I had the two men checked by a local doctor. It seems they died of heart attacks."

"My God! Send them immediately to the hospital for postmortem. Inform the families. I will mention this to the Commissioner. Meanwhile, I will ask for two armed commandos to be put there tonight to unravel the mystery," ordered the Superintendent.

At 6 am the next day, the Superintendent got another call. "Palani again, Sir. Something strange and malevolent has occurred. Both commandos were found dead, shot at close range. Some people nearby heard gunshots and rushed there in a group. There were none seen in the vicinity. Even the cigarettes the commandos were smoking were still burning by the side of the chairs they were sitting on, Sir."

"What are you telling, man? This is unbelievable. People will laugh at us. Call the Homicide branch and ask them to have the place thoroughly examined. Have the place cordoned off. I will inform the Commissioner."

The evening newspapers screamed:

Ghost on rampage. 

Stunned two policemen to a heart attack. 

Last night two commandos were spurred presumably to shoot at each other.

 Police clueless.

In the evening, the Superintendent told Palani, "I could not talk to the Commissioner as he is out of station. I have decided to go myself and investigate. I do not wish to send others."

"Sir, can I go with a couple of policemen?" asked Palani.

"No, I do not want to risk sending or taking anyone without personally checking. Do not fear. I don't believe in ghosts and can unravel the mystery. I will have a CCTV camera fixed there tomorrow."

At 4 am the next morning, Palani’s mobile rang. It was the Superintendent’s wife. "Mr. Palani, my husband went out in the evening and is not answering my calls to his mobile after midnight. Can you please check immediately and tell me? I am very much worried."

Palani rushed to the spot. He found the road deserted. It was past 4:30 am. When he reached the Avin booth, he was shocked to see the Superintendent squatting on the ground in bare body, tearing his shirt, filling his cap with mud, and laughing hysterically like a madman.

"Sir, please get up. What are you doing? Why have you removed your shirt? Are you OK, Sir?" Palani said with concern and shock as he gently lifted him.

"He he he, I have arrested the ghost. The Commissioner will be happy," he said, looking in no particular direction even as he jumped up and down in frenzied laughter.

Palani looked nervously at the mental wreck before him. It dawned on him that the problem had assumed ominous proportions. Maybe, it falls in the domain of a tantric, he thought.

He realised he needed an ambulance or a vehicle with two men to move the Superintendent to a hospital. He turned and rushed to his motorbike. As he was about to start the bike, he heard a shuffling noise from behind the milk booth. Startled, he looked intently at the dark area, trembling in fear with his heart pounding feverishly and a cold tingle passing through his entire body. Lo! It seemed like a dark and strange figure ambling towards him in an unusual gait. It was still dark. He switched on the light of the bike to see that the figure had mysteriously vanished.

Gaining composure, Palani decided to arrange for an ambulance and a couple of policemen. As he drove, he saw after a mile an old man sitting outside his hut. Stopping the vehicle, Palani asked him, "How come you are sitting here fearlessly  when people say the area near Avin milk booth is haunted and the ghost is ferocious?"

"Yes, the ghost menace started after the light in the lamppost opposite the booth got fused. They have not changed the bulb and the ghost is running amuck, threatening people who pass through that patch when it is dark," said the old man.

"Is it only a recent problem after the fuse of the bulb?" asked Palani.

"Don’t you know ghosts avoid light and bright areas? Are you not aware the milk booth operates nowadays only during the daytime? You seem to be a policeman. Get the bulb replaced immediately and have some additional lamp posts in this short stretch. There would be no further problem," he answered.

"Surely, it will be done today itself. Thank you," replied Palani.

Wondering how such a simple solution from the illiterate man evaded the police, he proceeded to get the Superintendent removed to a hospital after informing his wife. He instructed the electricity authorities to do the needful the same day without fail.

Palani's wife, who was pacing in the hall at her home from early morning, heaved a sigh of relief when she heard the motorbike stop outside her house.

A couple of days later, there was a short report in the newspapers,

The menace of ghosts has been busted successfully!

Thanks to the adroitness of Inspector Palani

As a titbit, readers would be happy to know that the old man at the hut received from an unknown source an undisclosed sum as a token of appreciation for the help in the resolution of the problem.

 

23 comments:

  1. Well written and good resolution!

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  2. At the cost of four lives?!!
    Janardhan N

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  3. The story, in my humble opinion, is incomplete. The story doesn't say logically, as to why the commandos had killed each other and why the senior officer was behaving funny.

    Tempo well maintained but story did not seem to satiate questions.

    Enjoyed reading though.

    Thank you for sharing.

    Best wishes and warm regards
    Hemantha Kumar Pamarthy

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  4. What a gripping and thrilling story! Wish someone had met the old ma sooner and so many lives would not have been lost. Such a simple fix! Your ending has made me more curious about the ghost though. You have left the readers in suspense. Very interesting and spooky story.

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  5. Just read the story. Very interesting indeed. Sometimes simple solution evades so called educated people! Atin Biswas

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  6. The vivid description of the events using appropriate words makes the story thrilling. It also describes the steps usually taken in such cases as was done by the superintendent.
    In the entire chain of events, Inspector Palani maintained his calm and just reported/acted as per instructions.
    GOD shows the solution to the innumerable problems faced by mankind in some form or other.

    Thank GOD the Superintendent survived! Regards Sir

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  7. Good read with unanswered questions

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  8. I loved how the story is written. I kept wondering what this ghost was made of! I used to be so scared to walk in dark areas. Those memories came back while reading this story.

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  9. A hilarious take on the power of superstition and the importance of clear thinking. The story is a good example of how fear can cloud our judgment. The ending is perfect!

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  10. Good thriller but ended with so many questions. I thought people wanted the light to be back and so, the prank....but so many people dead...could not digest. ...Sandhya

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  11. Very interesting writing style , which keeps the readers visualize as they read to get involved in the story.
    You had left some for the guess work to the readers on what could have happened. That is nice too.
    Thank you for entertaining us

    Chitra

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  12. The disclaimer in the beginning had me sweating profusely and trembling in fear. The Gods and Goddesses who were peacefully resting were disturbed time and again with my SOS calls! The way you described the haunted situation had me thinking that the ghost will start charging a rent for all the scares they provided!
    Jokes apart, this was indeed a different type! We all have been disturbed by flickering bulbs, swinging curtains, creepy shadows of leaves swaying in the moonlit night!!!

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  13. Very interesting story. Indeed disturbed in the begining; but was sure the twist will be a positive and good end. Powerfully narrated each lines.

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  14. Sad that so many lives were lost.
    Who paid the old man money for sharing the solution?
    Even I had heard ghost stories from my grandmothers. Ghosts are indeed scared of lights.
    "Let there be light."

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  15. Interesting and thrilling story.

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  16. Subhashini SukumarJuly 12, 2024 at 1:09 AM

    WOW.
    Loved the Story and the End where in the old man got a token 👏👏

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  17. There are no ghosts… u have tried to show this in your own creative style! A lot left to the imagination of the reader.. Each one reacts in their own way.. killing themselves in fright or getting hysterical! A nice read .. a guessing game till the end. Rama Sampath Kumar

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  18. For those who see ghost in every situation,the resolution is beyond their comprehension. There is no set rule. In this case the flashing light was the remedy conveyed by the old man.
    Jagadeesan

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  19. Vintage Parthasarathy material! Yeh dil mange more!

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  20. Who was the killer? That's the mystery. Regards - Mahesh.

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  21. High tempo story that kept up the tempo, but younhave the readers to guess the cause of the gunshot deaths.

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  22. Suspense thriller till the end. I loved the story. Reading your stories in the midst of work is rejuvenating. Keep them going and there are millions to read. Keep rocking.

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